Awesome and thanks! :DOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Awesome and thanks! :DOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Let's make a video for the ERB crew: http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...898#post371898
I'm very sorry about how late this is, but I said I would get it out today, so I will. Bugs Bunny vs. Bear Grylls.
[spoiler:279dpv9p]Bugs Bunny-Round 1: A very good verse. I'm mainly impressed with the Peter Cottontail line, the roach line and the last line. Really clever verse. 8.5/10
Bear Grylls-Round 1: The first line and the last line are good, but everything in between is just average. It doesn't beat Bugs' verse. 7.5/10
Bugs Bunny-Round 2: Once again, very good verse. The two best lines are the survivalist line and the excellent Man vs. Wild line. 8/10
Bear Grylls-Round 2: I think it beats his first verse. The second half of the verse is all very good. A nice comeback, but not quite enough to earn him a win. 8.5/10
Overall: Great battle. I enjoyed a huge chunk of it for sure. The lines were very well thought out, which shows you gave it a lot of effort. 8/10
Final Results:
Bugs Bunny: 16.5/20
Bear Grylls: 16/20
Total Score: 40.5/50[/spoiler:279dpv9p]
Thanks! I'll try to make them better!Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Let's make a video for the ERB crew: http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...898#post371898
Now I'm reviewing sunkistluva and Roy49's collaboration battle of Charles Manson vs. The Big Bad Wolf.
[spoiler:lyedp9bc]Charles Manson-Round 1: The beginning is good. The 3 little pigs line is pretty clever. Not a bad verse. 7.5/10
The Big Bad Wolf-Round 1: The only line is really liked in this verse was the Hanson hairdo line. This verse wasn't quite as good as Charles Manson's. 6.5/10
Charles Manson-Round 2: The National Dog Show line was decent. The last line is OK, too. Alright, I guess. 7.5/10
The Big Bad Wolf-Round 2: The shave line is pretty good, and the last line is good too. A good verse, but doesn't earn him the win. 8/10
Overall: This one is OK. It's not as good as your other battles, but it does have some very clever lines. I'd say it was fairly decent. 7/10
Final Results:
Charles Manson: 15/20
The Big Bad Wolf: 14.5/20
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:lyedp9bc]
yay! Im next! For like 5 days in a row lol
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Could you also review my Harry Potter vs. Luke Skywalker Part 2? I want to know what you think of it, compared to my first one.
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(Thanks to Redbugman for the awesome avatar)
Time to review Spartica4Real's Bill Cosby vs. Tosh.0.
[spoiler:9sapd8fo]Tosh.0-Round 1: The opening viral line is good. Another good line is the blowing the directors line. Good verse. 7.5/10
Bill Cosby-Round 1: Once again a decent first line. The last line is also good, and there are a few OK lines in the middle as well. 8.5/10
Tosh.0-Round 2: I'm talking about everything else said. The Moo line is funny, and his last few lines aren't bad either. Pretty good overall. 8.5/10
Bill Cosby-Round 2: The plow line is great, the rest is OK. A close battle, but I think he loses. 7/10
Overall: You really did well with this battle. Possibly my favorite of yours so far. Just keep putting tons of thought and effort into every single line you put and you can keep this up. Here's the 40 you wanted, you earned it. 8.5/10
Final Results:
Tosh.0: 16/20
Bill Cosby: 15.5/20
Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:9sapd8fo]
Sure.Originally Posted by Lieutenant Roy
can u review my vesta diss rap?
Sure.Originally Posted by TinSanE