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Turtlesauce
09-08-2014, 04:09 AM
Since all the review threads are dead, I will be doing some.

I can review anything you ask me to, from books, movies, games, ERBs, FMERBs, anything.

Keep in mind I won't be using the general review pattern Sam using, I will just say what's good and what's bad, so yeah.

Throw stuff at me!

GonadTheNomad
09-08-2014, 07:27 AM
Review every REWF I've written.

And maybe one of the TJB's that I've put into audio form.

@Dumbledore
09-08-2014, 01:26 PM
Review my new rap battle Gandalf vs Dumbledore

Turtlesauce
09-08-2014, 01:30 PM
Review every REWF I've written.

And maybe one of the TJB's that I've put into audio form.

Links.


@Dumble ok sure

GonadTheNomad
09-08-2014, 04:47 PM
( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) (http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthread.php?10857-Replace-ERBs-with-Forumers)

Umbreon
09-08-2014, 05:11 PM
Any one of my songs i guess if you do song reviews. If not, then any of the batles i did back when i did them :p

Turtlesauce
09-08-2014, 05:23 PM
Next on review list (not in order):
Gandalf vs Dumbledore (FMERB)
Gunnut's hundreds of REWFs
Jirachibi Songs

B.S.B
09-08-2014, 06:02 PM
BSB vs SBS

Turtlesauce
09-09-2014, 11:59 AM
TURTLE REVIEWS: ​Gunnut vs Yellownerd feat. rangernumberx (http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthread.php?10857-Replace-ERBs-with-Forumers&p=375834&viewfull=1#post375834)

Gunnut first verse: All round a nice verse, I really like how the verses fit the beat, and nice references. There was a lack of "OOOO"-ness and memorability to it tho.

Yellownerd verse: Speaking of "OOOO"-ness, gah dawm, some parts in there made me LOL hard. Also, I think it's "imminent" not "eminent". They mean different stuff. Also, I think some stuff in there is just there for rhyme-sake.

Gunnut second verse: Pretty meh verse, loved some lines in there tho. It has more "OOOO"-ness

Ranger verse: Maybe the best verse in the battle. Filler lines here and there, sometimes it didn't fit to the beat, but the amount of references and good jokes makes this my favourite verse

Gunnut score: 8/10
YN score: 8/10
Ranger score: 9/10

sane
09-09-2014, 12:34 PM
can you review my time as a roleplayer in all 3

Turtlesauce
09-09-2014, 12:39 PM
can you review my time as a roleplayer in all 3


Sure. I can do this on the spot.

Mansion: Your best work. That character you made as Frank West was one of the most memorable in all my RPGs 9/10

Secret Agents: Who knew you could make Slender creepier than he was before? hsss 8/19

Forest: Well, Booker didn't really do much, you tried to hit kill a rabbit with a shoe, so yeah. 6/10

Overall: Play more characters that you can develop on, and make them your own.

sane
09-09-2014, 12:43 PM
frick yes I'm a genius

it's a meee

episode 4...ioo...