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    yeah okay i want a place to dump shit through the art of some edgy poetry, cause that's always been a good release for me. i don't care if anyone reads it or doesn't, i just wanted a place where i could let it all out.

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    I. Admit

    Something goes wrong,
    "No big deal"
    Tends to be a typical response.
    I sit and nod,
    Because in my mind,
    I'm somewhere else.
    Like a tangent gets set off,
    When you lie and expect me not to know.
    Trust me,
    I've known for some time.
    When it all crumbles,
    It's "No big deal".
    When I crumble,
    It's "No big deal".
    I hate to break it to you,
    But we mutually know,
    That's not the truth.
    Straighten up,
    You've known me long enough
    To admit that, yes,
    It's a big fucking deal.
    When you notice that,
    You will notice me.
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    II. Impact

    Honesty,
    What an unlikely bunch.
    People would warn me,
    "Stay away from them."
    They said you were bad for me.
    You're good at this game,
    I'm bad at it.
    I'm still a novice.
    But all of you have made me one of yours.
    The heat waves rise and you stay as a team.
    You say you rely on me.
    You include me.
    Despite the awful warnings I didn't heed,
    You guys have made my experience good.
    You would...
    Don't use...
    None of...
    All of these common phrases,
    How have you assimilated me,
    Better than my own friends?
    I don't know why I'm special,
    Why I'm special to you,
    But I thank you for it.
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    Impact is really really good. You should remove "fucking" from the end there, doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem.
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    III. Someone Who Matters

    Welp, I guess you actually did it this time.
    I remember when I was studying to try
    And become someone like you,
    That was when you confided,
    Told me that the world was out
    To get you, especially in our electric home.
    You said you had thoughts of leaving,
    I told you to stay.
    You inspired me.
    You were my mentor.
    You got me to places,
    To push myself in a way
    That none of the others could.
    And that held you off.
    If only you would've told me,
    Told me this time,
    Then things may have changed.
    But I shouldn't dwell,
    Only give you my send off.
    I wish only the best,
    Good luck buddy!
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    IV. Hannah

    Let's go back,
    I remember when we were small,
    Together like buddies,
    Both idiots.
    Happy idiots, at least.
    God, I remember how you've always been forward.
    If something has no point,
    You have no interest.
    Everyone here can feel the lights,
    Feel them when you enter a room.
    Even those we stay away from know it.
    So how is that you don't know it?
    You were talking about engineering rockets,
    Solving problems, and deconstructing religion,
    All when we are kids.
    You're a genius,
    So how come you can't realize it?
    Have you not noticed those who yearn for you?
    Remember when you were crying,
    Over that asshole?
    Three of us were there for you.
    You declaimed that you were far out of anyone's reach.
    But you haven't observed,
    You of all people haven't observed,
    That everyone's reaching for you,
    And you're the one pushing yourself out of reach.
    I hope some day one of us can reach you.
    Because, as long as you're out there,
    You scare us.
    You've changed lives, for god's sake,
    And if you wanted to you could change yours.
    Don't drift off.
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    Damn, IV really left me speechless
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    Quote Originally Posted by Turtlesauce View Post
    Damn, IV really left me speechless
    Thanks Turtle! I can only write poetry when it's about something real. I just think about what's on my mind and it flows through my fingers. Cheesy, I know, but that's how IV was created.
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    V. Late Nights

    You know, it all depends on mind state,
    Sometimes I love you,
    But all the other times,
    You provide no fun.
    I don't get why people see it as my fault.
    Do you think I'd want to be wide awake,
    With my mind a race car at 2 am,
    When all I want is a minute of sleep?
    I'd love to get it normal,
    But I'm afraid that won't ever happen.
    Every time it's 3 am, I feel like,
    It's my first moment alive.
    By the time it reaches 4,
    I feel like it's my last.
    Why, oh why, do you have to serve,
    As a constant reminder?
    Dead relatives,
    Old memories,
    Painful memories,
    Thoughts of death,
    Hot regret,
    By the time I've woken up,
    I'm reminded that my life
    Is a mysterious journey.
    Half the time, I want it to end,
    But there's no flag in sight.
    I really wish I could stop,
    I could stop my problems.
    But according to the only,
    Only ones who can get me,
    Get me checked out by someone,
    Someone who knows what they're doing...
    'It's no big deal, just go to sleep'
    Trust me, I wish I could.
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    Absolutely beautiful. Your sentimental side is really showing in these poems, and I really love them. Some parts of V I absolutely adore, especially

    "Every time it's 3 am, I feel like,
    It's my first moment alive.
    By the time it reaches 4,
    I feel like it's my last."

    And

    "'It's no big deal, just go to sleep'
    Trust me, I wish I could."

    These really hit close to home. I love this
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. Skeleturtle View Post
    Absolutely beautiful. Your sentimental side is really showing in these poems, and I really love them. Some parts of V I absolutely adore, especially

    "Every time it's 3 am, I feel like,
    It's my first moment alive.
    By the time it reaches 4,
    I feel like it's my last."

    And

    "'It's no big deal, just go to sleep'
    Trust me, I wish I could."

    These really hit close to home. I love this
    Thanks, Turtle!

    I'm trying to really channel something I haven't before and haven't really seen people do on here.
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