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Shadows of ERBoH Extended Preview

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The sounds of The Scavenger's leader, ELSa's, footsteps hushed the entire room. A jolt of panic shot between the three members, and even Spartica broke into a nervous sweat. ELSa's "death stare" didn't break as he personally looked at everyone in the room.
ELSa: "Gentlemen."
Everyone (Excluding ELSa): "Y-yes, Squad Master ELSa?"
ELSa was known for scaring people to death, just by talking in a hush.
ELSa: "Isn't it a little too early in the morning to make a fool of yourselves?"
His whisper was more powerful than Spartica's yells. I even trembled a little.
Everyone (Excluding ELSa): "Y-yes, Squad Master ELSa."
ELSa: "That'll be all. Now Admiral Real, I expect you'll bust their asses ten times as harder as yesterday?"
Spartica: "Y-yes, Squad Master ELSa."
And as if without control, all of us were in our outfits in the burning hot field.
Spartica: "ALRIGHT LADIES! IF YOU DON'T WORK AS HARD FOR WAR AS YOU DID YESTERDAY THAN YOU'RE ABOUT AS DEAD AS MY GREAT AUNT ANNIE!"
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  1. Katz's Avatar
    Yes I realized the grammatical error in ELSa's dialogue, it has already been fixed.