Spiderman Vs The Hulk - Song Complete / Video being made

OK peeps.. I want feedback before i start shooting video.. cause the song has to be finalized first!.

https://soundcloud.com/ramon-santiag...-vs-hulk-rough



Here are the lyrics...
Typos and all, and uhh i improvised in there some during the recording LOL...

FEEDBACK NEEDED!.



SPIDY
Hey banner whatcha gonna do,
I ve already won this battle with you
All i have to do is not piss off you,
and then youll not go all jolly green giant and rip ya shirt off.
You think your a bad ass a Physiscist what you need is a psychotrist
So Ill tell you what your gonna do. Why dont you hang on spideys web for a few.
and chill out and learn to control that rage, Before spidey puts you on the boituary page.


Banner
Carefull kid watch what you say, My names bruce banner until i rage.
You better watch what you do, best controll that mouth too , or you get to meet the hulk too.
He is big, hes mean and he will crush you to smithereens.
In this battle words will matter, your sarcasim will just make me mader
So go on have you fun and snooty words, and youll get what you deserve.
Just wait you Hipster fad Your gonna make hulk mad.

Spidey
Who you calling hipster man, Just cause my costume is rad
Dont you get all mad, hey are you ok? your starting to shake..
Ohh that right if i piss you off, Youll tear all your clothes off..
Well common go ahead and rage, Ill even battle you in a steel cadge.
Tell me hulky, whats your power do besids make a body builder from a nerd dood.
Now you may get mass, even a big ass, now hold on... my spidy senses say that something srinks away
Thats right, Teenie, its weeny, its a microsized ...........

HULK
RAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hulk smash, hulk Kick your ass
and discard body in trash...
battle me, masked freak
hulk crush you 1 2 easy.
You better flee, spidieeee
Use your web, shoot me
hulk use it to hang you by head.
Wrap you up, Hang you up,
You hulks new punching



Spidey
Easy there jock with down syndrome,
Try and catch me when i swing out the window
I climb walls, i shoot webs.
All you do is smash with you head?
Hulk,why dont you stomp in off or atlest
put some clothes on. Or some shoes on your feet.

In this battle you can not win
cause i am teh amazing spiderman!




Hulk
SMASH, Crash, MY GREEN FOOT Up Your ass
Hulk rage, Hulk brave, hulk smash you between a telephone page.
HUlk massive, kicks asses,
hulk eat you like molasas.
*NOM NOM*

in dis battle,,, Hulk no loose even your costume beat you!
Hulk Big, You kid, ask you mom what hulk did.
when you go back to web, mama will tell you to call hulky dad.

That's freaking awesome! Can't wait to see the actual video!

DUDE!!! STAY ON THIS FORUM! We need talented people like you. That was the best Soundcloud I've EVER heard. (No offense Sunkist.) I'm Spike. Nice to meet you!

And I'm Redbugman97 :)

I couldn't really understand the Hulk's verses, but it kinda sounded like a legit ERB. Nice job man. ;)

Yeah on the hulk part... I figured the subtitles would work..

I just setup my green and blue screen...

Heres a test i did with the blue screen..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTmTLrWH2ec


Thanks all.. Ill keep you posted all Thanks for the awesome encouragement!!!!
I was a bit nervous about posting it.

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Originally Posted by dimentox

Yeah on the hulk part... I figured the subtitles would work..

I just setup my green and blue screen...

Heres a test i did with the blue screen..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTmTLrWH2ec


Thanks all.. Ill keep you posted all Thanks for the awesome encouragement!!!!
I was a bit nervous about posting it.

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Awesome!

I was thinking about cutting it off after the first hulk verse.... And trash the rest.
That would put it more in time with standard erbs.

Well, their battles are getting longer, so I think you'll do just fine! :D

True..

LOL working with blue/green screen you figure out cameras that auto adjust suck... I had bought a actual cam corder a cheapo hd one for like 30 bucks... it shoots like crap lol.. So i am back to using my cannon rebel t3 (DSLR camera) its not made for video but can shoot it.. LOL and it shoots better :P

Ohh well ill eventually find a good one.

Ha great rap battle! I'd say longer is better, just try to clean up the audio a little for the hulk ;)

Keep up the good work, can't wait to see the final video!

-Rob

Fucking amazing. V_V No, seriously. That was incredible. Sure, the grammar in the post needs work, but the song itself is epic.

That was awesome!

:o That was AMAZING!

That... was... amazing...

The rap battle seems epic, but you should edit the Hulk verses to make him more understandable. Couldn't hear a thing. But that's just me.

That was SO AMAZING! You did great!