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    I'm sorry, but before I read: How much of this will spoil Undertale?
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    Quote Originally Posted by rangernumberx View Post
    I'm sorry, but before I read: How much of this will spoil Undertale?
    This chapter doesn't really spoil anything beyond the existence of a few characters you meet VERY early on and the existence of other locations in the game. IDK how far he's planning on going beyond that is something only he can answer xP

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    Yep, awesome formatting and great way to keep track of everyone. Loving this so far
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    Quote Originally Posted by rangernumberx View Post
    I'm sorry, but before I read: How much of this will spoil Undertale?
    There's, a couple things. A secret location, and one of the final bosses is spoiled here. The rest are found pretty early, but yeah, it's somewhat spoiler-y.
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    I don't plan on doing any actual spoilers, all that I'm planning to include are characters and locations, not revealing the significance of some. It should be fine, I went into this knowing not everyone would be familiar with my source. And Lyra, I technically didn't, since I never said who was a final boss or gave game secrets away.

    All mentioned Undertale characters so far are from early stages of the game except for one, but his name is still thrown around. I'm using that for exposition mostly at this point.
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    where da next chapter

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    02: Tremors
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    TOTAL ALIVE: 29
    TOTAL KILLS: 1
    Sweet Tooth: 1

    TEAMS

    Aang and Toriel (NON COMPETITOR)
    Peach and Thor
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)

    WORLD MAP

    --------TORIELHOUSE
    -----------------|
    RUIN - - - - - - - - SNOW- - -SNOWTOWN- - - - - - WATER - - - - - - - - - HOTL- - - - - -CORE - - - - - NEWHOME
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|--------------------|
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------TEMVILL--------TRULAB

    Each area has been split into segments if the competitors are not close together. Each segment occurs roughly at the same time as the others.
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    The Ruins


    Aang and Death the Kid are currently sitting in Toriel's house, reading books about snails or something like that. Toriel is in the kitchen, using fire magic to bake some butterscotch-cinnamon pie. How nice of her. What a lady. I mean, she's the best. But enough about that. Aang looks over at Kid.

    Aang: Hey, what was your name again.
    Kid: Death the Kid. You can call me Kid, I guess.
    Aang: That's a pretty funky name. I can't judge, but still.
    Kid: Yeah. I mean, I am the son of Death, so at least it makes sense.
    Aang: Huh.

    Tremors shake the Ruins.

    Aang and Kid, assuming this is all just because they're underground, pay no attention. Toriel, however, rushes in, looking worried.

    Toriel: Children, we must go. Something is happening.

    Sweeping them off of their feet, Toriel guides them downstairs and down a long hallway. Kid weeps softly, for they left the room in an imperfect state.

    -----

    Indiana Jones was doing what he was best at, dodging traps. It was pretty easy, he was used to it, and this ruin wasn't particularly well-guarded. Upon entering a room, he sees simply a pedestal, with some candy on it. Huh. Being hungry and noticing the "take one" sign, Indiana scooped up a handful, not known for exact subtlety when it comes to this. The rest of the candy spills to the floor. Disgusting.

    Tremors shake the Ruins.

    Assuming that taking the candy caused a trap, when in reality, it didn't, Indiana booked it out of there and headed back the way he came.

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    Snowdin

    Sub-Zero wanders the frozen forest, noticing not but some dogs at various areas of the landscape. As they weren't bothering him, he simply walked past, soothed by the cold.

    Tremors shake Snowdin Forest heavily.

    This was new. Something was wrong. Sub-Zero began to move faster, and as he kept proceeding east, the tremors got stronger.

    -----

    N had flown quite some time now, and he had just left the dark, dank Waterfall. It had gotten significantly colder now, but that wasn't much of a problem, again, N was just scoping things out.

    Tremors shake Snowdin heavily.

    A rock falls from the ceiling and hits N's steed, startling it and sending the two spiraling down towards the ground. The beast screams, and N tries to comfort it, but their descent is fast and something must be done.

    N reaches for a second Pokeball.

    -----

    Jack Skellington had just purchased a Cinnamon Bun from the Snowdin shop, and he walked down the street eating it, taking everything in. He turned left before hitting the Snowdin Library, and headed north.

    Meanwhile, Phoenix has just finished his food, and he begins to leave Grillby's. Cole Phelps, seeing as how the man looked suspicious due to his porcupine hair, got up slowly, and began to follow.

    L is still reading in the Library.

    Atticus also decided to head north. It was clear now that he was somewhere far from Maycomb, so he'd just have to figure a way to survive here. A bit cold, but nice.

    Agent 47 approaches a man heading north. Looking around to check for people, and seeing no one, he whips his fiber wire out and springs to the man's neck. This was a bad move, as he suddenly realized that the man was way too tall for this to work, and thus he slips, cutting part of the man's jacket. Jack Skellington whips around to find 47 behind him, cover blown. 47 quickly ditches the costume and reaches for his gun, there was no time for subtlety now. This WAS his target. Jack, although mostly knowing about Halloween and Christmas, was smart enough to know that this man had a weapon and was highly dangerous. He grabs a slimy green weapon from his jacket pocket and attaches it to his arm. The Soul Robber. He swings the whip towards 47's gun, but 47 has already gotten far enough away to be safe, for now. He shoots. And misses, because Jack's really thin.

    Phoenix Wright and Cole Phelps hear gunshots and head toward the sounds.

    Atticus Finch hears gunfire, and he runs further north to the sounds. He sees two black-clad men, one with a gun, clearly attacking the other defender. Realizing now that he had his rifle strapped to his back, One-Shot Finch equips it and points it at 47.

    Atticus: Sir, I don't know what's going on, but put the weapon down.
    47, Mumbling: Shit.

    47 turned, and noticing he was distracted, Jack summons a fiery pumpkin and prepares to lob it at 47.

    Tremors shake Snowdin town heavily.

    Things turned chaotic real fast, and Phoenix, Jack, Atticus, and Cole are all knocked back by the quakes. Jack loses his grip on the Robber and the pumpkin, and Atticus drops his rifle. 47 begins to try to make an escape, but not before he was incinerated in a burst of flame.

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    Death 02: Agent 47
    Killer: ???



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    Waterfall

    Tremors shake Waterfall.

    Godzilla is woken by these tremors, and he rises from the water, roaring a mighty roar. What was the meaning of this interruption?

    Groot continues to admire the flowers, but he hears roaring in the distance. What was going on? Slowly and carefully, he continues on towards the sound.

    -----

    The Joker has become fast friends with the Temmies due to his use of psychological manipulation or something. He could be a charmer if he wanted to. They all loved him.

    All Temmies but one, in unison:
    hOOI!!!!
    Bob: Hi. I'm Bob.

    Now that Joker had successfully brainwashed ten or so lovable dog cat things, it was time to move on and see how he could make this world burn.

    Tremors shake the Temmie Village.

    The Temmies are terrified, but nothing appears to be broken after the quake. Joker collects them all up and tell sthem that they need to leave, because it wasn't safe here anymore. The tremors worked in his favor.

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    Hotland

    Needles Kane speeds in his ice cream truck towards Waterfall.

    Ronald McDonald has left the cooking set, and he is also walking towards Waterfall when Sweet Tooth speeds past him. Another company, in HIS territory? This is an outrage. Ronald runs after the quickly escaping truck.

    Tremors shake Hotland slightly.

    Ronald trips, but Kane doesn't even notice.

    -----

    Mewtwo exits into a better lit laboratory and heads for the door, exiting into an exceedingly hot area.

    Tremors shake Hotland slightly.

    Mewtwo is unfazed, as he is currenly levitating.

    --------------------------------------------------------------

    True Lab

    Eggman and Metal Sonic have finished a mount for Eggman, and they begin to leave.

    Tremors shake the True Lab slightly.

    The room shakes a bit, and a large metal structure that looks like a goat skull or something weird falls into an abyss. The Sonic duo hasten their pace.

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    CORE

    Peach and Thor reach the entrance to the Core, and they see a man inside. Thor sets Peach down, and they enter slowly.

    Wolverine sees two people approach the Core and sniks out his right hand's blades, just in case.

    Vi is heading towards the Hotland entrance of the Core.

    Tremors shake the CORE slightly.

    Vi keeps walking, balanced by her gloves.

    Peach wobbles, and Thor steadies her with his force.

    Wolverine stumbles a bit, but nothing else much happens.

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    New Home

    Tremors shake New Home very slightly, but enough to be noticable.

    Asgore puts his cup of tea down.

    Asgore: We should go. Something's wrong. Come with me.
    Raimundo: kay

    The two quickly take a sideways elevator towards the west, and begin taking a secret passage to Snowdin.
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    Snowdin, the Mysterious Room

    "VENITISARIUM!"

    Kefka laughs maniacally as the room turns gray. Flames burst into the air, and a single eye apppears in the sky. The ritual was almost comple...

    WHAMO.

    A red blur smacks into Kefka, breaking his concentration and thus ending the ritual. The eye and flames disappear, and Kefka is knocked onto his back in the side of the room.

    Deadpool: I really wouldn't try that if I were you, Palazzo.

    Kefka is fucking pissed now, and he decided to take an alternate method to achieving his goal, and he pulls a brown book from his cloak. He'd set this up in case some bullshit like this happened. Yelling loudly, he shot a Blizzaga spell at Deadpool, freezing his entire body to the wall, and counters with a dark Firaga, setting the room ablaze with black fire. He began to chant, and nearing the end of the spell, he screamed.

    PH'NGLUI MGLW'NAFH CTHULHU R'LYEH WGAH'NAGL FHTAAAAAAAAAAAAGN!

    Tremors shake Snowdin heavily.

    Deadpool: Oh shit.

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    ???

    Bill Cipher is in limbo between his dimension and the Underground's dimension.


    Red waits.

    Cthulhu awakens.

    --------------------------------------------------------------

    TOTAL ALIVE: 28
    TOTAL KILLS: 2
    Sweet Tooth: 1
    ???: 1


    TEAMS

    Aang, Death the Kid, and Toriel (NON COMPETITOR)
    Peach and Thor
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)
    Joker and Temmies (NON COMPETITOR)


    Last edited by Lancer; 01-04-2016 at 09:38 PM.
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    This great
    format especially, why didn't I think of this? :P

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    While polar shined in humor, you certainly stand out in layout. I like the organization.

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    Not only in organization but damn this feels so clean and easy to read.

    keep it up
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