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    This is cool so far! keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by YellowNerd View Post
    This is cool so far! keep it up
    Thanks dude. It was you who motivated me to write this. Keep up the good work. I'm sure that future episodes of Paradox will surprise me even more.
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    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


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    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
    Dumbledore

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    I almost think that this and Paradox are two alternate universes.

    They are both amazing and also unique in their own ways.
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    because he's dildnose

    thats why he can fly


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    As I said, I wanna thanks YellowNerd. His Paradox is amazing and it motivated me to write my own story. Given more time this could end up kinda like a Marvel vs DC contest.
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    Season 1
    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
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    Season 1
    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
    Dumbledore

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    I know I added a lot of characters this episode but don't worry. You will get used to them.


    Season 1
    Episode 4: Demons inside of us

    Year Later


    Do you wanna know what our lives are like. If you do then you will enjoy what you hear. This year was my best year. I dropped out of school (but I can't drop a verse) to help the citizens. So far we stopped many criminals, thieves, thugs etc. We formed a superhero team. Everyone loves us. We called ourselves Immortals.

    "People die, but not the hope"

    The Cookie Clicker really improved his fighting skills. He is really gifted. As he would say, Yolo. He isn't afraid of anything. He has done the ice bucket challenge twenty times without screaming like a girl. And the way he handles a gun, this leaves Agent Houston jealous.

    Merge has not joined our team. He has a YouTube channel where he posts gaming video (2 million subs). He rarely uses his powers.

    We thought that it couldn't get bad...

    Agent Scott:Team we have a problem.
    Gecko:A bank robbery?
    Agent Scott:Worse.
    Gecko:Agent Houston beat you in chess again.
    Agent Scott:This is not funny. If you all come with me I will explain everything.

    This was no training. At the city market, middle of Old York, 5 mysterious figures were standing, watched by random passers-by confused by what is going on.
    IMMORTALS SHOW YOURSELF. COME. SHOW YOURSELF.
    They're coming. I sense them.

    In a couple of seconds we left the car and stood by them.

    We are the unstoppable 5. We wanna make a deal. People, for too long we were letting you torture us, experiment on us. We were test subjects, worth nothing, only because we were different. We will not let this continue, you will be doomed. Immortals, do you wanna join us, help us get rid of those who hate us, or help them?

    Solar:Nah I'm pretty sure they only hate the ones who threaten them. We rather save the innocent and you...I would kill you.

    And so they disappeared.

    Same night

    This night was a nightmare for Mortic. He can't remember much from it. He woke up in the middle of the night, staring into the darkness.

    "You miss them"
    Mortic:Who is that. Show yourself.

    "Your village...gone. Your superhero team...gone"
    Mortic:Show yourself!!!

    He was now looking around the room, but he was alone.

    "Don't you wanna join them, in heaven?"
    Mortic:No! Stop!

    "Don't you wanna see the ones you love. It's easy. You know what to do."

    Mortic then became conscious of what he's doing. He held a knife in his hand, pointing it at his chest. But why? He didn't know. He forgot.

    Unknown location

    THIS DRINK IS GETTING WARM.

    "There you go" said Glasscock and he made ice appear in his drink.

    "Thanks Glasscock. Dr. Hurt, have you found out anything about them yet." He questioned, as he made the drink fly up to him

    Dr. Hurt:Not yet, Nemesis. I'm trying my best but I will need a better computer. Their database is well protected. But for me, there is no computer that can't be hacked.
    Nemesis:Viro knows one of them. Mortic, a legendary warrior. Fought in the war of independence. He was the first mutant. He's our ancestor. Unfortunately they will have to die, if they wanna get in my way.
    Viro:He is strong. I nearly killed him last night. Lost connection though. He could pose a major threat.
    Nemesis:Don't worry. He is not the only one who posed a major threat. You know who else posed a big threat.
    Dr. Hurt:Of course. It was difficult but I managed to replicate her DNA. Her blood runs in our veins. That's why we never age. We could live forever.
    Nemesis:She was one of us. But she had to...sacrifice herself. Poor Lucina. I don't like killing our own kind.
    Dr. Hurt:Since we have her DNA and technology we only need one more thing to recreate the storm from 1596.

    End of episode 4

    Characters:
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    In memory of Lucina I added her in this episode.

    Good:
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    Name: Albus Dumbledore (Solar)
    Power: Control light and what people see
    Created by me

    Name: Clemi Toe (The Cookie Clicker)
    Power: Can turn anything into cookies and back, carries a bag of cookies, trained as an agent
    Created by Clemi

    Name: Seth (Motric)
    Power: Control water and electricity, can create a huge blast of power (called Camona Samanue), stopped ageing after turning 22
    Created by Zombielicker

    Name: Matthew Johnson (Gecko)
    Power: Invisibility (not entirely, includes clothing), regeneration, wall climbing, telekinesis
    Created by Watch_Gonad

    Name: Agent Scott
    Power: None
    leader of H.P.O.

    Name: Agent Houston
    Power: None
    H.P.O. agent


    Neutral:
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    Keith Lavigne (Merge)
    Power: Can create anything out of thin air, change anything into anything else, his signature weapon is a brine blade
    Created by BrineBlade


    Evil:
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    Name: Glasscock
    Power: Controls glass and ice, can freeze things
    Created by me

    Name: Dr.Hurt
    Power: High intelligence and quick reaction time, creates machinery, skilled at martial arts
    Signature weapon: unknown yet
    Created by me

    Name: Viro
    Power: Can control people's senses (what they see, hear, feel etc.
    Created by me

    Name: Techno
    Power: Telekinesis
    Created by me

    Name: Unknown
    Power: Teleports (might as well say that he has 1 more unknown power)
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    Season 1
    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
    Spoiler: 

    Season 1
    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
    Dumbledore

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    ...kinda hoping my character gets more involved in the story.
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    ...gonna send in a second character soon
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    Quote Originally Posted by BrineBlade View Post
    ...kinda hoping my character gets more involved in the story.
    Sorry I just don't know how to get him involved and be neutral at the same time...yet. But don't worry he'll kick some ass quite soon and he'll be the main character in season 2.
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    Read my superhero story
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    Every Erb winner (Does anyone even read these)
    Spoiler: 

    Actual Erb winners
    Spoiler: 

    Season 1
    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
    Spoiler: 

    Season 1
    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
    Dumbledore

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    Hey, Dumble, I've just send you my character, is there enough info about him?

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