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Originally Posted by DogNut
Is that some sort of story? Up until now, I've only reviewed raps. I think this would be an interesting challenge.Quote:
Originally Posted by DogNut
Can't wait to read your review of Santa vs Moses!
It should be out tomorrow, maybe today.Quote:
Originally Posted by Cubie Da Huuuuuudge
Here's General Gliscor's Edward Cullen vs. Albert Wesker. Next is Moses vs. Santa Claus.
[spoiler:2adczu15]Edward Cullen-Round 1: I don’t like this guy, but he does have some impressive lines in this verse. The last line is probably the best one in the verse. 8/10
Albert Wesker-Round 1: I can imagine him sounding awesome in an actual rap battle for some reason. Still, I actually don’t think this verse has as many good lines as Cullen’s first verse, but it still has some good ones, like the Bella Swan. 7.5/10
Edward Cullen-Round 2: The umbrella line is alright. The other lines aren’t quite as good as that line. 7/10
Albert Wesker-Round 2: This verse wins the battle for Wesker. The last line is awesome, and the earlier line about AIDs isn’t so bad either. 8/10
Overall: This was one of your better battles. I had a lot of fun reading it. The style of the battle was cool too. Well done. 8/10
Final Results:
Edward Cullen: 15/20
Albert Wesker: 15.5/20
Total Score: 38.5/50[/spoiler:2adczu15]
Here's my review of Moses vs. Santa Claus. Next is Uprising's Wikipedia Random Article Battle.
[spoiler:3j3t2uwr]Beat: I think this is a pretty impressive beat. It sounds Christmas-y, yet it’s still very intense sounding. Some parts of the beat are pretty catchy as well. 9/10
Impressions and Costumes: We don’t what any of these guys sound like, but I thought Snoop Lion’s interpretation of Moses was hilarious. The elf costumes aren’t that great. They don’t have knees, I can tell that he’s just standing on his knees. Still, Snoop saves this category. 8/10
Santa Claus-Round 1: The first line is pretty good, but then it weakens a bit until the North Pole line. More weak lines, then the decent list line and a good ending line. 8/10
Moses-Round 1: Unlike Santa’s first verse, this verse is good the whole way through. The best line is the mass line. This verse is close to perfect. 9.5/10
Santa Claus-Round 2: The Elves are alright, but the only really good line they had was the GPS line. Santa’s lines really saved this verse though. 9/10
Moses-Round 2: Snoop references himself at the beginning in a rather clever way. Again, a clever verse the whole way through. Moses may be my new favorite ERB rapper. 9.5/10
Overall: I’m going to miss ERB in the next few months, but this was a great way to say good-bye for a bit. They have a celebrity guest star who does not disappoint, good lines from both sides, just one of my favorite battles. 9/10
Final Results:
Santa Claus: 17/20
Moses: 19/20
Total Score: 62/70[/spoiler:3j3t2uwr]
Yeah! Did you ever give any verses a 10/10?
Yay I'm next. I agree that Moses may be the new best rapper from Season 2.
I think he gave Bonapart's second verse 10/10Quote:
Originally Posted by Cubie Da Huuuuuudge
(why do I remember that? XD)
I believe I did. In order for a verse to get a 10, I need literally EVERY line to impress me. So far, Bonaparte's second verse is the only verse to do that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt
Well it's hard to go THAT wrong with 4 lines XDQuote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
That's why Napoleon/Napoleon is best battle
What? For 4 awesome lines? XD I mean honestly the rest of the battle is only on par with Billy Mays vs Ben Franklin XDQuote:
Originally Posted by YellowNerd
Here's Uprising's Wikipedia Random Article Battle. Today, I could possibly get a lot of reviews done. Next is Uprising's Snoop Dogg/Lion vs. Elvis.
[spoiler:2altgg29]Carlos Bocanegra: The first line of his is alright, the rest aren't as good. I can tell this guy was not intended to be a possible choice for the winner. 6.5/10
Aeacus: I think it's funny how he keeps bringing up the fact that he is a god. It gets a bit repetitive though. Aside from that, I sort of liked the Alexander the Great line. 7.5/10
Captain Britain: I wasn't overly impressed with this verse. The lines aren't bad, but they aren't too memorable. 7/10
Ray Lewis: It has a weak start, but the verse gets better as it goes on. He wins this battle, but not by much. 8/10
Overall: It doesn't look like you had that much material to work with, but you seemed to pull it off. You certainly had the facts, but it could still be a funnier battle. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Carlos Bocanegra: 6.5/10 (equivalent to 13/20)
Aeacus: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20
Captain Britain: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Ray Lewis: 8/10 (equivalent to 16/20)
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:2altgg29]
I might be able to really get a lot done today. Here's Uprising's Snoop Dogg/Lion vs. Elvis. Next is God of Kaoss' Leonardo da Vinci vs. Leonardo the Turtle.
[spoiler:2nzw8lyb]Snoop Dogg-Round 1: The line about the King and his throne is where it really starts to pick up. From there, most of the lines are nice. 8/10
Elvis Presley-Round 1: This is a great verse. The song references are, for the most part, very clever and funny. Good job. 9/10
Snoop Lion-Round 2: This verse is a step down from the earlier round in this battle. The jokes aren’t as funny as last time. 6.5/10
Elvis Presley-Round 2: The Heartbreak Hotel line is alright, but this verse is also not as good as the earlier verse. It’s still alright though. 7/10
Overall: The first round is a lot better than the second, but that doesn’t mean it’s bad. I really liked this battle, I think it’s one of your best. 8/10
Final Results:
Snoop Dogg/Lion: 14.5/20
Elvis Presley: 16/20
Total Score: 38.5/50[/spoiler:2nzw8lyb]
Thanks for the reviews! And for the Wikipedia one I really didn'thave a lot to work with. I sort of made Aeacus have a huge ego think he's the most important god alive.
And my brother was actually Snoop Dogg in the other battle.
Um. Can one simply request that you review a rap battle and you'll do it after a while? Is there anything you request in return? If anything, I'd be rather happy to get my Beowulf VS King Arthur (link in signature) reviewed from someone else's eyes (although I'm rather sure how it will be commented). Would I need to do something in turn? In that case, what?
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Originally Posted by Platinum
Get your battle reviewed
Enjoy the review -_-
SIMPLE! go to literal reviews and just look for someone else to review it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Platinum
Could you review my collab with Adonis, Bob the Builder vs Spongebob Squarepants and my Ozzy Osbourne vs Superman Rematch?
No, you don't have to do anything in return. I'll put it on my list if you want, but it could be a while before I get to it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Platinum
Yes, to both.Quote:
Originally Posted by Uprising
I have a few days off school now, so I'll be reviewing more frequently, I hope. Here's God of Kaoss's Leonardo da Vinci vs. Leonardo the Turtle. Next is Timmy Turner's Mark Chang vs. Zim.
[spoiler:1pze7o3o]Leonardo the Turtle-Round 1: A few of these lines were impressive. I'm talking about the Ooze line, the Shredder line and the last line. 8.5/10
Leonardo da Vinci-Round 1: The last supper line is good, and it gets better near the end of the verse. I don't think it's quite as good as the turtle's first verse though. 7/10
Leonardo the Turtle-Round 2: The third grader line is pretty good. The rest of the lines are average. 7.5/10
Leonardo da Vinci-Round 2: The first and last lines are great, and are almost enough to win it for da Vinci. Not quite enough, but a good verse anyway. 8.5/10
Overall: This is a very enjoyable battle. I'm glad that you made jokes about the facts instead of just listing them. Really good job. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Leonardo the Turtle: 16/20
Leonardo da Vinci: 15.5/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:1pze7o3o]
Here's Timmy Turner's Mark Chang vs. Zim. Next is Johnny the Homicidal Maniac vs. Gaz Membrane.
[spoiler:24d5qqkh]Mark Chang-Round 1: This verse isn’t extremely impressive, but it does have some very good lines. Especially the floorboard line and the Irken d*ck line. 7.5/10
Zim-Round 1: Most of the beginning of this verse was weak, but the ending is a big step up. Not quite as good as this battle’s first verse though. 7/10
Mark Chang-Round 2: The last 2 lines of this verse are surprisingly good. Good job with the jokes in this verse. 8.5/10
Zim-Round 2: This verse is a little disappointing, honestly. The lines are as well thought out as they could have been. 6/10
Overall: This battle is a bit better than most of your others, I think. This battle has more clever lines and funnier jokes than most of your other battles. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Mark Chang: 16/20
Zim: 13/20
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:24d5qqkh]
And the first time one of my battles gets reviewed... Soon...
I already requested on our behalves.Quote:
Originally Posted by Adonis
Here's Timmy Turner's Johnny the Homicidal Maniac vs. Gaz Membrane. Next is Adonis' Burger King vs. Ronald McDonald.
[spoiler:2orxfo5p]Johnny the Homicidal Maniac-Round 1: The Jhonen Vasquez line started well, but I didn't like the end of that line. Aside from that, I sort of liked the ‘'female version of Emo Crys'‘ line. 7/10
Gaz Membrane-Round 1: I'm not a huge fan of this verse myself. It seems like some lines could've been said by anyone to anyone. 6/10
Johnny the Homicidal Maniac-Round 2: The Coke can line is OK, though a bit odd. The rest of the lines are alright. 7/10
Gaz Membrane-Round 2: The last line is very good. Not enough to win the battle, but still a good line. 7.5/10
Overall: A lot of the lines in this battle didn't really have much to do with either rapper. Try just making more jokes about the rappers themselves and their franchises. 7/10
Final Results:
Johnny the Homicidal Maniac: 14/20
Gaz Membrane: 13.5/20
Total Score: 34.5/50[/spoiler:2orxfo5p]
This is a bit close to my review, but, could you change mine to my ERBoA #2: Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara? Instead of Johnny Cash vs. Axl Rose.
6 more to gooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Originally Posted by FoolMeNever
Can you review my santa vs scrooge battle
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Originally Posted by Erblover98
Change mine to Marvin the Martian vs Keroro Gunso?
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Originally Posted by TheHenchDoctor
I apologize for the lack of reviews. I've had a busy holiday season. Here's Adonis' Burger King vs. Ronald McDonald. Next is FoolMeNever's Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara.
[spoiler:36ri4z9m]Burger King-Round 1: I wasn’t too impressed until the last line. The last line was absolutely hilarious. 7.5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 1: The last few lines about buns and spit were both good lines. Better than Burger King’s first verse, but not by too much. 8.5/10
Burger King-Round 2: Again, one line really stands out from the rest. This time I’m talking about being fresh. Another great line from him. 7.5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 2: This verse isn’t all that great. The last line is the only one that saves the win for him. 7/10
Overall: I think this was a good battle. Some of the lines were really great, while others weren’t. Still, those few amazing lines save this battle. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Burger King: 15/20
Ronald McDonald: 15.5/20
Total Score: 38/50[/spoiler:36ri4z9m]
Also can you review Santa vs Chesire cat instead of Wily vs Stewie? XD
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Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt
Here's FoolMeNever's Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara. Next is the Extreme Collab of Hulk vs. Tyson.
[spoiler:ikfl6juz]Sosuke Aizen-Round 1: The beginning is mainly just facts and the jokes aren’t that funny. The ending, however, really improves this verse. 8/10
Izaya Orihara-Round 1: The ‘’golf ball’‘ line is pretty funny. The last line is too, but it’s not as good as Sosuke’s first verse. 7.5/10
Sosuke Aizen-Round 2: This verse has a good beginning, an average middle, and a good ending. Nothing incredible, but still good. 8/10
Izaya Orihara-Round 2: The skull line is good, and again, the last line is good. Not enough for a win though. 8/10
Overall: Some pretty good references. None of the verses are completely exceptional, and some of them aren’t really jokes, but I did really like the jokes that were made. 8/10
Final Results:
Sosuke Aizen: 16/20
Izaya Orihara: 15.5/20
Total Score: 39.5/50[/spoiler:ikfl6juz]
I am so excited for my reviews.
Here's the Extreme Collab Hulk vs. Tyson. Next is WWEFan vs. Sunkistluva.
[spoiler:2utcn0x5]Mike Tyson-Round 1: I like the Tyson chicken line, and the two lines that follow. This is a decent verse, but the jokes could have been thought out better. 7.5/10
Bruce Banner-Round 1: This verse is hilarious. The ears line is awesome, as is the b*tch line and the last line. It’s just funny. 8.5/10
Mike Tyson-Round 2: Again, the lines have potential, but aren’t executed quite well enough. I do, however, like the bike line and the living steroid line. 7.5/10
The Hulk-Round 2: These lines aren’t as funny as Banner’s lines, but they are still clever. The best lines are the Punch-Out references. 7.5/10
Overall: Some of the lines could have been worded better, but that doesn’t keep this from being a great battle. The lines are often hilarious, and when it does something right, it does it really well. 8/10
Final Results:
Mike Tyson: 15/20
Bruce Banner/The Hulk: 16/20
Total Score: 39/50[/spoiler:2utcn0x5]
I agree with everything you had to say on the Extreme Collab one :D