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    Lohuydahutt's Avatar Senior Member
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    Well shit m8

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    Fuck you Turtle Wyatt was best character.
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    Act uqa wa it
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    Gonad has no nads pass it on!!!!11!

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    And another two bite the dust. Looking forward to the next one!

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    Chapter Eight: Perma-Night


    The sun was red, and the sky was dark.

    Tesze was barely looking at the sky. Opadrion's swarm was dying. The impact of GabeCreator almost killed them all.

    The few remaining spiders gathered around her.

    Tesze needed help. She saw a figure walking towards her.

    ???: Hehehe




    Roland: ZUCK ON ZIS

    Roland fired his TwinSpark cannon at the center of mass, however Echo, Anton and Ujarak managed to dodge. Roland wasted no time and jumped with his Alfa Romeo Mech hitting the ground, scattering Anton John and Ujarak.

    Echo stood her ground.

    Roland: OH I ZEE ZE BITCH IST STILL ZTANDING.

    Echo started gathering divine energy around her.

    Roland was confused.

    Echo roared, and her sword turned into a Two-hander, and she jumped at Roland's mech, and started slashing away. Roland retaliated and kept hitting her. Echo's bones were breaking, and her skin was being torn apart, but she felt no pain, she kept slashing.

    Roland's Mech entered critical state. Echo stopped.

    Roland went into overdrive, and his mech completely regenerated.

    Roland: IST ZAT ALL?

    Echo raised her head, and smiled.

    Pietro showed himself inside the mech, behind Roland.

    "Death does not care about your technology, Roland"

    Pietro slashed at Roland's neck, which directly affected the Mech.

    It went intro critical again, and Echo was there for the coup de grace.

    The divine shield exploded, sending back all the energy back at Roland, instantly destroying his mech.

    Out of the explosion, Roland walked out. His skin was all ripped off, and his face was burned.

    He put up a middle finger, then fell down on his face, gripping the keys to his Alfa Romeo.

    Sixth Death: Roland the Alfa Male

    Pietro again slithered away.




    Eoin walked up to Roland's corpse.

    He picked up his Trainhammer, and snorted.




    Ujarak and Anton John rushed to Echo

    She was on her knees, and smiling. Half of her bones were broken, and she couldn't move.

    Anton turned to Ujarak: Is there anything you can do?

    Ujarak: Me? No. But I know someone who can.

    He lifted his sword in the air.




    Spirit was holding the Nocti Eternum spell, while Body dashed towards Anwen

    He slashed at her, searing her flesh.

    She dodged, and tried to ignore the pain, then lunged and stabbed body.

    Spirit nudged.

    Spirit: WHAT? I GET HURT IF HE HITS YOU? THAT"S BULLSHIT.

    He almost let go of the Nocti Eternum, but channeled it again.

    Anwen saw an opportunity.

    Body threw himself at Anwen, and stuck her to the ground.

    Body roared, and stabbed Awen through the heart.

    She screamed in pain, then threw Body away, knocking him to the ground.

    Anwen got up, with a searing knife through her heart

    Spirit: WHAT THE FUCK!?

    A gunshot was then heard, and body dropped down.

    Spirit felt the blow, then evaporated.

    Amalgam was done, once and for all.

    The sun was again shining, but Anwen was wounded.

    She turned around, and saw the shooter.

    Eoin: Me didn't means to help you. He is was just the first to be die.

    Eoin put a bullet through Anwen's head, as she dropped down.

    When she hit the ground, light emanated from her body, and as she dissipated, day turned to the night.

    The Sun Goddess was struck down.

    Seventh Death: Anwen Okami

    Eoin grabbed her sword of the sun. The sword still had some power in it.

    He saw someone on the ground further away.

    It was Tesze

    Eoin: Hehehe

    He dropped the Trainhammer on Opadrion, the force squashing all the swarm.

    As Eoin walked away, Tesze squirmed in pain again, and as the half of her died, another half was born.

    A last spider scurried towards Tesze's face.

    A tear rolled down Tesze's cheek, as the last spider waved goodbye at her.

    Tesze: Goodbye.. my love..




    Future Rapper grabbed a soda, then sat down next to a tree.

    He took out his Future Rifle, and locked down on two people

    Future Rifle: RIP, m8.

    To be continued...
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    ;-;

    At least I killed people.
    But,░in░truth,░I░have░wept░too░much!░Dawns░are░hea rtbreaking.
    Ξvery░moon░is░atrocious░and░every░sun░bitter. (ュ だ  どいロリラ威萎虞う ャイ意営縁ぇヵ)

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    moon you're hurting me in ways you'll never even know. lets do that suicide, buddy.

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    Where did he get that soda? Who knows... It's the FUTURRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    also shit's getting real m8

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    Guess you can say after Anwen's death, things got dark.

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    That was heartbreaking. You're a bastard Turtle. A bastard who can tell a damn fine story.

    I just binge-read every episode again at work and I feel compelled to let you know that this whole thing as a complete project is coming together beautifully. And I kind of like that you killed Opie, from a creative standpoint. That opens up the door for interesting and new arcs for Tesze's character development, and I'm really looking forward to however you interpret her next. Keep up the excellent writing!

    Now the party's over

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klonoa View Post
    Guess you can say after Anwen's death, things got dark.
    God dammit

    Quote Originally Posted by Top-Hattington View Post
    That was heartbreaking. You're a bastard Turtle. A bastard who can tell a damn fine story.

    I just binge-read every episode again at work and I feel compelled to let you know that this whole thing as a complete project is coming together beautifully. And I kind of like that you killed Opie, from a creative standpoint. That opens up the door for interesting and new arcs for Tesze's character development, and I'm really looking forward to however you interpret her next. Keep up the excellent writing!
    Thanks a lot, Top.

    You, the readers, are the reason I keep this going and the fact that people like it so much makes me happy that I started it
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    And now two autonomous Alfas are wandering around, seeking revenge, and a banhammer from another world is in irresponsible hands. That Pietro guy has no idea what he has done.

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