Hey, I see that your schedule for reviewing is PACKED, but could you review my Ben Franklin vs John Madden battle?
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Hey, I see that your schedule for reviewing is PACKED, but could you review my Ben Franklin vs John Madden battle?
Sure, but you might have to wait a bit.Quote:
Originally Posted by SUPrising
That's fine, I've got loads of time.Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Time to review Roy49's Samus Aran vs. Iron Man.
[spoiler:3vew8ptq]Samus Aran-Round 1: The beginning is a great start. The charge beam line is decent, and the last line also is great. 8.5/10
Iron Man-Round 1: The line about mistaking her for a man is good because lots of people do think Samus is a man. The whistle part is hilarious, I must say. Another good verse, but not quite as good as Samus'. 8/10
Samus Aran-Round 2: The Mother Brain and last line are awesome lines. Another very impressive verse. 8.5/10
Iron Man-Round 2: Once again, the ending two lines to this verse are awesome. I think Iron Man just barely lost. 8.5/10
Overall: Awesome battle. All four verses were very entertaining to read. This is probably your best battle yet. You should be proud of this one. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Samus Aran: 17/20
Iron Man: 16.5/20
Total Score: 42/50[/spoiler:3vew8ptq]
:D I'm glad you liked this battle. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
My new Ronald mcDonald vs Harland Sanders? Please?
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartica4Real
Thanks! I think your gonna like it! Alot ;)
Review my Cerebros vs Darkrai rap battle!
Alright.Quote:
Originally Posted by Timmy Turner
Will my review be out today?
Yes. Here it is.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sergeant Spike
[spoiler:15yj9eog]Bowser-Round 1: The lines about Bowser's minions (like Bullet Bills, Bob-ombs, King Boo and Petey) are clever. The extra lives line and the Inside Story line are also good. 7.5/10
King Louis XVI-Round 1: This verse is awesome. The 1-Up line, the bomb line, the paper line, the warp zone line, the le guillotine line, all of these are great lines. 9/10
Bowser-Round 2: Round 2 includes everything else. Bowser doesn't do great in the back and forth, but in the end, he gets out some good lines, like the French French Revolution line and the last line about his mom. 8/10
King Louis XVI-Round 2: The ''work the pole'' line is great, and the lines about him having no life are good too. The last line gives him the win. 8/10
Overall: I liked this battle a lot. Lots of good lines from both sides. Jeez, I'm giving out lots of 40s lately. Whatever, you deserved this one. This battles one of your best. 8/10
Final Results:
Bowser: 15.5/20
King Louis XVI: 17/20
Total Score: 40.5/50[/spoiler:15yj9eog]
Thanks! :D It was one of my favorite battles to make.
When will my Cerebros vs Darkrai review be released?
Look on the first post Timmy, he does one a day..
OK.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartica4Real
Scarecrow told me to review something of his. I picked Ronald McDonald vs. Harland Sanders.
[spoiler:m2vlhutn]Harland Sanders-Round 1: I didn't really get these lines to be honest. They didn't make a lot of sense to me. 5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 1: This is better. I like the 7 Up line and the last line. Even though there wasn't much here, I still liked it. 8/10
Harland Sanders-Round 2: I like the Pixar line and the fast food race line. Better than the first verse. 8/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 2: The *ss kicking 99 cents line is OK. I think Ronald McDonald won this battle. 6/10
Overall: There are good lines in this battle, but I have to say, this battle was WAY too short. I really think you should increase how long each line is, as well as the amount of lines. Then I think these can be really good. 6.5/10
Final Results:
Harland Sanders: 13/20
Ronald McDonald: 14/20
Total Score: 33.5/50[/spoiler:m2vlhutn]
Could you review my Elite Beat Agent vs. Ice Climbers?
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by ZeMasked
Now it's time to review Roy49's 2nd Harry Potter vs. Luke Skywalker.
[spoiler:3a2cdtrh]Luke Skywalker-Round 1: The beginning of good lines starts with the tiny wand lines.It only gets better with the ''blemishes of a pig'' line and the Return of the Jedi line. 8/10
Harry Potter-Round 1: The Birds and Bees line is good. The Donald Trump line was hilarious, and the line about Luke's dad wasn't bad either. He also gets an extra half point for killing Jar Jar Binks. 7.5/10
Luke Skywalker-Round 2: The Astronomy line was pretty good. I also think it's funny how he calls Harry's wand a twig. 7.5/10
Harry Potter-Round 2: Just when you think Harry's lost this battle, the opening text line happens and everything turns around. The Yoda sex line and the first kiss line give Harry the comeback win. 8.5/10
Overall: I liked your first one, but this battle beats it by a mile. It's really long, which is great, and the jokes are just smarter. I'm a big fan of this battle. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Luke Skywalker: 15.5/20
Harry Potter: 16/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:3a2cdtrh]
Could you please review my Ash Ketchum vs Charles Darwin battle?
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by God of Bronies
I feel EPIC. :cool:
I was trying to make this battle better than my first one. I'm glad you really liked it.Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Now I'm reviewing SaneButStrange's Vesta Dis Rap.
[spoiler:12lzb7bj]Intro: Not as funny as some of your other ones. I'm honestly not the biggest fan of this intro. 6/10
Beat: The beat is pretty cool. Maybe a little slow, but still, very cool sounding. I could see this being the beat of an actual Dis Rap. 8/10
Dis Rap: It takes a while to get good, but when it gets good, it gets really, really good. Starting with the test line, it really picks up. I really like the line about your name, and the trophy line is really good too. SuperRapz's verse is awesome. The pushing daisies line and the One Direction lines are awesome. The flat line was really awesome. Overall, just awesome. 9/10
Total Score: 23/30[/spoiler:12lzb7bj]
Cool review.
Now I'm reviewing Spartica4Real's James Bond vs. Austin Powers.
[spoiler:12xh02kx]Austin Powers-Round 1: I liked the 187 line a lot, but I don't think the other lines are so great. 6/10
James Bond-Round 1: The Mini-Me line is good, and a few of the other lines were pretty good as well. Definitely better than Austin's. 8/10
Austin Powers-Round 2: This verse wasn't great. I didn't really like any of the lines, to be honest. Sorry. 5.5/10
James Bond-Round 2: The last line about his cat's d*ck was pretty good. It kind of seems like you were trying to make Bond win this one. 7.5/10
Overall: I don't really think this was one of your better battles. It's not as good as any of the other battles you've made this season, but it's still a pretty good battle. 7/10
Final Results:
Austin Powers: 11.5/20
James Bond: 15.5/20
Total Score: 34/50[/spoiler:12xh02kx]
I'm never giving you a break, aren't I? I'm really sorry for that... but would you be interested in reviewing a Season 2 battle of your choice? (Besides the two you already reviewed... obviously)
Sure. Don't be sorry, I enjoy reviewing your battles.Quote:
Originally Posted by Roy49
I'm glad you enjoy them. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Now I'm reviewing Sergeant Spike's Rick Astley vs. Eduard Khil.
[spoiler:hnv0s2s4]Rick Astley-Round 1: The Soviet Russia line is clever, and a few of the lines that follow that are also clever. The last line just sounds cool in my head. It's a really nice verse. 8.5/10
Eduard Khil-Round 1: The first chunk of this verse is all great especially the line about his birthday. The ''schooled'' line is awesome. I can't say either of these verses was better than the other. 8.5/10
Rick Astley-Round 2: This verse wasn't as good. It has some good lines, like ''you wouldn't get this from any other guy'', but I wasn't extremely impressed. 7/10
Troll Face-Round 2: The shanky outfit line was funny. The ending lines are also pretty good. This was a decent verse. 7.5/10
Overall: This battle was really, really good. It taught me things that I didn't even know about the rappers and then made me laugh with lines about them. One of the best on the forum. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Rick Astley: 15.5/20
The Trolls: 16/20
Eduard Khil (alone): 8.5/10 (equivalent to 17/20)
Troll Face (alone): 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:hnv0s2s4]
Now I'm reviewing SUPrising's Ben Franklin vs. John Madden.
[spoiler:3evv8zxd]Ben Franklin-Round 1: Not bad. I can tell you knew a lot about the two rappers because there are some smart lines in here. 8/10
John Madden-Round 1: The line about slaves was pretty smart. Other lines once again show you really researched for this one. 7/10
Ben Franklin-Round 2: Really nice verse. The beginning and ending lines are awesome, maybe the best of the battle. 8.5/10
John Madden-Round 2: Like Ben's second verse, the first and last lines are very nice. Just about as good, I would say. 8.5/10
Overall: This battle had some very smart jokes, and I could tell you really put effort into it. I enjoyed this battle, keep it up. 8/10
Final Score:
Ben Franklin: 16.5/20
John Madden: 15/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:3evv8zxd]
Nice! Oooh. I can't wait for mines. :D
Thank you very much for the good score, I put a bit of research into Franklin but knew a lot about Madden already. Could you review my most recent one that I did with Spike, Thor vs Percy Jackson?Quote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by SUPrising
My review is today, correct?
Hopefully. I'm kind of busy, but I'll try to make it now. If not, tomorrow.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartica4Real
Alright, here it is. Spartica4Real's Ronald McDonald vs. Harland Sanders.
[spoiler:3acvq7m6]Ronald McDonald-Round 1: The fast food *ss whooping is an OK line, but the McNuggets line is awesome. This verse is OK. 7/10
Harland Sanders-Round 1: I love the line about McDonald's playhouse. The ending line about his ''burgers'' is pretty good too. 7.5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 2: The last line about his ''McD*ck'' is really funny. But that's all for this verse. 7/10
Harland Sanders-Round 2: Most of the lines in this verse are OK, but not amazing. It's barely enough to give him the win. 7/10
Overall: This battle was decent enough. I wouldn't call it one of your best, but it does have some really funny lines. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Ronald McDonald: 14/20
Harland Sanders: 14.5/20
Total Score: 36/50[/spoiler:3acvq7m6]
can you review my Nerd vs Troll battle? it is my first for my series and i wanna know how it is. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by sunkistluva