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BobbyBobber
12-07-2012, 06:24 PM
Have something like a peom, rap, story, FMERB, Dis Rap, etc. that other members seem to overlook? Well, if you do, post the link here and your friends in Havok will be sure to check it out!

I'll start. Ive got a rap/poem called End, here: viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=15 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=15) , that no one seemed to read. If you guys would check it out and leave criticism, that would be greatly appreciated.

Adonis
12-07-2012, 07:03 PM
my story collab between me and Chi


viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7412

12-07-2012, 07:07 PM
The link's not working for some reason. I can't paste it. But my Doomsday story.

Uprising
12-08-2012, 12:07 AM
The rap battles on my battles page are almost never commented on. I hope to have one out by next week Friday.

Epic Doctor X
12-08-2012, 07:22 AM
Me and YN's rap battles. Wrote one, not a single comment

YellowNerd
12-08-2012, 07:26 AM
It's sad.

BobbyBobber
12-08-2012, 10:18 AM
Me and YN's rap battles. Wrote one, not a single comment
Link?

YellowNerd
12-08-2012, 10:20 AM
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=7201 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=7201)

Epic Doctor X
12-08-2012, 10:47 AM
viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7325 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7325)

Please just read it, post what you think, and wht i can use in it

MajesticSearawr
12-08-2012, 06:55 PM
Everything I've ever posted in Writers Corner, but Havok reads it usually just noone else does...

BobbyBobber
12-12-2012, 07:04 PM
viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=15 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=15)
My new rap, "Write" it'll be greatly appreciated if you'd read it and comment. And if you dont like it, please tell me and state why. Thank you!

Batman Heisenberg
12-13-2012, 12:38 AM
My Fan made battles aren't read or voted on much, could you guys comment and vote on them?

BobbyBobber
12-13-2012, 05:48 AM
My Fan made battles aren't read or voted on much, could you guys comment and vote on them?
Could you provide a link?

Batman Heisenberg
12-13-2012, 12:16 PM
My Fan made battles aren't read or voted on much, could you guys comment and vote on them?
Could you provide a link?
Absolutely.
First one:
http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6828

Second One:
http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6887

Batman Heisenberg
12-13-2012, 07:26 PM
That would be great if you guys could do that!

Uprising
12-20-2012, 01:07 AM
Could somebody please comment on my new battle? It has kinda disappointed me that it has gotten nothing.

Dion
12-20-2012, 03:17 PM
It would be nice if you guys checked out my CreepyPasta Reviews. :3

Wumbo
12-20-2012, 04:18 PM
Got a "Let's Build A Madden 13 Team" Thread in The Video Game section.

Dion
12-20-2012, 04:25 PM
Got a "Let's Build A Madden 13 Team" Thread in The Video Game section.
But I don't play Madden 13. D:

MajesticSearawr
12-20-2012, 05:21 PM
FUCK MADDEN 13 THEY KILLED THE FRANCHISE MODE!

Wumbo
12-20-2012, 05:23 PM
[youtube:vow3n6j1]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvTNyKIGXiI[/youtube:vow3n6j1]

MajesticSearawr
12-20-2012, 05:26 PM
I have a shit ton of stories...lots of them have not been commented on. This annoys me for a variety of reasons. GO READ THEM AND COMMENT AND CRITICIZE...be mean please I need mean harsh criticism so I can get better.

My dream is to be a published author and the best way for me to do that is to get people to review my stories...so please help.

BobbyBobber
01-05-2013, 03:46 PM
Awkward moments when no one replies to my post...
viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=45 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=7103&start=45)

MajesticSearawr
01-05-2013, 03:54 PM
I'm legit like depressed nobody responded to my last story update.

Zero
01-05-2013, 05:07 PM
my kids never sleep can anyone support me there? lol

BobbyBobber
01-05-2013, 05:14 PM
my kids never sleep can anyone support me there? lol
No idea, lol.

SuperRapz
01-05-2013, 07:36 PM
Someone should revive my Super Battles! thread.

MajesticSearawr
01-05-2013, 07:43 PM
link??

SuperRapz
01-05-2013, 07:46 PM
http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=90

Epic Doctor X
01-10-2013, 03:59 PM
viewtopic.php?f=18&p=263162#p263162 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=18&p=263162#p263162)

Please?

BobbyBobber
01-16-2013, 07:14 PM
I'd be awesome if you guys could read/comment on this: viewtopic.php?f=45&t=8815 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=8815)
Lose Yourself by Eminem is finished.

Wumbo
01-16-2013, 07:29 PM
Guise.

Read and comment on Nate's story, Escapement. 'Tis badarse.

MajesticSearawr
01-16-2013, 08:38 PM
Dawwwww thanks wumbo lol

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 03:54 PM
If you guys could join my Hunger Games, I would love that!

MajesticSearawr
02-11-2013, 04:14 PM
Read my shit...like I say always

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 04:19 PM
Read my shit...like I say always
Join my Hunger Games!

Adonis
02-11-2013, 04:39 PM
I Wish I remembered this thread, i stopped writing my story because no one read it

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 04:42 PM
Please, I need at least fo' more peoples to join,

Adonis
02-11-2013, 04:43 PM
Ill join

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 04:43 PM
Ill join
Say so on the page please. Thanks BTW.

Adonis
02-11-2013, 04:46 PM
I signed up

Noremac2100
02-11-2013, 04:54 PM
Hey everyone. I wanted the story to take off on its own but screw it. If you all could read my immortal series that'd be great and give feedback on that thread. We have a lot of familar faces on staff me included as well as lilychi and yackers.

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 05:09 PM
I signed up
Yay! Anyone else wanna join? Let me know in the hunger games thread!

Batman Heisenberg
02-11-2013, 06:30 PM
Plese, I Need more people for my hunger games.

Noremac2100
02-18-2013, 10:35 PM
Hey everyone I know I've said this before but it would mean a lot to me if you checked out my Immortal series in Writers Corner. New episode every Sunday.

Just check them out. Give feedback. Make suggestions. Discuss. Stuff like that. I would greatly appreciate it.

Epic Doctor X
03-16-2013, 07:02 PM
Could someone here be kind and ask a question, so me and LAWL can get this going?

viewtopic.php?f=32&t=11580 (http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=11580)