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Bad grammar? You're the one who put a comma before "just yo motha," and not a semi-colon,Quote:
Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt
You didn't even put any punctuation marks after each of your lines, what are you on?
"Maybe I can leak the forums your name is Shitface?" what the fuck?
Dude, even you know that you're grammar's messed up,
You can't rap, you are crap, you don't have a soul,
You fap before you take a nap, look at how I roll.
Yes you roll your weed well who gives a fuck
Rhyming rap with crap is a tired method it flat out sucks
You're alone with the punctuation mark thing nobody cares
Fuck your ponies I'm going with care bears
Black Magic? What? Rainbow magic refused?
You're whole entire demeanor is just overused
And honestly you remembered how to spell just now
Death and ponies... Just... Wow...
So it's the rap tourney callbacks, and I wasn't invited?Quote:
Originally Posted by God of Kaoss
Well I'm here now, so let's get the party started.
Please stop it, God of Grammar Nazi Kaoss,
None of us care, so now will you bog of?
That's right, these rhymes, they all come in pairs,
And leave your name out of this s**tface, 'cause nobody cares.
Just go away now, you're not rolling,
And you should leave the internet, your mother's calling.
So, a challenger appears?Quote:
Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt
Well, here it is, all your greatest fears.
Put down your own weed, and start tending your garden,
Because your really need to get a life now, beg your pardon.
Ponies? Care bears? The new fandom war,
Well I'm conquering you, because I came and I saw.
See this? You've lost, like you will next time,
I really respect you, but sharpen your rhymes.
Fighting two guys at once? This ain't no juggling act.
Your rhymes are whack, and it's a fact that you're gonna get smacked.
NumberX marks the spot on my rap treasure map,
But when I open up your chest all I see is crap!
You say you're a dark rebel, but I'll stop your insurrection
Like a lightsaber deflection, so if there are no objections,
Then the jury finds you guilty of a dumbass interjection,
The sentence is a life in the humiliation section
Of my Sh**ty Rapper Prison- I'm the warden, got the keys.
If you wanna be free, get on your knees and say "please,"
But I can't guarantee you'll get something out of me-
But if you beat me in a throwdown then I'll let you out for free,
Though I doubt you could beat me in any sort of battle-
I've seen that your lyrics are a bunch of useless prattle,
And your Pokemon suck! So you should just run and tattle-
I'm the Ground to your Poison, Ranger, so just skedaddle.
this kid ain't worth sh*t he can't rapQuote:
God of Kaoss
he got his my little pony figures stuck up his ass
wigga can you find yo dick, grabbed a piece of hair thought it was it,
until piss started coming out that shit
do tha' world a favor and go to hell
the only way you can hang wit' me is if you hang yo'self
you like to gag on sh*t since you a faggit you should stop
his head get popped like the cherry he'll never pop
You call yourself DI-Z
Others refer to you as DI-CK
Whats up with you getting in everyones bi-z?
you come off as a selfish prick
so go back to the north pole ghetto santa clause
before I tear you to shreds with my rapping claws
I may not know you very well, thank jesus
But I already wish that you would leave us
Oh, c'mon you cant be seriousQuote:
Originally Posted by Edgar Rice Burroughs
with that name i even think my shits more curious..'
you are a ugly little prick
and you cant even compare to his dick.
dude, you may think your puny rhymes scare me
but as soon you realized you already took an arrow to the knee
so better dont face me again,
or i wont spare you next time.
[quote=Kira Yagami]Oh, c'mon you cant be seriousQuote:
Originally Posted by "Edgar Rice Burroughs":3n0zwfk8
with that name i even think my shits more curious..'
you are a ugly little prick
and you cant even compare to his dick.
dude, you may think your puny rhymes scare me
but as soon you realized you already took an arrow to the knee
so better dont face me again,
or i wont spare you next time.[/quote:3n0zwfk8]
Says the person who got his ass kicked by a 13 year old kid!
You can't use Rem as a cheat this time you're losing the bid
Don't compare him to DI-Z or you'll be DO-NE
Newbie you may want to get more creative can't you see?
Oh wait you're too busy referencing an arrow in the knee
Blame the doctors I say! Everybody's having heart attacks oh wait, that's you
You became my least favorite character on the show since episode 2
I watch yo ass in dubs watcha gonna do?
It's not Kira Yagami it's fucking light
Stupid fanboys this really isn't much of a fight
[quote=Lohuydahutt]Says the person who got his ass kicked by a 13 year old kid!Quote:
Originally Posted by Kira Yagami
You can't use Rem as a cheat this time you're losing the bid
Don't compare him to DI-Z or you'll be DO-NE
Newbie you may want to get more creative can't you see?
Oh wait you're too busy referencing an arrow in the knee
Blame the doctors I say! Everybody's having heart attacks oh wait, that's you
You became my least favorite character on the show since episode 2
I watch yo ass in dubs watcha gonna do?
It's not Kira Yagami it's fucking light
Stupid fanboys this really isn't much of a fight[/quote:6qsddc6a]
It's been a long ass time since I've been a part of this game
Take a page from Fort Minor and "Remember the Name"
It's Prozach mother f**ka, but I ain't no antidepressant
I'm gonna whoop yo sorry ass, you punk adolescent
Good luck trying to step up to my unparalleled wit
By the way, you smell that? Cause yo rhymes are sh*t
I'll be honest, I don't get this whole anime strife
I'm not into that sorta thing. You see, I have a life
Maybe next round you'll actually start making some sense
Although I doubt it, cause in my eyes, you're pretty damn dense.
oh well, brave rhymes from a puny little bitch,Quote:
Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt
this just gave your destruction a nice twitch.
you think, you are a challenge? dont make me laugh
you can counter as you want, there wont be a second half.
a little hypnotoad addict, aint that cute
this stupid kid doesnt even deserve my boot.
befor you try to correct my name,
it looks like your is even worse to blame.