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    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger help

    I'm a newbie at making rap battles, and would like help for the second verse of this rap battle.

    EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!!!!!!!!!

    PAUL REVERE
    VS
    THE LONE RANGER!

    BEGIN!

    PAUL REVERE:
    Listen, my children, and you shall hear
    Of the masked desperado that was beat by Paul Revere
    What's up with Tonto? I can't William Tell
    For not knowing English, he sure speaks it pretty well
    That mask on your face is a bad disguise
    We know who you are, John Reid, what's there to hide?
    Your movies are too violent, but you can't handle gore
    I'll come at you, and your friend, a French and Indian War!

    LONE RANGER:
    Well, the people gotta know me, much thanks to Disney
    Go tell your Minutemen to come at me - wait, they seem too busy
    When my enemies see me, they know they're in danger
    Against the last known survivor of the Texas Rangers
    You're very illiterate, never learned how to read
    And you tried to go to Concord, but you didn't succeed
    Your ride stole all the credit for Dawes' idea
    Just like you stole Sam Adam's spot on his own brand of beer




    I'm trying to come up with more lyrics, but I'm drawing a blank.
    I know I want to include something about how The Lone Ranger only uses silver bullets, and his catchphrase Hi-yo Silver, Away!
    Any suggestions?
    Last edited by JWinslow23; 11-03-2013 at 11:59 AM. Reason: Typo.
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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    Wow, this is really good so far! I'll have to see whether I can come up with anything to help you out. Are you planning on the last two verses having 4 lines or 8?
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    Never mind, I figured out what I would do dor the last verse.

    Oh, and Hi-Yo Silver isn't in there, and they have 4 lines.
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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    That was actually very good, which is hard to do for being a "newbie"

    Clearly Epiclloyd in disguise

    jk jk

    suggestions:


    Edd Ed and Eddy vs 3 Stooges
    Last edited by Facilier; 11-16-2013 at 11:17 PM.

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    PAUL REVERE:
    You always back down when your chances are hopeless
    So why are you taking cheap shots and thinking you won't miss?
    You'll be Kemo-sorry that you battled with me
    And you're just about as worthless as your shows on TV

    LONE RANGER:
    Hey, I'm not worthless, I have bullets of silver
    And what does it matter I'm not a stone cold killer?
    Paul Revere, this is a beating that you'll never forget
    So why don't you just ride your horse way off into the sunset?
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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    I should find a beat for this and rap it, if you don't mind...
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    I don't mind at all! Just credit me for the lyrics, don't sell the song, etc.
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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    Where will I be able to see it? Can you post the YouTube video here when it's done?
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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    Quote Originally Posted by JWinslow23 View Post
    I don't mind at all! Just credit me for the lyrics, don't sell the song, etc.
    Well, yeah, of course, I'd just do it for fun on my alternate account.
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    WHO WON?
    WHO'S NEXT?
    YOU DECIDE!

    EPIC RAP BATTLES OF XeRNEAS!
    Paul Revere vs. Lone Ranger:
    Who would win?

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