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L
07-26-2012, 12:56 AM
since there is one for rap battles, why not diss raps.
i want t do one on james holmes. for what he's caused, he more than deserves it!
heres what i got so far
Dis raps for hire
Episode 1: James Eagan Holmes
Dis raps are here!
James be ready to fear!
I leave Holmes in destruction!
When the base is thumpin!
Guess its time i have to lyrically tutor
This dead beat low life of a shooter.
How can ya live with yourself james?
Killing twelve people
A six year old, what? You in the hunger games?
Hair dyed red, you aint no Joker
Used tear gas! You know thats a choker!
Man, you don't have to wage war on a theater!
Take off the armor, wear a wife beater!
You had a good life, goin to college to neuroscience,
Don't you realize you could have been a scientifical giant!
Booby traps in an apartment? Thats taking it a little far!
Leavin the movie to go out to car
You drew pictures of the event, stick figures to represent people!
Repent, go to church;
Wait, they wouldnt want you under their steeple!
It didn't have to come to this, thats what therapists are for!
Instead you left explosives on the floor!
I can't rap for you, theres no argument
Hope death sentence is your final punishment!

Who's in?

Moonjik
07-26-2012, 06:02 AM
I am.

L
07-26-2012, 12:41 PM
is it good so far

07-26-2012, 12:42 PM
Epic Rap Man! I'm in!

L
07-26-2012, 12:51 PM
Thanks. i feel it is a bit short though... lets all add to it! any suggestions?
i also want to dis rap the Syrian army...
anyone want to help