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    This is really interesting man, I don't know how you do it, but keep it up!


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    Episode 3 : Chateau de Versailles

    Music for Ambiance

    Place d'Armes, 78000 Versailles, France
    November 1, 2014
    3:00 AM


    Dude, Are you even sure this is the right place?

    Yeah, man! It says right here, Chateu de Versailles, come on man, don't pussy out on me.

    I'm not pussying out man, It's just that, France isn't really safe right now since the Ogrelord ruled it.

    Man, Fuck that, Adventuring is where it's at, and there wasn't a huge difference anyway! He just swamped up the place a bit, and added some few laws but other than that it's the same france.

    I don't know man, i just don't feel safe, but fine, I agreed to this and i can't back out now.

    The two slowly examine the place.

    Man, This place sure is dusty, Ever think they use this anymore?

    Doesn't look like it, plus it isn't as swampy as the ones near the Tower, so i guess the Ogrelord didn't focus on this place much.

    He must have been scared!

    Thud, Thud, Thud, Ting! Crash!

    W-what the hell was that!?

    Sounds like it came from the 2nd or 3rd floor, Let's check it out.

    Alright, I got your back.

    The Two slowly went up to the second floor

    H-hello? Anyone else here?

    No one's answering, might have been the wind

    The windows are closed!

    Thud, Thud, Thud

    Hush, lower your head, turn of your lights and stay close to me

    Fine fine..

    The two crawled slowly toward the stairs

    I think he's up there in the third floor

    He might be.


    The two went up the third floor

    Oh right, dude, you got your gun?

    Oh yeah, I brought both, here.

    Alright, let's go quietly

    The two walked quietly and examines the place

    No one seems to be here.

    The ground shakes as Thuds are heard

    Holy shit, hide!

    Okay, i think we're safe.. let me go check ahead, stay here

    The other one goes to check one of the rooms

    Fuck man, leaving me here outside, too damn dark.

    Bright green lights are shown in a far distance

    H-hey, man? Is that you?

    Thud, Thud, and the lights move closer

    T-this isn't funny man.

    The lights move faster as it goes closer

    F-fuck man

    Bang bang bang, The dude shoots and it did nothing

    Shit shit

    Boo.

    Gaaaah!

    The other dude runs out from the room and shines a light on the other dude

    What's going on- HOLY SHI

    The light shows the Ogrelord ripping the other dude in half with his bare hands

    What the fuck did you do!?

    The Dude shoots at the Ogrelord, but the bullets just bounce off, The Ogrelord walks towards the dude

    No! Get away from me!

    Playtime's Ogre.

    The Ogrelord grabs the dude and throws him

    What the fuuu

    The Ogrelord dashes and spears the dude to the ground and continues to lay down some punches on the dude

    Get out of my swamp!

    Killing two innocent dudes just to prove you own the place? Didn't you do that to the entire country?

    Oh it's you again, Clem, Finally we meet again.

    The Ogrelord stands up and faces Clem

    Get the fuck out of my swamp!

    Episode End



    Character List
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    Gentleman (Top-Hattington)
    Powers : Currently Unknown
    Allegiance : The Underdogs

    The Blue Shadow (PokEdx)
    Powers : Ability to shapeshift, Teleport, Mass teleportation
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Lawlzor (Lawlzor)
    Powers : Currently Unknown
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Mason (SuperRapz)
    Powers : He can corrode anything he wants, Poison/Corrosive powers
    Allegiance : Havok

    Ogrelord (Wumbo)
    Power : Light speed, Bulletproof body, and superstrenght
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Clem (Clemi)
    Power : Can turn weapons and himself into steam
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Neutral



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    The "Boo." part elicited an actual physical reaction out of me.

    It's that good.

    Now the party's over

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    Same here man, same here. Also, you're really good at picking ambience music, it kinda feels like I'm reading a movie sometimes. It's very strange, but I get caught up in the story in a completely different way, so please continue with that ^^


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    well done for reading
    i specifically said
    NO FANFICTIONS WITH ROCKET. ROCKET WRITES HIS OWN.
    mom said its my turn to have mod back

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    Rocket you single handedly saved the site. Never thought it would be you but congratulations

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rocket, King of Pickles View Post
    well done for reading
    i specifically said
    NO FANFICTIONS WITH ROCKET. ROCKET WRITES HIS OWN.
    Grow up.

    It's a good story, and YN doesn't have to ask for anyone's permission for characters in his works, because artistic license is a thing. Deal with it, and stop acting like a petulant child.
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    Wumbo doesn't hit the Bulls-Eye. He takes the whole animal down.
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    @ SaneButStrange, anyone who steals coconut water: SHOT! Anyone who tries to destroy canada: SHOT! anyone who pisses off Wumbo: SHOT!
    Quote Originally Posted by DoctorZ
    Wumbo sold his soul to the devil for his rugged good looks and unparalleled martial arts ability. Shortly after the transaction was finalized, Wumbo roundhouse kicked the devil in the face and took his soul back. The devil, who appreciates irony, couldn't stay mad and admitted he should have seen it coming. They now play poker every second Wednesday of the month.
    Quote Originally Posted by Yackerz
    Wumbo's so good looking, his looks kill. But it's not murder... It's genocide
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    Wumbo's girlfriend lost her virginity to another man...

    He got it back.
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    Wumbo, im gonna change my name into Wumbo's Bitch if thats ok with you.
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    I LIKE IT FOR THE SEXY MEN
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    OMG I REMEMBER WEBKINZ.

    I HAD A FROG NAMED "STICKY"

    BUT YOU DONT SEE ME GOING AROUND BY THE NAME STICKY DO YOU?!
    But that is what we call you.

    Just not when you're around.
    Dude..

    Don't go there man..

    Sticky died when I was 7.. I forgot to feed him for like a year.

    Ever since then I cry every night and have nightmares of frogs.

    He shouts "WHY DIDNT YOU LOVE ME SPARTICA???!!!!?!?!?!"

    And I cry more.
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    Episode 4 : The Calm before the Storm

    Ambiance

    Somewhere...

    Eden... I made this place for peace, A place for people like us, There are no destruction, No chaos, It is completely cut off from Earth, Where chaos now rules.. This Eden.. The trees, the sky, the sun... the clouds, even the little birds, They are here and alive because i want to keep them safe from them, The imperfect beings that think they are like us but uses their powers for evil! I see no hope in Earth's future. These groups.. Anti-Brotherhood, Brotherhood, Havok, Underdog, Why do they fight for they are all the same? What do you think they gain? Why not just live as they were back in the day? I need answer to my questions, they are only destroying themselves!

    The winds... they are different, are they not Paradox?

    Paradox hurriedly closes his book and turns around

    Oh.. Hana, I didn't know you were back, How was earth for you? Did you enjoy your little visit?

    There was chaos everywhere, destruction, almost the entire world is in ruins.

    Just as what i have seen, Is there anything else you could tell me about the current Earth?

    During the chaos.. I've seen glimmers of hope, people that tries to live the way we lived back in the day, the days of peace and prosperity, Where everyone treated everyone as equal..
    Paradox, there might be still hope for the Earth, I could sense the people are striving to return the earth to the old one, but the corrupted powers of the others have been over powering the weak ones and they can't do anything, That's sad! Why can't we go there and help!?


    We can only watch and hope that the Earth changes it's own fate.. May it be destroyed by it's own people, or saved by the ones you said that were giving hope to others. We can not interfere, There are grave consequences to people who meddle with fate.

    Oh.. and speaking of grave.. I found this kid.

    What? You brought someone from earth here?! This place is a haven for people like us and who knows if he's corrupted as the others!

    Before you say anything bad, look at him.. Poor kid has been beaten up like a chew toy, he's barely alive, I think he's in a coma but God knows for how long..

    Hana lifts the boy and carried him towards Paradox and slowly lays the boy down near his feet

    Don't you have the slightest care?! He may be one of us! Even if he's a mere human we can't just stand here and watch him die! Can't you spare some sympathy?

    Fine, Put him in the infirmary, Call in the nurses to tend to him.. and remember, This is Eden not an orphanage, We can't take anyone else, alright?

    That's acceptable, Now come here little guy, we'll get you fixed up as soon as possible

    Hana carries the boy and heads toward the infirmary

    You just let her do that, Paradox? I don't know whether to be proud of you or not.

    F-father.. You're here? I thought you never leave your Tree?

    The Tree will always survive as long as there is hope in our hearts, and i see a lot in that Girl's heart, Let her do what she wants, she's responsible enough, I trust her.

    But Father, The humans, they are not trust worthy! They are evil, corrupt and do nothing but cause chaos!

    And yet we let Earth survive after all these years, If you think they are so evil, Why didn't you destroy the earth back then?

    B-because I-

    Because you found her, When you found her she was a mere little girl.. crying in the middle of a ruined earth, looking for her teddy bear and yet you, you could of destroyed the earth back then for all the evil they have done, but no, You saw her and you saw hope, you saw a beautiful future in that little girl, That even though the world they are in is slowly crumbling, the girl's only problem is that her teddy bear is missing, That's what made you decide that the earth was worth keeping alive, Son, You are the most Good hearted person i have ever met, Don't let what earth looks like now corrupt your hope.

    I... but.. the humans.. even the people like us, they are destroying the world...

    Son, Let me show you something, It was during the first month of the invasion..

    His Father opened his palm and a light appeared showing the past

    D-dad, you have to get up! T-the evil men are coming, dad! please..

    S-son.. my legs.. they are hurt too much, you have to go on.. without.. me..

    Please dad! I don't wanna be alone..

    Hey you! Kid! Stop right there! Move and we'll shoot!

    S-son, j-just go.. run and get to cover as fast as you can.. live.. for me

    But dad!

    Don't you two go making rivers of tears now, alright? I'll help you two.

    W-who? W-wait! You're on of those freaks!

    Hey! I may be a freak, but i'm a freak that can help you!

    B-but we're humans, w-we hurt your kind! Why would you save me and my son?!

    Because Sir, I was human as well, and i understand, Now stand back and let me handle this..

    The light disappeared and Paradox looked at his father

    T-that kid.. that one who saved the two..

    Was the one Hana saved, and you saved Hana, I told you, Have a little hope, Not everyone from earth is evil, Have some faith, I believe this will all be over and we can all live peacefully again.
    Son, don't let your mind corrupt your heart.


    Thanks father.

    It's my job, I'm going back to my tree, be careful now.

    The man left and heads to the Giant Tree in the Center of Eden

    Your father is as nice as you are, Other than you two, I don't know anyone else with hearts as pure as yours.

    Oh, you're back, you need to stop sneaking up on me like that.. and yeah, My father is a good man, I hope i can be like him.

    When you saved me, You were already like him, oh and about the kid, We found this in his pockets.

    Hana gave Paradox the USB

    A USB, i never thought i'd see one again, heh, Alright, have you seen what's in it?

    Yes... A voice recording... of the kid

    Well, Let's take a listen

    Paradox summons up a laptop and plugs in the USB

    And here we go..

    *Click*

    Um yeah.. I'm sorry.. to everyone, I am probably.. the cause.. of all this mess.. i.. i revived s-s..sambama..

    W-what..

    T-they said t-they would kill my family.. i-i'm s-so sorry to anyone who will find this... Ugh..

    The recording stops there.. he probably lost conciousness at that time.

    He was the reason this all happened, why didn't we just kill him?

    Because, It was inevitable, Sambama was going to revive one way or another but the kid is here, we can use him as our warrior to go protect the earth

    No, he's weak, He was the reason all of this happened, He must be killed.

    Paradox turns around and heads for the infirmary

    No! Don't you dare!



    Episode End

    Character List
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    Gentleman (Top-Hattington)
    Powers : Currently Unknown
    Allegiance : The Underdogs

    The Blue Shadow (PokEdx)
    Powers : Ability to shapeshift, Teleport, Mass teleportation
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Lawlzor (Lawlzor)
    Powers : Currently Unknown
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Mason (SuperRapz)
    Powers : He can corrode anything he wants, Poison/Corrosive powers
    Allegiance : Havok

    Ogrelord (Wumbo)
    Power : Light speed, Bulletproof body, and superstrenght
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Anti-Brotherhood

    Clem (Clemi)
    Power : Can turn weapons and himself into steam
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Neutral

    Hana (Lucina/Hanako)
    Power : Currently Unknown
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Eden

    Paradox (Dion)
    Power : Omnipotent Powers
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Eden

    The Father (Erboh/Rob)
    Power : Omnipotent Powers
    Status : Alive
    Allegiance : Eden

    Arcade (Yellownerd)
    Power : Ability to use the powers of Arcades/8bit
    Status : Barely Alive
    Allegiance : ?


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    Arcade is alive!!! I haven't expected this.
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