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aDONIS
09-09-2012, 07:20 PM
I do Fmerb, and i do ERB. Ill start with the first battle

Tine For a review! the rating scale will be Out of 10. like HipsterSamuel does. Ill most likely follow the format he does XD


[spoiler:p9x5fifv]Beat: I liked how it started. And it was pretty catchy.
7/10

Vocals/Costumes: The voices Werent like the people. Lennon sounded like Pete, O'Reily sounded like Lloyd. Not their best impressions. The costumes werent BAD, But they werent good. You could tell they were the people. But barely. For a first Time. It was a pretty good shot. 4.5/10


Lennon 1: Not very good. No good disses, except maybe the George bush Line.
5/10

Bill 1: Again, not many good lines. I like the Yellow Submarine line. But it was predictable...
4/10


Lennon 2: Stepped it up here, but not THAT much. I liked the Kick Your Ass For Free line. And the rest of it was decent. Again. for a first time. Good.

6.5/10


Bill: Stepped it up A Lot. I liked that Shoe line. And the 'WE'LL DO IT LIVE" Definently better than the first one, but not enough for Bill to grab that win.

6/10


Lennon: 11.5/20
Bill: 10/20

OVERALL: 14/20[/spoiler:p9x5fifv]

Uprising
09-10-2012, 07:22 AM
Awesome job, could you review my FMERB Adam Sandler vs Barry Bonds?

aDONIS
09-10-2012, 05:01 PM
Alrighty Then :) Time for my first FMERB Review. Today ill be reviewing Uprisings Barry Bonds vs Adam Sandler
[spoiler:rtnr71cv]Adam 1:

Nice Movie references, along with the Cooperstown reference. Pretty good. nice rhymes. Way to start it off.


7.5/10


Barry 1: Again. nice job, but theres one line that may confuse people who dont watch baseball and Look at stats

I've headlined ESPN more times than you have bad movies, Non-sports fans dont know if He headlined a lot... Other than thaat, great.



7/10

Adam:
Its short, but good. he talks about some of his great movies. Nice way to Finish it off.

6.5/10


Babe Ruth:

Best Verse here by far, He has references to his nickname/s. He makes baseball references. Great. The Best line here to me was this:
Make like a Chicago Cub, and go cry in your den That was enough for The Great Bambino To clutch it.

8.5/10

Adam

14/20

Babe/Bonds
15.5/10


Overall

17/20

Great job Up[/spoiler:rtnr71cv]

Faker
09-10-2012, 05:03 PM
Can you review my Eminem vs Epic Lloyd?

Uprising
09-10-2012, 05:11 PM
Alrighty Then :) Time for my first FMERB Review. Today ill be reviewing Uprisings Barry Bonds vs Adam Sandler

Adam 1:

Nice Movie references, along with the Cooperstown reference. Pretty good. nice rhymes. Way to start it off.


7.5/10


Barry 1: Again. nice job, but theres one line that may confuse people who dont watch baseball and Look at stats
[quote]I've headlined ESPN more times than you have bad movies, Non-sports fans dont know if He headlined a lot... Other than thaat, great.



7/10

Adam:
Its short, but good. he talks about some of his great movies. Nice way to Finish it off.

6.5/10


Babe Ruth:

Best Verse here by far, He has references to his nickname/s. He makes baseball references. Great. The Best line here to me was this:
Make like a Chicago Cub, and go cry in your den That was enough for The Great Bambino To clutch it.

8.5/10

Adam

14/20

Babe/Bonds
15.5/10


Overall

17/20

Great job Up[/quote:3vq5121a]
Thanks for the review! And I think anybody who isn't big on baseball won't get half the battle.

BKTurner47
09-10-2012, 06:05 PM
Review my TeenNick Announcer Girl & Drake & Josh vs Rod Sterling battle!

aDONIS
09-10-2012, 06:05 PM
Adoni Singing: I know you love me, i know you care. *camera zooms in on Adoni* Just shout whenever *Adonis turns around* And Ill be th-AAAAHHHHH! What the fu-... oh... another review.... Fine. what are we doing this time. Oooh a spike battle. *Adoni faces camera* Dont worry Spike. I wont pull a Zoroark and make fun of your battle. :lawl: :lawl: :lawl:




[spoiler:1hqrkg86]Eminem 1: Ok, some nice Lloyd references. And some Nice Eninem references. Nicely done Marshall.... Nicely done...
7/10

Lloyd 1: Y-Y-Y-Y-Yeaaahhhhh Lloyd! That was a great Verse. nice bars, And he used Lloyd and Em terms. Nice way to write Spike!

7.5/10

Eminem 2: No offence. But i feel the first 2 lines had an excuse to over-curse. He said he could curse and win, and i felt you took the easy way out there.
*Camerman: *Cough Cough, you just said you wouldnt Make fun of it Cough Cough*
Adoni: Your fired. Gtfo. Anyways. The verse was good. Just it lacked a little bit.[/spoiler:1hqrkg86]
6.5/10

Lloyd 2: Lloyds back with a new L-Verse! I loved that. Hahaha. And the ?ncore line. Great job. Lloyds our winner!

9/10




Eminem 13.5/20
Lloyd 16.5/20



Overall: 18.5/20

Top-Hattington
09-13-2012, 04:22 PM
No one has formally reviewed my Al Capone vs. Tony Montana yet... Would you like to do the honors?

Spars
09-13-2012, 04:37 PM
My Chuck Norris vs Chuck Testa battle..?

Erblover98
09-13-2012, 05:02 PM
Can you review one of mine

aDONIS
09-13-2012, 06:57 PM
No one has formally reviewed my Al Capone vs. Tony Montana yet... Would you like to do the honors?


Indeed I would :D

aDONIS
09-13-2012, 06:58 PM
List:

Timmy turner
Top
Spartica
Erblover (which battle?

Erblover98
09-13-2012, 07:09 PM
List:

Timmy turner
Top
Spartica
Erblover (which battle?
Just do which one is the best

SuperRapz
09-20-2012, 05:18 PM
Please do my Rucka Rucka Ali vs Hopsin battle.

Uprising
09-20-2012, 05:52 PM
Could you please review my Eminem vs Steve Miller battle?

aDONIS
11-20-2012, 05:44 PM
Im back with these

aDONIS
11-20-2012, 06:12 PM
TIME FOR Tony Montana vs Al Capone by Top Hattington

Al Verse 1:

This was a badass way to start it off. The Scarface line and the nutjob line were great.

9/10


Tony Verse 1:

Ohhhh Shit! the great verses keep coming! The Meatball line was fking AWESOME.


8.5/10



Al Verse 2:

I Have nothing to say except. Top. you are a genious. Ca-Pwned! Great! Almost a Perfect score!

9.5/10


Tony Verse 2:
Thats the way to finish off a battle. Tony almost made a comeback!




This was my favorite battle to review



Memorable Quote:
I started from where you ended: Nothin'! Now all of Chicago is my own!
I'll send you home in a body bag back to Cuba! You just got Ca'Pwned!

Top-Hattington
11-20-2012, 06:16 PM
Thank you, Adonis. It's a pleasure to finally get that review, and it's a pleasure to know that my battles bring smiles to my readers' faces :D

TheHenchGuy
11-22-2012, 03:33 PM
My Kony vs Hood battle?

rangernumberx
11-22-2012, 04:52 PM
Can you please look at my final battle of series 1 (Sherlock vs Bond vs RayWilliamJohnson vs GLaDOS)? Thank you.

B.S.B
11-26-2012, 06:04 PM
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6991 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6991)

aDONIS
12-23-2012, 05:29 PM
ill do all of these tonight

aDONIS
12-23-2012, 05:39 PM
Hench's Kony vs Hood


[spoiler:9y4vrp2y]Kony Verse 1:
Eh... It really didnt hook me in, I didnt see any bad lines... but none were amazing.... To be honest, I just didnt like it...
5/10

Hood Verse 1:
It starts to pick up a bit, a couple good lines in there. Its a pretty Good verse...
6.5/10

Kony Verse 2:

The lines get really good here. I Dont know who Marion is, but I Figured its someone from Robin Hood.
7.5/10


Hood 2:

:/ I didnt see that many rhymes here, The firetruck line was good. but there were no punchlines or references that I noticed...

6.5/10


Overall:

Kony: 12.5/20
Hood: 13/20

Not the best battle, but it wasnt bad... Focus on rhyming a little more... IMO, people seem to prefer the Line 1 and 2 rhyming format, other than 1 and 3 rhyming, yknow?


Memorable quote:
Enough! Children, dispose of this wannabe, grown-up Link!
Don't know why you're wearing green,
Marion told me your favourite colour's pink!

Thats all for Now!![/spoiler:9y4vrp2y]