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    No! Not again.
    My characters die way too early.
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    I love how you format! I really like this

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    Having played through the neutral run, I have now read this.

    Wow. It's absolutely brilliant. Great job, MaNCHA.
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    I once heard Ranger was a legend.
    Now I can confirm Ranger is a legend.

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    03: Accusations

    Spoiler: 
    TOTAL ALIVE: 28
    TOTAL KILLS: 2
    Sweet Tooth: 1
    ???: 1


    TEAMS

    Aang and Toriel (NON COMPETITOR)
    Peach and Thor
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)

    WORLD MAP

    RUINS - - - - - - - - SNOWDIN- - - - - - - - -SNOWTOWN-- - WATERFALL - - - - - - - - - HOTLAND- - - - - -CORE

    Each area has been split into segments if the competitors are not close together. Each segment occurs roughly at the same time as the others.
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    The Ruins

    Aang, Kid, and Toriel all reach the entrance to Snowdin. With reluctance but care for the children, Toriel ushered them through the doors to help them escape the crumbling Ruins. Unbeknownst to her, this was actually more dangerous, as they were nearing the source of the tremors. Rocks began to fall, and the two children run, calling after Toriel. The lovable goat mom, however, can't run as fast as them, and is trapped in the Ruins by a huge boulder. Aang rushes forward to earthbend it out of the way, but he is too late, as the entire structure begins to collapse in on itself. The bricks, made from impure elements, cannot be easily bent by the Avatar, and everything tumbles down in a resounding crash.

    The Ruins is destroyed and is now the Collapsed Ruins.


    NPC Death: Toriel
    Killer: Indirectly Kefka

    Aang rushed to the site and burst the boulder open, but nothing was left in the rubble aside from the shattered pieces of what looked like a little glass heart.

    ---

    Indiana continues to book it as the tremors subside, and as no trap has come after him, he feels like he's in the clear. Stepping across the floor to the next door, Jones accidentally trips into a trap pit of leaves, and he tumbles to the floor below, just at the same time as the Ruins begins to collapse.

    The Ruins is destroyed.

    Jones is shaken, but he is alright except for a bruise or too. It was dark now, except for the slivers of light that shone through the broken rocks. He struggled up, now filled with determination to get the hell out of this damned purple hell.

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    Snowdin

    Sub-Zero continues to rush through the frozen forests, quickly approaching Snowdin Town.

    -----

    N, still falling above the Town itself, called out Zekrom to help him steady the flailing, screaming Reshiram. Jets of flame and lightning mixed in the sky for a split second, and then Zekrom was able to set them all down near the entrance to the town. Knowing Reshiram needed medical attention, N headed to the shops to see if he could buy something.

    -----

    L is still reading in the Library. Hearing noises, however, he heads to the window and looks out. Some people were arguing and fighting. As of now, however, it wasn't of interest, and he continued reading about SOULS and "human history", involving a great war involving the great General Meowsers MacDougalpoof and the trusty Tuna Squad.

    -----

    After everyone got up, dazed, the fingers began to point.

    Atticus: It had to have been Jack! You killed that man!
    Jack: I did no such thing! Besides, he was attacking me!
    Atticus: That's besides the fact, you still could have subdued him! Defense or not, you still killed him when he was off his guard!
    Jack: That's preposterous! I don't have that kind of power! Also, you had a gun!
    Cole: You did have a flaming pumpkin. I say did. It's gone now, so how do you explain that?
    Jack: I just dropped it!
    Phoenix: Guys, I'm gonna play Devil's Advocate here, because I had my eyes on Jack the entire time. He looks ridiculous, anyways. But I didn't see him kill that bald man.
    Atticus: We were just in the middle of an earthquake. It's natural for you to have seen something mistaken.

    The arguing went on for a bit, and a crowd of monsters began to converge.

    "WHAT'S GOING ON HERE?"

    The smell of fish permeated the air as Undyne, in full armor, entered the scene.

    Undyne: I hear that someone just got murdered. Step aside, PUNKS!
    Atticus: Oh, thank god, I assume you're the police.
    Undyne: Royal Guard, you monochromatic human. Did you see who committed this act?
    Monster, from the crowd: YES! WE ALL SAW IT! IT WAS THE SKELETON.

    Eyes turned towards the house of Sans and Papyrus.

    Monster, from the crowd:
    Not them, THAT one, the newcomer!

    Eyes turned back towards the crime scene.

    Undyne: Alright, sir, come with me, I'm taking you in for questioning.
    Jack: I tell you, though, I didn't do it!
    Undyne: IF YOU DON'T COME WITH ME RIGHT NOW YOU'LL BE PULLING A SPEAR FROM YOUR SKULL VERY SOON.
    Phoenix: What's going to happen now?
    Undyne: He's going to jail, of course, and then we'll have a trial soon. I'm just going to need a lawyer and a prosecutor, though, and we don't have any in Snowdin. For a catastrophe of this magnitude, we need to get this done ASAP, and I can't wait for them to come from New Home...
    Atticus: I'm a defense lawyer, but I'm sure he did it. I can act as prosecutor.
    Phoenix: But you don't even have evidence.
    Atticus: Doesn't matter, I can do this. I have to put this monster to justice.
    Undyne: I like the sound of that.
    Phoenix: Well, I'm also a defense lawyer, so I can vouch for the defense's side.
    Undyne: Alright then! We'll see you in a few hours at the courtroom.

    Undyne, Jack, and Atticus walk off, discussing the case.

    Cole: Look, I don't know whether he did it or not, but I'm sure I can help you investigate this case. There's more to this than would seem.
    Phoenix: That's good. I'll need the help, as I don't have an assistant for the case. Let's start by roping off the crime scene.

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    Waterfall
    Groot turns the corner to find a gigantic monster of about 20 hundred metric tons yelling and eating what appeared to be an onion. Or was it an octopus?

    NPC Death:
    Onion-san
    Killer: Godzilla

    Startled by this, Groot stands perfectly still. Groot is large, but in comparison to the might of Godzilla, it wasn't very much, so the tree man wasn't really noticed. Groot shuffles along the ground slowly, beginning to edge by Godzilla.

    -----

    The Joker and the Temmies hear a deafening roar as they decide to choose a path of action. As it came from the west, and whatever made it sounded very mad, Joker decided that it would be in his best interest to head east and build up his plans before anything else.

    Joker: Okay, Temmies, we're going to head this way.
    Temmie 1: okAAAAY!
    Temmie 2: hoIII!
    Bob: I'm Bob.

    Being this nice to a bunch of fluffy disgusting things wasn't easy, but Joker saw their potential to become killing machines. Again. It was time for the world to burn.

    -----

    Raimundo, and Asgore are still riding the elevator to Snowdin. Deadpool had taken off a while back, instead using the territory's glitches and transport areas to try to attack Kefka.

    Needles Kane has just left the jurisdiction of Hotland and is heading west.

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    Hotland

    Eggman and Metal Sonic, by this time, have also vacated the True Lab, leaving it empty. Finding Alphys's lab around them, they take a moment to tack on some extra parts to the Eggmech. Unbeknownst to Eggman, Metal Sonic pockets a few items for his own use, one of which being an integral part of the Eggmech's weaponry. He was tired of taking orders.

    ----

    Ronald McDonald continues to run across Hotland, trying to catch up with Needles Kane, and failing miserably. He stops, out of breath, and eats a Big Mac. All better, and nothing like those "glamour burgers" he saw advertised. Who wants a burger with glitter on it? No one would eat that, and this is coming from the advertiser for McDonalds.

    ----

    Sensing the presence of other Pokemon, Mewtwo levitates higher into the air and scopes the area using Mind Reader. Nothing close, but there were at least two Pokemon forms further out west. Seeing as they would likely be formidable allies, Mewtwo chases after them.

    ----

    Vi has made it about halfway through Hotland, also heading west. Her Hextech devices seem to indicate that there are more life forms heading that way, as opposed to the three behind her, which were of no consequence yet.

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    CORE

    Confusing the stumbling of Wolverine for an attack or something of the like, Thor brandishes Mjolnir and rushes in for an attack. Peach watches, disturbedly, from the sidelines, as Wolverine tries to block the oncoming force with the spikes protruding from his hands. A battle begins to ensue, with Wolverine getting damaged and rehealing, and Thor getting slashed repeatedly.
    The fight goes on for a bit.

    Peach sighs and walks past them, heading towards Hotland without them noticing. Men.

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    Snowdin: The Mysterious Room

    Kefka laughs evilly as he ascends into his true form, absorbing some of the eldritch power that had erupted around the room. Although the earthquakes had ceased, the Room had been cut off from the rest of reality, and it continues to shake. By this time, the black fire had melted some of Deadpool's ice, and he broke through the rest with brute force.

    Kefka turned towards the sound, but nothing changed. He had a significant power upgrade now, and he cast a Meteor spell towards Deadpool. Now on his feet, Deadpool was able to dodge enough of the meteors to be safe, and he whipped out his katanas, dual wielding them like a badass. Rushing towards Kefka, he went for the attack but got telekenetically slammed against the left wall.

    Something that he expected. Right before he expected the hit to come, Deadpool had dropped a grenade, which blew a hole in the floor, sucking more eldritch power into the room. Kefka was knocked back, but not exceedingly damaged. Having hit his limit of power, he began to cast a Mega Flare spell. Deadpool pulled a pistol out and shot one of Kefka's wings, distracting the diety long enough for him to get back onto his feet--and his head into the cloud of surging power.

    Some eldritch power escaped from limbo and flooded into the real world, surging into and corrupting the minds of Thor and Atticus Finch.

    As Deadpool was more aware of the world, this eldritch power immediately surged into his body, as opposed to it being Osmosed like with Kefka. With little clue on how to stop it, Deadpool began attempting various things to stop the flow, but nothing worked, and an enormous amount of truly evil power consumed the black and red being. Absorbing every atom and fiber, the eldritch power of Cthulhu himself tore not only his body apart, but his soul itself. Kefka, simultaneously giddy and terrified, muttered under his breath.

    "With strange aeons, even death may die."

    Spoiler: 

    Death 03: Deadpool
    Killer: Cthulhu


    And with that ominous, foreboding statement, the physical form of Cthulhu himself began to materialize.

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    ???

    Bill Cipher is in limbo between his dimension and the Underground's dimension.

    Red waits.

    ---------------------------------------------------------------

    TOTAL ALIVE: 27
    TOTAL GAME KILLS: 3
    Sweet Tooth: 1
    Jack Skellington: 1
    Cthulhu: 1
    TOTAL NPC KILLS: 2
    Kefka: 1
    Godzilla: 1

    TEAMS

    Aang and Death the Kid
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)
    Joker and Temmies (NON COMPETITOR)
    Phoenix and Cole


    Last edited by Lancer; 01-06-2016 at 09:28 PM.
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    Oh my god, this is incredible.

    This really makes me want an L and Phoenix Wright confrontation. XD It seeks thst may be where it's headed, though without random objections from his friends, I think L holds the advantage.
    Watch Magical Girl Raising Project. Just do it.

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    I do like how one of the most OP characters in recent forum stories was killed off early.

    Loving Jones by the way.


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    Good job Sane. You killed the forum.

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    [RIP my waifu. But still, "with little clue of how to stop it" is probably false, since DP is such a nerd he probably read all of HP Lovecraft. Still, good chapter!]
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    I will delete this forum.

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    I haven't read it all either, so I'm not sure of how deep the lore goes into everything. The "eldritch power" I describe here is more of a fictionalized plot point that I created, I'm imagining it to be like a swarm or cloud of black magic. If you've played Shantae and the Pirate's Curse, you defeat Cacklebats and there's like a doomy-cloud-thing of dark magic left behind. It's like that sort of, but more tendril-y and tentacle-y. I can maybe find a better description if I think about it
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    Yeah, I can imagine what it is.

    Cthulu's fucking op
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    I will delete this forum.

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    04: Madness Returns
    Spoiler: 

    TOTAL ALIVE: 27
    TOTAL GAME KILLS: 3
    Sweet Tooth: 1
    Jack Skellington: 1
    Cthulhu: 1
    TOTAL NPC KILLS: 2
    Kefka: 1
    Godzilla: 1


    TEAMS
    Aang and Death the Kid
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)
    Joker and Temmies (NON COMPETITOR)
    Phoenix and Cole

    WORLD MAP


    RUINS - - - - - - - - SNOWDIN- - - - - - MYSTERIOUS ROOM- - -SNOWDIN TOWN- - -WATERFALL - - - - - - - - - HOTLAND- - - - - -CORE


    Each area has been split into segments if the competitors are not close together. Each segment occurs roughly at the same time as the others.
    --------------------------------------------------------------
    The Ruins

    Despite knowing that it was, ultimately, futile, Aang kept digging through the rubble with his earth and air bending powers, shifting rocks and pushing away tons of bricks to find something, anything, to let him know that Toriel was alive. It really was useless, though, so after about ten or twenty minutes of this, he stopped. It was time to move on, there was surviving to do.

    Aang jumped back over to where Kid was. Kid stood there, silently, observing something.

    Kid: I haven't felt madness like this since...
    Kid: But it couldn't be.
    Kid: Something's happening.
    Aang: What's happening.
    Kid: Madness is flooding into this world. We need to stop it before it consumes everything.
    Aang: What do you mean?
    Kid: Someone here must have performed a spell or something. All the way down there something's awakening. We need to stop it.
    Aang: Alright. I can get us over there quick, but you're going to have to hold on.

    Kid awkwardly grabs onto Aang as the Avatar pulls out his glider, opens it, and they burst through the sky towards Waterfall.

    Aang: Jeez, Kid, couldn't you be a bit more aerodynamic?

    -----

    Jones was trekking slowly through the rubble. The corspes of frogs, bugs, and... carrots? were strewn about the building. This was bad. And to make things worse, the rubble began to shift. More fell on the adventurer, who was luckily able to dodge most of it... and what was that? Yes! An opening easy enough for him to climb through was formed in the shifting of the bricks, so Jones quickly ran towards that. It would be easy enough to reach, but he'd have to climb on some rocks. Pushing some over towards near the hole, he got on top of them, and, assuming that the yelling of one of the rocks was just his addled imagination from the stress, he climbed up and out of the hole.

    Getting outside, it was colder, but at least he wasn't in the Ruins anymore.

    The last remnants of the Ruins collapse in on themselves. It doesn't look like anyone's going to be able to get in there anymore.

    The Ruins is destroyed.

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    Snowdin

    Sub-Zero reached the entrance of Snowdin town to see some crazy shit going on. Here's what it was.

    -----

    N entered the shop and bought some food to feed to his Pokemon. Exiting the shop, he called Reshiram back out and gave it a Bisicle. Reshiram seemed to be better, and he recalled the Pokemon, as it was fucking massive and people were starting to stare. Some monsters came up to him.

    Monster dude: Hey, did you hear? There's just been a murder!
    N: A murder? That's awful!
    Monster dude: Yeah, it is! There's an awful lot of you newcomers, and one of them got completely incinerated! We don't know how, but everyone thinks it was this skeleton dude.
    N: Huh, that's weird. I'd prefer to stay out of it, I don't like getting messed up with this stuff.
    Monster dude: Alright, man, but be careful. Someone out there's a killer.
    N: Thank you, you be careful too.

    -----

    L had finally exited the library, and after talking to lady monster walking her pet bunny, he got the gist of the story. As all good investigators should, he headed to the crime scene.

    -----

    Jack Skellington, Undyne, and Atticus Finch are at the courtroom, completing questioning. It wasn't going anywhere, and this made Atticus even more mad, seemingly even angrier than Undyne. This was uncharacteristically odd of him.

    -----

    Phoenix and Cole had roped off a crime scene. In all technicality, they shouldn't be working together, but no one really cared, as the justice system was rarely used nowadays anyways.

    Phoenix: Alright. Here's what I've found so far as far as clues.

    "I found this lying on the ground about 20 feet from where Jack was standing. This is odd, but it's technically the murder weapon. It's dented on one side."
    Stray Pumpkin added to Court Record

    "These are the... uh... remains of the victim. Not much else to say here. They're mixed in with some orange substance, though, it seems like pumpkin goop... but I don't know if it is."
    47's Ashes added to Court Record

    "This is a map of the entire area."
    Snowdin North Map added to Court Record

    "Now, as we're in the Underground here, I've got a machine running some test on the levels of fire magic in the area. Those results are here. As you can see, Jack clearly summoned a fire spell, but there also was an anomaly at one short time. We're still running the numbers.
    Fire Magic Log added to Court Record

    "You've taken the liberty of surveying everyone in town on time of the murder, so here's who we have."
    Phoenix Wright, Cole Phelps, L, N, Jack Skellington, Agent 47, Atticus Finch, Grillby, Papyrus, Sans, Undyne, Monster Kid, and various NPCs are added to the Court Record."

    Phoenix: With this all in mind... I don't know what to think. It SEEMS like Jack did it, as there's no other explanation. We need to explore that anomaly.

    Phoenix and Cole left the crime scene to head to the River Person's boat and run a test at Alphys's lab.

    As they left, L arrived at the scene and did some more investigation.

    L: What's this?

    L picked up two small, sturdy feathery things. They were a bit like scales... but also not.

    L: Huh.

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    Waterfall

    Godzilla roars and heads east towards Hotland, crashing through the scenery. He is quickly approaching Kane, who is driving straight towards him. Kane, seeing the ground shake, sits up and gets alert. Things were getting whack.

    Groot has made it past Godzilla, and he hastens his pace, heading towards Snowdin.

    Raimundo and Asgore are almost to Snowdin.

    Mewtwo is flying above Waterfall, noticing the giant monsters and looking for the other Pokemon.

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    Hotland

    Eggman and Metal Sonic head towards Waterfall.

    Ronald McDonald stops outside Alphys's lab, and notices a river station. He could catch up this way. Ronald walks down that way and waits for the boat.

    Vi is catching her breath inside Alphys's lab.

    Joker stops before he reaches the lab. There were people there. It was best to stay back for a little. He needed to get in there, though...

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    Core

    Peach is leaving the Core. She's done with this shit.

    Thor gets more aggressive with his fight and starts getting more ruthless, quickly beginning to overpower the super-healing mutant. If he were able to get the perfect hit, he could destroy him once and for all by eliminating his head, after all. Wolverine saw the fury in the god's eyes and backed down.

    Wolverine: Bub, look, I never meant to attack you, you need to calm down.

    Wolverine is sparing Thor.

    Thor: Verily, you are a great evil, and it is my duty to eliminate you.

    Thor fights.


    Wolverine had sheathed his claws and was caught off guard when the god rushed towards him, and quickly Thor pinned him down, kneeling on his arms so the claws couldn't do anything. With the speed of a god, he got ready to swing Mjolnir, which he had put back at his side.

    But it wouldn't budge.

    Thor tugged more at his weapon and tries to pick it up, but nothing works.

    He was no longer worthy.

    Wolverine uses this confusion to get out of the pin, up on his feet, and to take his claws and slice off Thor's head.

    Spoiler: 
    Death 04: Thor
    Killer: Wolverine



    Wolverine: Looks like you weren't Loki this time, bub.

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    Snowdin: The Mysterious Room

    A flood of madness fills the room. Kefka is unaffected by it, because he already is completely fucking insane.

    Cthulhu's physical form continues to materialize in Waterfall, the eldritch energy surging from the room to the dank area. More eldritch power escapes and enters the mind of Ronald McDonald.

    --------------------------------------------------------------
    Uncharted

    Bill Cipher is in limbo between dimensions.

    Red is coming soon.

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    TOTAL ALIVE: 26
    TOTAL GAME KILLS: 4
    Sweet Tooth: 1
    Jack Skellington: 1
    Cthulhu: 1
    Wolverine: 1

    TOTAL NPC KILLS: 2
    Kefka: 1
    Godzilla: 1


    TEAMS
    Aang and Death the Kid
    Eggman and Metal Sonic
    Raimundo and Asgore (NON COMPETITOR)
    Joker and Temmies (NON COMPETITOR)
    Phoenix and Cole

    Last edited by Lancer; 01-08-2016 at 08:01 PM.
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