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    Chapter Three: Falling into Madness



    Wyatt is strong-willed. He has a sharp mind, a strong body, and an unbreakable will. He is a brick wall. How do you shatter a brick wall? Do you pick each brick apart, piece by piece?

    No. You slam it at full speed and watch it crush anyone who stands in it's way... Hehehehe...


    Wyatt juggled the knife, then he threw it towards Anton John's head, who dodged just in time.

    Anton John dashed through the hallway.

    Anton John: Amalgam, RUN!

    Amalgam got up, and stared Wyatt in the eyes. He could see Wyatt was no longer sane.

    Amalgam scanned him, and immediately copied his posture.

    Wyatt roared and swung his knife at Amalgam, who immediately dodged.

    Wyatt: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

    Amalgam: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

    Wyatt grunted and swung at Amalgam

    Amalgam grunted and dodged Wyatt.

    Wyatt: YOU CAN'T COPY ME

    Amalgam: YOU CAN'T COPY ME

    Anton John heard the screams, and turned around to see Wyatt enraged and Amalgam mirroring his every action.

    He noticed a switch on a wall. It was probably a trap. Wyatt would no doubt kill Amalgam, and then he would come after him.

    He closed his eyes, and pulled the switch. Shortly after, a trap door opened beneath Wyatt and Amalgam, who both fell down. A loud thud was heard.

    Anton John looked down, and heard Wyatt's distinct war cry. He didn't kill them. Anton John smiled, then went forward through the mansion.

    He won't give in to the Grand Wizard.



    Dominique: JE SWEAR, JE THOUGHT IT WAS SUCRE!

    Anwen: NO, LOOK! BEHIND YOU.

    Dominique sighed. They didn't see him taking out the vial.

    Dominique: Mon Dieu! Wait, behind moi?

    A skeletal hand grabbed Dominique Francisque's shoulder.

    Dominque: EEK! HELP!

    Echo sighed. Some man.

    She took out her Blaze Edge, turning it into a Two-Hander, and rushed towards Dominique, quickly followed by Anwen, who took out her twin blades.

    Dominique looked behind him. The skeletal arm belonged to a (surprise) skeleton.

    Dominique quickly reached in his pocket at took out an eclair, and stuffed in the skeleton's mouth.

    The skeleton staggered and spat out the eclair.

    Dominique: MON DIEU, YOU CAN'T JUST SPIT IT OUT, YOU UNDEAD COCHON!

    The skeleton jumped on Dominique..

    Dominique: EEK

    ... but was caught in the air by a tackle from Echo, who cracked his skull.

    Echo: AND STAY DOWN YOU PIECE OF SHIT!

    Anwen: Echo! More of them on the way.

    Anwen tried to run to help Echo, but Dominique grabbed her by the arm.

    Dominique pointed towards Echo, who was slashing and bashing at hordes of skeletons, screaming with excitement.

    Anwen giggled: I guess she really likes fighting.

    A drop of blood fell on Dominique's shoulder.

    Dominique screamed, then he and Anwen turned around.

    ???: Hi.

    Dominique: merde.



    SHUT UP.


    The whole town shook. GabeCreator got up from the terrified feminists. His scream also helped Future Rapper escape.

    Future Rapper: oi m8, thanks.

    The town had cleared.

    GabeCreator: Where's Pietro?

    A whisper was heard behind them: Here

    Pietro slithered up to the GabeCreator, and wrapped himself around his body, immobilizing him.

    Future Rapper got out a knife: m8 wtf are you doing.

    Pietro: What needs to be done.

    Pietro took out a knife, and jammed it into GabeCreator's neck.

    Gabe tightened his neck, and the knife shot out.

    Future Rapper: Oi m8, that's what steroids do to you.

    GabeCreator: SHUT UP and get this bitch off of me.

    Pietro ejected from Gabe, and took human form.

    Future Rapper dashed and slashed Pietro, who thanks to his liquid form managed to not feel anything.

    Pietro: FOOLS, you are not fighting one man. You are fighting much more than that.

    Pietro split himself into 8 Pietros, and surrounded Gabe and Future Rapper.

    Pietro: I AM DEATH ITSELF. AND YOU DESERVE ME.

    GabeCreator: SHUT UP

    Gabe pumped himself up, making his upper body larger.

    Future Rapper dropped a mixtape, surrounding himself with fire.

    Future Rapper: Bring it, m8!





    Sometimes, it's not enough to break their minds. Sometimes you have to get your hands dirty..

    Tesze: OPADRION, NO!
    The block of stone fell down. It would've killed Opadrion instantly, however Dildnose felt bad for Tesze, and extended his Dildo Nose and destroyed the block before it squished Opadrion.

    Tesze rushed to Opadrion, and the monks surrounded her.

    Tesze: YOU THINK YOU ARE BETTER THAN US?

    Opadrion's swarm climbed on Tesze

    Tesze: JUST BECAUSE WE ARE DIFFERENT?

    Dildnose walked up next to Tesze.

    Tesze: YOU ARE FUCKING WITH A DEMON AND AN ANGEL HERE, SO I SUGGEST YOU BACK OFF?

    Dildnose: and Dildnose!

    The monks started whispering.

    "Is it really an angel?"

    "She must be demon!"

    "This isn't wise"

    They started backing out.

    Tesze hugged Dildnose: Thanks a lot! You saved Opadrion!

    Opadrion's swarm started agitating.

    The chapel door opened, and a hooded man walked in.

    Tesze. Opadrion. Harry.

    The voice was coming from the hooded man, but it sounded as though he was talking from inside their heads.

    Opadrion's swarm formed something on the ground.

    "Grand Wizard".




    Ujarak was using his superhuman strength to try and remove the hood of the Alfa Romeo, but to no avail. He inspected the car. Not a single scratch. No doubt it was connected to Roland in some way. He had to hit Roland.

    But Roland hit first.

    Roland: JA, TASTE ZE TRAINHAMMER ZOU TRIBAL PIEZE OF SHIT

    *Smack*

    Ujarak got hit head on by the Trainhammer. The blow would've killed any man, but Ujarak survived. He was knocked into the forest.

    Which was on fire. The smoke and heat, however, had an effect on Eoin's brainwash, and Ujarak recovered his sanity.

    Ujarak: Eoin! He mind-controlled us! Roland!

    Roland was driving through the flaming forest.

    Ujarak: ROLAND! STOP! EOIN BRAINWASHED US!

    Roland: DIE ZOU PIEZE OF SHIT!

    Ujarak sighed. The forest was catching fire faster by the minute. He had to save Roland, or he would die in the fire. Ujarak dissappeared into the forest.

    Roland was driving around, knocking over flaming trees, when he saw Ujarak in the distance. He stepped on the gas. Suddenly, Ujarak dissappeared, and two trees slammed down in front of Roland, who crashed into them, fainting from the impact.

    Good job. Now leave him to die.

    Ujarak heard the voice, then shook his head. He headed for the Alfa Romeo, broke the window, then pulled Roland out, and escaped the forest.

    You are a dissapoinment.




    Eoin was wandering the countryside.

    "Ugh, I is walking so many. When do me reach the wizard ffs."

    Suddenly, a portal opened in front of him.

    Eoin smiled, and walked through it. He found himself in a dark room.

    "What the hell this is"

    His thought was heard as though he said it out loud.

    "Hmm. So there is no thought here. Only words."

    Welcome Eoin. I have a proposition for you.

    Eoin smiled.


    To be continued...
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    Oh shit that suspense
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    Technically he never said his durability was heightened :P but I'll take it xP

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    ああスナップ. Things are really heating up now. Both figuratively and literally.

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    Well... Good thing the Alfa's state is directly dependent on Roland's state. I hope she'll come into play soon enough :D.
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    Chapter Four: Casualties of War



    Sit down, Eoin.

    Eoin sat down, and examined the room. If he focused hard he could make out the shape of the room.. that was.. strange..

    Eoin I shall fulfill your every desire if you do one thing for me..

    Eoin stared into the Hooded Man's hood. It was as if he stared into the darkest of pits.

    Take my place. Become the Grandest of Wizard, the Evilest of Warlock, the most Powerful of All Beings. Just take this knife, and pierce my heart.

    A knife appeared in front of Eoin. He took it with both hands. He took a step closer towards the Grand Wizard, who opened his arms, creating a small suction towards Eoin.

    ​FULFILL YOUR DESTINY!

    *smack*

    Eoin: Shut ur fuck up!

    Eoin smacked the Grand Wizard over the head with the knife, knocking him to the floor. Then, he threw away the knife.

    Eoin: Now, too see wut you really is...

    As Eoin removed the mask, a bright red light invaded the room.



    Anton John Shaun Lebron Qwan was walking through the mansion.

    Disclaimer: Some of you won't get this part, that's ok. Just skip if you want to.

    The ambiance suddenly turned dark as he walked through the hallway.

    Eight distinct places lighted up. Anton John shrugged and decided to investigate.

    The first light was a man chopped in two. The man was halved by what appeared to be a Demonic Door.

    The second light were two people, impaled by what looked like some sort of stick. One man was wearing priest clothes, the other was a weird looking man.

    The third light was another door slammed down on the ground. There were traces of blood, but no body. Weird.

    The fourth light was a bloody mess on the floor. Anton John could distinguish a camera, some sunglasses, and.. ew.

    The fifth light was a man (looked french) impaled in some spikes. There was something heroic about that, but Anton John couldn't quite tell what.

    The sixth light were two people. One looked like he never saw the light of the day, and the other was quite familiar to Anton John, but he couldn't tell. The two people were squished on the ground.

    The seventh light was..

    Hobo: Hey!

    Anton John: HOLY FUCK!

    In the seventh light there was a homeless man, eating what seemed like toothpaste

    Hobo: sorry to scare you.

    Anton John: Who the hell are you?

    Hobo: I'm a homeless man.

    Anton John: You don't have a name?

    Hobo: No. What's yours?

    Anton John: Anton Jo...

    Fuck, even the nameless Hobo was better off than "Anton John Shaun Lebron Qwan"

    Anton John: My name is Bob.

    Hobo: Coo'. I guess you better move on to the next light.

    Anton John: Uhm.. ok..

    The Hobo resumed his tooth-paste dinner.

    The final light were three people, shot. Two youtubers, Anton John could recognise them, and some dude. Also there was something that..

    ???: HI THERE NEIGHBOUR!

    A man in a bloody sweater jumped at him, but before he could reach Anton John, a bright red light invaded the room.



    Do it, Roland. He took your car away from you. Kill him.

    Ujarak put Roland down on a stone.

    Ujarak: Are you ok?

    Roland regained consciousness.

    Roland: Ja.. I'm fine! But where ist mein Alfa?!

    Ujarak: I had to leave it behind, I had to save you!

    Roland: ZOU IDIOT! UGH, I HOPE SHE DOEZN'T GET SCRATCHED!

    Ujarak: Scratched?..

    Ujarak was confused.

    Roland clicked his car keys, and the roaring engine was heard far off.

    Roland: You zee, Ujarak, I know.

    Roland took out his TrainHammer

    Ujarak had a bad feeling.

    Ujarak: Roland, no! He's getting to you!

    Roland: Oh, ja, he told me!

    Roland swinged the TrainHammer towards Ujarak, who nimbly dodged.

    However, the Alfa Romeo flanked him, hitting him from behind.

    Roland grabbed the unconscious Ujarak and slid him in the trunk.

    Roland: Nightzy Nightz, Mizter Ujarak!

    Then, a bright red light shone over the field.



    "There's little more gory a thing than living in Victorian England, m8!"

    Future Rapper was dropping fire with his mixtape, while actually throwing fire towards Pietro.

    Or actually, the Pietros.

    Pietro: FOOL! I am DEATH incarnate! How do you think you can defeat me?!

    Two Pietros jumped at Future Rapper

    Future Rapper: We don't have death in the future, m8!

    The two Pietros were quickly burned by Future Rapper's mix-tape fire.

    Future: Gabe! I got 2! 8 more to go!

    GabeCreator smashed the ground with his massive torso, staggering 3 Pietros. He then charged at one, smashing him to a puddle.

    Pietro: What's a mere pumped up mortal to me?

    GabeCreator: shut up

    GabeCreator grabbed a Pietro and ripped him in half.

    GabeCreator: Rapper, I got 2. Five more.

    Future Rapper smiled.

    "No problem, m8"

    He then disappeared, blending in with the scenery.

    *slash*

    Four Pietros left

    *slash*

    *swipe*

    Two Pietros knifed. Two remain.

    Gabe came from behind, and grabbed the two remaining Pietros. Future Rapper approached.

    Future Rapper: Not so tough now, m8.

    The Pietros laughed in unison.

    Pietro: Who taught you to count, fool?

    A third Pietro slid in behind, and slammed Gabe into Future Rapper, knocking them both to the ground.

    Pietro morphed into one, then took out his knives, holding them to GabeCreator and Future Rapper's necks.

    Pietro: Death always catches up to you.

    He would've had the chance to kill both of them, however a bright red light invaded the town.



    Dominique: DEFUQ IS THAT?

    The beast in front of them was made solely of corpses, molded together with blood. Somewhere on the body was also a head.

    Head on the Golem: Hi guys! My name is Frankie! Also, I don't control this golem, so sorry if it kills you. I'm just here.

    Anwen took out her blade, and slashed at the Golem's knees, while Dominique silently ran away.

    Meanwhile, Echo was far away, slashing at skeletons.

    Frankie: Uh.. I don't think the Golem likes you slashing it. I think you should run.

    The Golem grabbed Anwen.

    Frankie: Oh yeah, you're dead. Sorry. Maybe we can be together on the golem.

    Anwen tried slashing at the Golem, but the Golem was holding tight, and it was night, not allowing Anwen to use her true powers.

    Anwen: HELP!

    Echo heard Anwen, and turned around, just in time for her to be hit by a skeleton.

    Both Anwen and Echo were about to die.

    Only Dominique could save them.

    Merde.

    Dominique had to think fast. He looked around the wasteland, and had a bright idea.

    Dominique: HONHONHON, MONSIEURS UNDEAD, COME TRY SOME CAKE!

    The Golems and Skeletons looked at Dominique. He seemed to set up a stand made from an old wheelchair, and on top of it was the most scrumptious cake they'd ever seen.

    Frankie: OH MY, CAKE!

    The Golem dropped Anwen, and headed towards Dominique's stand.

    The Skeletons let go of Echo, and followed the Golem.

    Dominique: OUI OUI WHO DOESN'T LOVE LE SUCRE!

    He made a grand gesture, and knocked over the cake.

    Dominique: Fuck.

    The undead gasped.

    Dominique: Pardon my french.

    Before Anwen or Echo could reach Dominique, the Golem grabbed Dominique.

    A bright red light shone over the wasteland.



    Amalgam fell down in the pit, and landed on.. was it a wrestling ring?

    That's weird, lol.

    FOCUS, AMALGAM! WYATT IS AFTER YOU!

    EEEEH, who cares!

    He might be anywhere!

    Let him come, lol.

    "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH"

    Wyatt jumped on top of Amalgam, assaulting him with denting punches.

    Ouch.

    Riposte, counter his blow!

    But it hurts!

    HIT HIM YOU MORON!

    Amalgam decided to listen to his focused side, and grabbed Wyatt's punch, and tossed him on the other side of the ring.

    Wow, that was cooool.

    Focus! Don't let him recover! Dive kick!

    Amalgam again followed his better side, and dive kicked Wyatt, who started bleeding from his nose. His red eyes turned normal for a second, but then he went insane again.

    Amalgam scanned his surroundings. A wrestling ring.. hm..

    Wyatt got up and charged at Amalgam, who dropped down, dodged, and grabbed Wyatt's legs, smacking him down on the mat.

    OH BOY YOU'RE ON FIRE!

    Focus, Amalgam! Knock him out!

    Amalgam got up on the ropes, and slammed into Wyatt's head, then he bounced back.

    HOLY CRAP THAT WAS COOL.

    Deal the killing blow, Amalgam! It's kill or be killed!

    Oh, you're so boring. I got something better!

    Wyatt got up just in time to see Amalgam jumping, grabbing his neck, and slamming him on the mat.

    OH MY GOD AMALGAM WITH THE RKO OUTTA NOWHERE! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!

    No! Amalgam, he's getting up! Behind you!

    Amalgam turned around, and faced the barrel of a 9mm pistol

    The sound of the shot rebounded off the walls.

    Amalgam dropped down, dead.

    First death: Amalgam

    Wyatt's eyes cleared, then he looked down at the corpse.

    Wyatt: No.. what have I done?

    Images of war and bloodshed flashed before his eyes.

    Wyatt: I have.. killed him.. for no purpose.. I am.. a murderer..

    Wyatt knelt down next to Amalgam.

    A bright red light invaded the ring.



    Dildnose: Grand What? Ayy lmao he looks gay

    Tesze: Quiet! I feel an immense power coming from him.

    Opadrion climbed onto Tesze, ready for the confrontation.

    This is your last chance. Your fate depends on one person. If he does what I asked of him, you shall all be spared. I do not want needless bloodshed. That does not please me. What I want is to see you delve deep into your minds and analyze your deepest thoughts. When you do that, you shall see where real power comes from.

    Dildnose: What the fuck are you fucking talking about you fuck.

    Dildnose threw a Dild-O-Rang at The Grand Wizard. The projectile vanished into thin air.

    Tesze tried to leave the chapel, but the doors were sealed.

    The Grand Wizard started laughing.

    Eoin failed. You shall all taste the biterness of his failure.

    The Grand Wizard lit up, burning to ashes in just a few moments.

    From his ashes, a red light emerged, and engulfed everything.



    To be continued...
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    Yes.

    First kill bitches.
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    Finally a fucking death

    (wait did he ever use his special?)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lohuydahutt View Post
    Finally a fucking death

    (wait did he ever use his special?)
    (nope)
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