YT Rap Battle - Beat help!

[ZoroarkPKMN]

Thank you! And, now that I realize it...my rap SUCKS compared to those lines. This battle might be really bad, guys.

I could help you. Give me some lines you aren't happy with and I'll fix 'em up for you.

[Froggy]

Thank you! And, now that I realize it...my rap SUCKS compared to those lines. This battle might be really bad, guys.

I could help you. Give me some lines you aren't happy with and I'll fix 'em up for you.

Well, it's not just that. I was also trying to match it up with the beat i have. Okay, When I record it, I'll put it on soundcloud and see what you guys think. So then I'll know.

[ZoroarkPKMN]

Thank you! And, now that I realize it...my rap SUCKS compared to those lines. This battle might be really bad, guys.

I could help you. Give me some lines you aren't happy with and I'll fix 'em up for you.

Well, it's not just that. I was also trying to match it up with the beat i have. Okay, When I record it, I'll put it on soundcloud and see what you guys think. So then I'll know.

If you're not fine with it, I'll help you.

[Froggy]

Thank you! And, now that I realize it...my rap SUCKS compared to those lines. This battle might be really bad, guys.

I could help you. Give me some lines you aren't happy with and I'll fix 'em up for you.

Well, it's not just that. I was also trying to match it up with the beat i have. Okay, When I record it, I'll put it on soundcloud and see what you guys think. So then I'll know.

If you're not fine with it, I'll help you.

I'll see when the audio is finished.

[Froggy]

OKAY, I just finished the audio! It's not the best, but give me your opinions! I worked really hard on it. Let me know if its good or bad. The video will come whenever i film it:
http://soundcloud.com/user764068650/bat ... bond-audio

[Froggy]

Anyone? Please, I need FeedBack.

[ZoroarkPKMN]

The rhyme flow doesn't really match the beat. Try being more slow. Listen to the beat as you record. But the lines were pretty good.

[Froggy]

Okay, I listened to it again a couple times...and I REALLY suck. Like, you can't understand what I'm saying. Should I continue with the battle? Or let it drop? I'm sad.

[ZoroarkPKMN]

Okay, I listened to it again a couple times...and I REALLY suck. Like, you can't understand what I'm saying. Should I continue with the battle? Or let it drop? I'm sad.

Here's an idea: Hire voice actors. Maybe get some forumers to do voices, and then perform the video with a friend. You might also need *coughanannouncercough*

[Froggy]

Okay, I listened to it again a couple times...and I REALLY suck. Like, you can't understand what I'm saying. Should I continue with the battle? Or let it drop? I'm sad.

Here's an idea: Hire voice actors. Maybe get some forumers to do voices, and then perform the video with a friend. You might also need *coughanannouncercough*

Yeah, I know...I kind of just wanted to do it myself (Not the announcer haha) But this is my first one. Maybe my second one will be better? I don't know, and I don't think I'm gonna use an announcer. I don't know yet.