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Awesome and thanks! :DQuote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
I'm very sorry about how late this is, but I said I would get it out today, so I will. Bugs Bunny vs. Bear Grylls.
[spoiler:279dpv9p]Bugs Bunny-Round 1: A very good verse. I'm mainly impressed with the Peter Cottontail line, the roach line and the last line. Really clever verse. 8.5/10
Bear Grylls-Round 1: The first line and the last line are good, but everything in between is just average. It doesn't beat Bugs' verse. 7.5/10
Bugs Bunny-Round 2: Once again, very good verse. The two best lines are the survivalist line and the excellent Man vs. Wild line. 8/10
Bear Grylls-Round 2: I think it beats his first verse. The second half of the verse is all very good. A nice comeback, but not quite enough to earn him a win. 8.5/10
Overall: Great battle. I enjoyed a huge chunk of it for sure. The lines were very well thought out, which shows you gave it a lot of effort. 8/10
Final Results:
Bugs Bunny: 16.5/20
Bear Grylls: 16/20
Total Score: 40.5/50[/spoiler:279dpv9p]
Thanks! I'll try to make them better!Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Now I'm reviewing sunkistluva and Roy49's collaboration battle of Charles Manson vs. The Big Bad Wolf.
[spoiler:lyedp9bc]Charles Manson-Round 1: The beginning is good. The 3 little pigs line is pretty clever. Not a bad verse. 7.5/10
The Big Bad Wolf-Round 1: The only line is really liked in this verse was the Hanson hairdo line. This verse wasn't quite as good as Charles Manson's. 6.5/10
Charles Manson-Round 2: The National Dog Show line was decent. The last line is OK, too. Alright, I guess. 7.5/10
The Big Bad Wolf-Round 2: The shave line is pretty good, and the last line is good too. A good verse, but doesn't earn him the win. 8/10
Overall: This one is OK. It's not as good as your other battles, but it does have some very clever lines. I'd say it was fairly decent. 7/10
Final Results:
Charles Manson: 15/20
The Big Bad Wolf: 14.5/20
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:lyedp9bc]
yay! Im next! For like 5 days in a row lol
Could you also review my Harry Potter vs. Luke Skywalker Part 2? I want to know what you think of it, compared to my first one.
Time to review Spartica4Real's Bill Cosby vs. Tosh.0.
[spoiler:9sapd8fo]Tosh.0-Round 1: The opening viral line is good. Another good line is the blowing the directors line. Good verse. 7.5/10
Bill Cosby-Round 1: Once again a decent first line. The last line is also good, and there are a few OK lines in the middle as well. 8.5/10
Tosh.0-Round 2: I'm talking about everything else said. The Moo line is funny, and his last few lines aren't bad either. Pretty good overall. 8.5/10
Bill Cosby-Round 2: The plow line is great, the rest is OK. A close battle, but I think he loses. 7/10
Overall: You really did well with this battle. Possibly my favorite of yours so far. Just keep putting tons of thought and effort into every single line you put and you can keep this up. Here's the 40 you wanted, you earned it. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Tosh.0: 16/20
Bill Cosby: 15.5/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:9sapd8fo]
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lieutenant Roy
can u review my vesta diss rap?
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by TinSanE
Yes! I got a 40! Finally! Thank You Samuel!
Sorry for not reviewing on Thursday or Friday. I'll try to get a few out today. First is Spartica4Real's 1st Dis Raps For Hire.
[spoiler:2cfce5gn]Dis Rap: I won't grade the intro because it's so short. A few decent lines in this. The best are the D*ck tastes like Strawberries day, 69, Warrior, and Never Gonna Die Alone lines. It could be better, but it's still pretty good. 22.5/30[/spoiler:2cfce5gn]
Woah. That was short-er than expected XD But, tis' okay. Can you review my newest James Bond vs Austin Powers?
Sure, and since it was so short, here's another. Your fifth Dis Raps For Hire.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartica4Real
[spoiler:1xq03siy]Intro: This will be rated out of 10. The Dis Rap will be out of 20. This intro is really funny. I laughed a few times reading it. 8.5/10
Dis Rap: The Lebron James lines at the beginning are pretty good. The inflatable toy line is also pretty good, as well as the flaws line. The rap isn't as good as the last one I reviewed of yours, but it's still pretty good. 14/20
Total Score: 22.5/30[/spoiler:1xq03siy]
Thanks! And if you get a chance to do my other dis rap review tonight, do you think it's allowed, if you review my dis rap # 7 right after 6?
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartica4Real
Now to review Spartica4Real's 6th Dis Raps For Hire.
[spoiler:2h766ozd]Beat: I already reviewed this beat, so it gets the same rating as before. 8.5/10
Dis Rap: Again, I won't review the intro because it's so short. You didn't much information about this guy, but you nailed this Dis Rap for sure. The life line, the disgrace line, the jail line, the 4Real line, the spartan kick line, the taking sh*t line and the last line make up a fabulous Dis Rap. 18/20
Total Score: 26.5/30[/spoiler:2h766ozd]
Thank you!
when are you doing another?
When you use more capitals at the beginning of your sentences.
Sha-correct.Quote:
Originally Posted by Rocket-Man
Later today.Quote:
Originally Posted by Colonel B.S.B
SHABAM!Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
And now for the final review (for now) of Spartica's Dis Raps For Hire, #7.
[spoiler:nqv80jfr]Intro: Very weird. I don't know where you got the idea to make him a penguin, but it was funny. My favorite part is the ''TROLOLOL'' laugh, and the Caps Lock makes it funnier for some reason. 7.5/10
Dis Rap: The decoy line is clever. I like the burning Black Ops copies line. I also like the troll lines. Not your best Dis Rap, but still good. 14/20
Total Score: 21.5/30[/spoiler:nqv80jfr]
Thank You ;)
NO PROBLEM HEH HEH DERRRP
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Time to review EpicLloyd's 6th Dis Raps For Hire.
[spoiler:2atkevgi]Intro: I don't get how he finds information on a juice box container, but that's probably the joke. It looks awesome when he splits himself into 2 and sucks him through a straw. And I like the martini part a lot for some reason. 8/10
Beat: A little slow. Slower than the other 5, and that kind of bugs me considering the last one was so fast. This beat changes a lot in the middle. It's pretty intense at parts. 7/10
Dis Rap: Lots of great lines in this one. At the beginning there's the free-load line and the living with yourself line (which is my favorite line of the rap). When he says all the words that rhyme with James, it just sounds awesome. The mooching DNA line is great. The best-sounding part of the rap is ''Just make a move on this mooch...'' and everything that follows until ''...whatever you choose.'' 8.5/10
Total Score: 23.5/50[/spoiler:2atkevgi]
Woah...
I'm now going to review ZeMasked's Bandana Dee vs. Goomboss.
[spoiler:3a1t3c14]Goomboss-Round 1: The first line is a good way to start the battle. The stealing cake line is a nice Kirby reference. An OK verse. 7/10
Bandana Dee-Round 1: It's not great in the beginning, but starting with the bush line, the verse really starts to get good. 8/10
Goomboss-Round 2: The puffball line is good, but the last line is just awesome. Probably the best line of the battle. 8.5/10
Bandana Dee-Round 2: The action commands line and the Megaton Punch lines are good. I would say barely enough to beat Goomboss. 8/10
Overall: I really enjoyed this battle. It was really close too, I went back and forth on who I thought won, which usually means it's a great battle. 8/10
Final Results:
Goomboss: 15.5/20
Bandana Dee: 16/20
Total Score: 39.5/50[/spoiler:3a1t3c14]
:D Thanks!(Ahhh, I was so close of getting a 40.)
:omgrd:Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Wut.Quote:
Originally Posted by God of Bronies
I like it.Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeMasked
Now I'll review ZeMasked's E. Gadd vs. Professor Oak.
[spoiler:uu81udna]E. Gadd-Round 1: The Poltergust 3000 line is expected, but funny. The grandson line is awesome. The tree line is also good. Nice verse. 8.5/10
Professor Oak-Round 1: The glasses line is great. The ending two lines are also very nice. 8.5/10
E. Gadd-Round 2: The pokeballs line is decent. The other lines aren't quite as good as that line. 7/10
Professor Oak-Round 2: The Egads line is funny to me for some reason. The other lines aren;t bad either. Just barely beats E. Gadd. 7.5/10
Overall: I thought this battle was excellent. I think it beats the other battle of yours I reviewed. I think this one deserves a 40. 8.5/10
Final Results:
E. Gadd: 15.5/20
Professor Oak: 16/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:uu81udna]
Thank you! :)
When you have the chance, Rick Astley vs Eduard Khil?
Alright.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sergeant Spike
Sorry about there being no review yesterday. I'll try to put out two today, but I might be busy. Next up is Spartica4Real's John Cena vs. Mike Tyson.
[spoiler:1a0e1je7]John Cena-Round 1: The first line is pretty good. The attitude adjustment line and the last line are good too. 8.5/10
Mike Tyson-Round 1: The lines about wrestling being fake are good. I also like how you put in a line about him playing Fred's dad. 8.5/10
John Cena-Round 2: Not very creative, but I guess it's pretty funny. I just wish you had come up new lines. 7/10
Mike Tyson-Round 2: The I'm on a boat line is funny, and true. The Jason Bourne line was kind of random though. 7.5/10
Overall: I think this might be your best battle yet. There are so many good lines in the whole thing, and I can tell your putting more effort into it. 8.5/10
Final Results:
John Cena: 15.5/20
Mike Tyson: 16/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:1a0e1je7]
Thanks! I kind of like this battle the best SO FAR. You should see my next battle that Im going to release soon! I've been working on it for a while, and Ive been making sure I love every line. It will be very good!