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    Quote Originally Posted by King Kubby View Post
    Hey, Dumble, I've just send you my character, is there enough info about him?
    There is too much info on him, but I like the character and I think he's gonna fit well into the plot.
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    Season 1
    Episode 5: Fault in defence


    We were nowhere near finding out who the Unstoppable 5 were. They could have been anywhere. We did find a little bit about them but that didn't help.

    Agent Houston:Well, I did manage to find out who they are. They were active during WW2. Kept noone's side. Just kill anything that's human. But of course they went into hiding thanks to our buddy Mortic. Techno is the leader. Telekinetic, a very powerful villain. Glasscock can control ice and glass. Viro, controls peoples senses, what they feel, hear, taste, see. If she wanted she could make you feel cold in the middle of a desert. Illusion is her power. She can also enter our minds and control them. Shadowfighter, skilled assassin, can teleport. His hands also turn into katana blades...

    Suddenly the monitor of the computer went crazy like as if it was glitching and all you could see is a face.

    Dr. Hurt:It seems like working behind a desk has blinded you. Houston is not a very difficult password to guess. What? Surprised? Didn't expect me to hack into your computer. We know what you're storing. Keeping safe. You know what we want. You thought that we would never find out. I'm too intelligent. We know your weaknesses. We're coming.

    Agent Scott and agent Houston were both sweating. The superhero team looked confused. They didn't know what is happening.

    The lights went out they are really coming.

    Agent Scott:Solar turn back the lights.
    "But how...oh never mind" I said with an embarrased voice, as I made the light appear in every single room in the building.

    Suddenly agent Scott heard somebody was talking through an ear piece.

    "Sir...the power is out...we are having intruders...FREEZE DROP YOUR WEAPON..."*gunshot*. Somebody dropped to the ground. Silence.

    " Is that all you got?"

    Agent Scott:Go! Find them.

    The 5 of us and the agent were searching the building. Of course Agent Scott and Agent Houston knew where to find them but the area was too secret to show the team. He entered the password and went through the doors.

    Techno:Finally! What took you so long?

    He said it with confidence while he made the guns fly out of his hands. And so they stood five of them against 2, waiting for the shit to go down.

    Techno:Call up your team. Tell them to meet us in the Central Park in an hour.
    Scott:I'm not gonna make my team fall into a trap.
    Techno:Wrong answer. Viro, you know what to do?

    And they disappeared. The five heroes suddenly had heard voices in their heads.

    Meet us in the Central Park in two hours. Don't set up any traps or we will kill civilians. Tell agent Scott that he should know what we have. If he doesn't follow the rules, he knows what's gonna happen.

    Back in agent Scott's office

    Agent Scott:The thing they have stolen is a mysterious object. It seems to be radiating a lot of energy. This mysterious object was found after the storm which Mortic survived. They could be calling upon the second storm. They could gain invincibility.
    Gecko:A super-superpower?
    Agent Scott:You could think of it that way.
    Solar:So, we must succeed.
    Agent Scott:Yes but. I sense a trap, but we have to play by their rules. We will try to intervene if the case gets too complicated.
    Clemi:This is le intense. You want a cookie as a stress relief.
    Scott:Can't say no.

    Will the heroes succeed before evil takes over the world? Find out in the next episode.

    End of episode 5

    Characters list:
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    Good:
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    Name: Albus Dumbledore (Solar)
    Power: Control light and what people see
    Created by me

    Name: Clemi Toe (The Cookie Clicker)
    Power: Can turn anything into cookies and back, carries a bag of cookies, trained as an agent
    Created by Clemi

    Name: Seth (Motric)
    Power: Control water and electricity, can create a huge blast of power (called Camona Samanue), stopped ageing after turning 22
    Created by Zombielicker

    Name: Matthew Johnson (Gecko)
    Power: Invisibility (not entirely, includes clothing), regeneration, wall climbing, telekinesis
    Created by Watch_Gonad

    Name: Agent Scott
    Power: None
    leader of H.P.O.

    Name: Agent Houston
    Power: None
    H.P.O. agent


    Neutral:
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    Keith Lavigne (Merge)
    Power: Can create anything out of thin air, change anything into anything else, his signature weapon is a brine blade
    Created by BrineBlade


    Evil:
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    Name: Glasscock
    Power: Controls glass and ice, can freeze things
    Created by me

    Name: Dr.Hurt
    Power: High intelligence and quick reaction time, creates machinery, skilled at martial arts
    Signature weapon: unknown yet
    Created by me

    Name: Viro
    Power: Can control people's senses (what they see, hear, feel etc.
    Created by me

    Name: Techno
    Power: Telekinesis
    Created by me

    Name: Shadowfighter
    Power: Teleports, his hands turn into katana blades
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    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


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    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
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    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
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    Notice: Sign ups of superheroes are currently closed. If you are sad because you wanted to include a superhero, then PM me or comment on this thread and I will give you instructions after season 1 finishes (3-4 more episodes).
    BrineBlade, as I promised, your superhero fill be an important character in season 2, it's just that I couldn't keep you neutral AND have you in the story. But of course not every superhero has to be good/neutral/bad forever (A little teaser for the future which has nothing to do with BrineBlade's character).
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    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
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    Season 1
    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
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    in the next episode, could you change Merge's status from neutral to good?
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    Quote Originally Posted by BrineBlade View Post
    in the next episode, could you change Merge's status from neutral to good?
    That was my original plan (to make him a dick that will learn, I mean he did attack Dildnose and he did use his powers against others before, but he WILL join the Immortals and the other character too. He'll be more active at the end of season 1 but season 2 will be where he kicks some ass.
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    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
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    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
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    OK
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    Is my charrie good?
    But,░in░truth,░I░have░wept░too░much!░Dawns░are░hea rtbreaking.
    Ξvery░moon░is░atrocious░and░every░sun░bitter. (ュ だ  どいロリラ威萎虞う ャイ意営縁ぇヵ)

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    moon you're hurting me in ways you'll never even know. lets do that suicide, buddy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King in the North View Post
    Is my charrie good?
    Yeah, but he won't fit in the story. But I sent you a PM with details. Hope you're not mad.
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    Season 1
    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
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    Season 1
    Galileo, Steve (Minecraft), Harry Potter, Da Vinci, John Wilkes Booth, Russia
    Season 2
    Edward Cullen, Julius Caesar, Jesus, Ariana Grande, Deadpool, Turtlesauce
    Season 3
    Dumbledore

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    Season 1
    Episode 6: Toy Soldiers

    Central Park 2 hours later.


    Sure we kept our promise. We did show up. We must win this. There we were 5 of us standing against them. Waiting for the right moment. Waiting for a miracle. What were we supposed to do. We were outclassed. But we haven't lost our hope.

    Techno:You're no match for us. You're just puppets. Toys.

    At the same time Dr.Hurt threw 5 shurikens at 5 of us. We've been struck before we had time to react. But it didn't just penetrate our skin. It paralysed us.

    Dr. Hurt:Simple invention.
    Viro:Wanna go next Shadowfighter.
    Shadowfighter:Ladies first.

    And then we got up controlled by Viro. We began dancing ballet, then break-dancing, then punching ourselves in the face. We couldn't control ourselves.

    Techno:As I said before they're toys not heroes.

    Shadowfighter took the lead by playing a small game. He grabbed us one by one, teleported us in the air and let us fall from a distance of a couple of metres. He did it a few times.

    Glasscock:Why are you so stressed. You need to chill out. Haha get it.

    And then we felt cold. Glasscock dropped the temperature. Then for a finishing move Techno has waved our bodies in the air. He was bouncing them up and down. They were all laughing. Agent Houston and a couple of other agents were running in. However, once again Techno managed to deflect every single bullet.

    Techno:Let's go.

    And they teleported.

    Agent Houston:COWARDS!!!

    He suddenly heard a whisper behind him.

    Shadowfighter:We ain't cowards.

    And he chopped off agent Houston's head with his katana hand. He then began killing every agent. No bullet helped in any way as he swiftly either knocked them off the path with his katanas or teleported into a different spot. He then came to Agent Scott. So you're the leader? Would you die for freaks like us.

    Agent Scott:I wouldn't die for freaks, but for my family.

    With so little energy I had left I tried to blind Shadowfighter before I fell unconscious.

    Some time later

    Wake up guys!!!

    Clemi Toe:What le happened.
    Solar:I saved you.
    Agent Scott:The blinding did work but he wasn't trying to kill me. He wanted to give...
    Solar:Where is agent Houston?

    Tears were starting to drop on Scott's face.

    Agent Scott:He died in action. My best friend. Knew him for 10 years.

    Everyone felt sorry.

    Gecko:This is our fault.
    Agent Scott:I don't blame any of you. I didn't think we could win. We were unprepared. Anyway, as I was saying, Shadowfighter didn't want to kill me. He wanted to send you a message. They want you to join them. This is your last chance. Of course they didn't want to kill you, why would they want to kill one of their own kind...superheroes. Of course they wanted to beat you, to show that they are better than you. They wanted you to surrender. What I want you to do is focus on your main task, which is to retrieve the staff before someone gets hurt.

    Then he heard a voice through his earpiece.

    SIR. CAN YOU HEAR ME? THERE IS MORE TROUBLE DOWN IN CENTRAL PARK. PEOPLE WITNESSING SOME SUPERPOWER STUFF.
    Agent Scott:Is it the unstoppable 5 again?

    NO. IT'S OUR OLD FRIEND... MERGE.

    End of episode 6

    Character list:
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    Good:
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    Name: Albus Dumbledore (Solar)
    Power: Control light and what people see
    Created by me

    Name: Clemi Toe (The Cookie Clicker)
    Power: Can turn anything into cookies and back, carries a bag of cookies, trained as an agent
    Created by Clemi

    Name: Seth (Mortic)
    Power: Control water and electricity, can create a huge blast of power (called Camona Samanue), stopped ageing after turning 22
    Created by Zombielicker

    Name: Matthew Johnson (Gecko)
    Power: Invisibility (not entirely, includes clothing), regeneration, wall climbing, telekinesis
    Created by Watch_Gonad

    Name: Agent Scott
    Power: None
    leader of H.P.O.

    Name: Agent Houston
    Power: None
    H.P.O. agent




    Neutral:
    Spoiler: 

    Keith Lavigne (Merge)
    Power: Can create anything out of thin air, change anything into anything else, his signature weapon is a brine blade
    Created by BrineBlade


    Evil:
    Spoiler: 
    *

    Name: Glasscock
    Power: Controls glass and ice, can freeze things
    Created by me

    Name: Dr.Hurt
    Power: High intelligence and quick reaction time, creates machinery, skilled at martial arts
    Signature weapon: Shurikens
    Created by me

    Name: Viro
    Power: Can control people's senses (what they see, hear, feel etc.) and minds
    Created by me

    Name: Techno
    Power: Telekinesis
    Created by me

    Name: Shadowfighter
    Power: Teleports, his hands turn into katana blades
    Created by me
    Last edited by @Dumbledore; 08-31-2014 at 04:53 PM.
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    John Lennon, Darth Vader, Chuck Norris, Sarah Palin, Hulk Hogan, Ludvig van Beethoven, Stephen Hawking, Genghis Khan, Napoleon Dynamite, Billy Mays, Gandalf, William Shakespeare, Mr. Rogers, Christopher Columbus, Epiclloyd
    Season 2
    Adolf Hitler, Master Chief, Wright Brothers, Michael Jackson, Marilyn Monroe, Steve Jobs, Frank Sinatra, Abraham Lincoln, Doc Brown, Clint Eastwood, Batman, Santa Claus, Adam, Gandhi, Nikola Tesla, Lance Armstrong, Mozart, Gorbachev
    Season 3
    Darth Vader, Al Capone, Miley Cyrus, Bob Ross, Muhammad Ali, Donald Trump, Walter White, Goku, Stephen King, Isaac Newton, Draw, Painters
    Season 4
    Gotta prepare myself


    ERB Crazy's Crazy ERB's winners
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    Season 1
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    Season 3
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    Ouch. I felt sorry for them. The Unstoppable Five is very strong as a team. They can only be defeated when picked off one by one.

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