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Baldy Jr
01-09-2017, 03:30 PM
OK, so what we have so far:

People can write their own mini stories, with themselves as the protagonist.
Groups serve as different services for our "city" (OL is a Protection Agency, Pseudonymphs contribute to the arts, Deep Freezer is social settings, Apex=???)
Mods govern everything, but Juiz is both a group leader and coadmin, so there can be corruption and whatnot.
Each ministory can have its own plot, but an overarching theme overall.
Members have different abilities/traits??


That's all we've got so far, I think.

Turtlesauce
01-09-2017, 03:32 PM
What if APEX was like, the group that handled security and police?

Baldy Jr
01-09-2017, 03:41 PM
What if APEX was like, the group that handled security and police?

I was thinking like, police or some kind of money-handling? Like casinos or banks or something

Turtlesauce
01-09-2017, 03:42 PM
I was thinking like, police or some kind of money-handling? Like casinos or banks or something

What about mercenaries? Their tag is "Only the strong survive"

Baldy Jr
01-09-2017, 03:46 PM
What about mercenaries? Their tag is "Only the strong survive"

That's good, plus mercenaries are inherently shady.

Turtlesauce
01-09-2017, 03:47 PM
That's good, plus mercenaries are inherently shady.

Ok, so now that we got that out of the way, let's try and create our characters. I urge Umby, Rose and Ludwig to either create their characters themselves, or give us some descriptions for us to go on

EDIT: Also, each member could have a number instead of a codename. Ludwig would be I, Cascade II, Umby III, Turtle IV and Brine V.

I am totally stealing this from Kingdom Hearts :P

As for abilities, I guess each person can choose whatever abilities he wants, and if they don't, we just make them up for them

Baldy Jr
01-09-2017, 03:56 PM
Personally, I'm gonna stay true to the Sasori name and use puppets made from the corpses of banned members.

Turtlesauce
01-09-2017, 03:58 PM
Personally, I'm gonna stay true to the Sasori name and use puppets made from the corpses of banned members.

(I edited my last post)

That sounds awesome!

Create a character sheet, and I will as well. As soon as we have character sheets, we can post them in a Organization L Story: Character List, and there we can keep adding other characters, like Villain-Juiz and all that stuff.

Katz
01-09-2017, 05:22 PM
This sounds awesome! I think it's fair enough to request that I get the first story, and it's like the prelude to the real story, with a younger version of all of the group leaders creating their groups, and it kind of foreshadows Juiz being evil.

Turtlesauce
01-09-2017, 05:31 PM
This sounds awesome! I think it's fair enough to request that I get the first story, and it's like the prelude to the real story, with a younger version of all of the group leaders creating their groups, and it kind of foreshadows Juiz being evil.

There's no "first story". We'll all write them in parallel.

But the young group leader thing is pretty cool

Katz
01-09-2017, 05:35 PM
There's no "first story". We'll all write them in parallel.

But the young group leader thing is pretty cool

Ah. From what I had read, I thought that it was going to be a chronicle of stories, each told from a members' perspective.

An idea I thought would be interesting is that the story progresses the same, but it splits off and is written from different perspectives. Sort of like a round robin.

Baldy Jr
01-09-2017, 06:06 PM
The problem with a chronological story with multiple writers is the plot gets screwed up as authors shift.

Katz
01-18-2017, 09:43 PM
Bumparoo probably

We should get to work! :)

Baldy Jr
01-20-2017, 12:18 PM
Yeah sorry Dx

I've started school again and I'm absolutely swamped with work atm, I'm home for maybe 4 hours a day.

Turtlesauce
01-20-2017, 12:24 PM
Start with posting your characters! I'll do me later

Umbreon
01-21-2017, 12:40 PM
I'll do me later

Ill do u now ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

Katz
01-21-2017, 02:22 PM
Let's all use this format:

Name: (The name you'd like to have used for all stories. Just so there's no name change confusion.)

Appearance: (Should be a short but detailed description of what you'd want your character to look like. Can be based on anything.)

Character Traits: (A description of your character's actual behavior and personality traits.)

Power(s): (Your power or powers that your character will possess. Can be very regular abilities or unrealistic powers, my only request is that there's nothing OP)

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Name: Ludwig

Appearance: Shorter than average, but with a serious expression always. Hair artificially dyed to a dark purple, which is slicked back. Always wearing a dark suit with lavender purple tie.

Character Traits: Although looking devious and evil, Ludwig is actually just serious about his organization. He is trusting of most people, but is always formulating opinions deep in his mind. He has a soothing voice which is inviting to newer recruits. When it comes to most people, he has a generally tolerant nature. He only ever gets angered towards people who take advantage of or harm other people. When it comes to fellow members of the Organization, he treats them like brothers of his, and protects them higher than himself.

Power(s):

- Eyes: As long as Ludwig is looking someone in the eyes, he can figure out details about them. For instance if someone is nice and Ludwig is looking into their eyes, he may see that they are nice inside. It's limited in the fact that he can't just figure out everything out about someone by looking at them.

- Carbon Phantom: Not being a very physically strong person, Ludwig leaves his personal fighting to his Carbon Phantom. Its a being that comes out of Ludwig, which looks like a walking silhouette. It is invisible and cannot damage people who do not belong to Pseudonymphs, Deep Freezer, or Apex (meaning that not even other Org L people can see it or be damaged by it). To the people who can see it, it can attack hard and fast. The only downside is that Ludwig focuses mostly on controlling it when he's using it, and that people can attack the Carbon Phantom. Attacking it doesn't damage Ludwig, but it can prevent him from being able to use it.

Turtlesauce
01-21-2017, 02:24 PM
Let's all use this format:

Name: (The name you'd like to have used for all stories. Just so there's no name change confusion.)

Appearance: (Should be a short but detailed description of what you'd want your character to look like. Can be based on anything.)

Character Traits: (A description of your character's actual behavior and personality traits.)

Power(s): (Your power or powers that your character will possess. Can be very regular abilities or unrealistic powers, my only request is that there's nothing OP)

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Name: Ludwig

Appearance: Shorter than average, but with a serious expression always. Hair artificially dyed to a dark purple, which is slicked back. Always wearing a dark suit with lavender purple tie.

Character Traits: Although looking devious and evil, Ludwig is actually just serious about his organization. He is trusting of most people, but is always formulating opinions deep in his mind. He has a soothing voice which is inviting to newer recruits.

Power(s):

- Eyes: As long as Ludwig is looking someone in the eyes, he can figure out details about them. For instance if someone is nice and Ludwig is looking into their eyes, he may see that they are nice inside. It's limited in the fact that he can't just figure out everything out about someone by looking at them.

- Carbon Phantom: Not being a very physically strong person, Ludwig leaves his personal fighting to his Carbon Phantom. Its a being that comes out of Ludwig, which looks like a walking silhouette. It is invisible and cannot damage people who do not belong to Pseudonymphs, Deep Freezer, or Apex (meaning that not even other Org L people can see it or be damaged by it). To the people who can see it, it can attack hard and fast. The only downside is that Ludwig focuses mostly on controlling it when he's using it, and that people can attack the Carbon Phantom. Attacking it doesn't damage Ludwig, but it can prevent him from being able to use it.

This is great! Think you can add more on personality? So we can figure out how to write correctly for you

Katz
01-21-2017, 02:26 PM
This is great! Think you can add more on personality? So we can figure out how to write correctly for you

Added! I'm also going to get to work on your sig/avi.

Turtlesauce
01-21-2017, 02:27 PM
Added! I'm also going to get to work on your sig/avi.

Hella dope! After I'm done with studying I'll crank up my character as well

Baldy Jr
01-21-2017, 04:22 PM
Name: Sasori

Appearance: Average size for a young adult, with red hair and an almost porcelain, serene face. Sasori has existed for many, many years, yet he stopped aging a long time ago due to his becoming a Living Puppet. He is wearing steel body armor that protects his chest, with shoulder protectors that come out to points. He has long pants and boots, and a rack of scrolls on his back that contain his collection and allow him to summon them.

Character Traits: Sasori is first and foremost an artist. He believes true art is something that can last forever, and stands the test of time. Therefore, he became attracted to creating ageless puppets that would never fade or wear down like a painting or a song. He wandered for a very long time before being convinced to join the Organization, not necessarily out of a deep need to protect people, but because he knew it would lead him to powerful people who would make a fine addition to his collection. He is constantly seeking the perfect puppet that will truly last forever in pristine condition, but it is a goal he knows he will never truly achieve.

Power(s):

- Human Puppets: Sasori has a collection of puppets created from the bodies of banned members. They retain the powers they held in life, along with personal touches Sasori has added, such as hidden blades, poison bombs, etc. His prized puppet is his JohnGoopy Human Puppet, which can still use his Spammer Duplication technique.
- Spammer Duplication: JohnGoopy can replicate parts of its body exponentially to overwhelm opponents.
- Living Puppet: Sasori turned himself into a living human puppet, and as a result, has hidden weapons of his own. As long as his heart is transferred to another puppet, he can't die easily.