Presidential Reviews

[Samos]

Here's my review of Krunch's Slenderman vs. Mr. Fantastic. Later today (hopefully) will be Kunckles vs. Mike Tyson.
[spoiler:176c4z96]Mr. Fantastic-Round 1: These are some smart lines. My favorites are the lines about his face, the pages and the last line. 8.5/10

Slenderman-Round 1: This is good too. The ending few lines are the most impressive. Still, not quite as good as Mr. Fantastic’s verse. 8/10

Mr. Fantastic-Round 2: The beginning is awesome, but it slows down after the first few lines. Still, pretty good. 7.5/10

Slenderman-Round 2: The Invisible Woman line flat out won it for Slenderman. The lines after are pretty good too. 8.5/10

Overall: I have to say, I was really impressed by this battle. The lines are actually very clever. Keep doing whatever you did to make this, because this was great. 8.5/10

Final Results:
Mr. Fantastic: 16/20
Slenderman: 16.5/20

Total Score: 41/50[/spoiler:176c4z96]

[Samos]

Well, my school got cancelled for the next two days, so that means I have more time to review. Here's Adonis' Knuckles vs. Mike Tyson. Next will be FoolMeNever's Slenderman vs. Bogeyman.
[spoiler:3eawr8n8]Knuckles-Round 1: This verse is OK. I like the defeated line and the last line. The middle isn’t as clever. 7/10

Mike Tyson-Round 1: There are a few too many lines about the show. Not too clever, but I did think the knockout line was good. 6.5/10

Knuckles-Round 2: This is a big step up. The beginning and middle are great. The Knuckle Sandwich line was the best one of the battle. 8/10

Mike Tyson-Round 2: The last line is alright I guess, but this verse is not nearly as good as Knuckles’ second verse. It's still slightly better than Mike's first verse. 7/10

Overall: I believe I gave this tip to someone else earlier, but what you need to do is not only list facts about the rappers, but also make clever jokes about them. You’re on the right track. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Knuckles: 15/20
Mike Tyson: 13.5/20

Total Score: 36/50[/spoiler:3eawr8n8]

[Uprising]

Crossing my fingers that one of mine is done within the week, it seems like you have that kind of time now. Love the reviews still though!

[B.S.B]

Wow thats a lot of battles to review.

[Samos]

Well, despite what I said earlier, it looks like I will probably be reviewing Dr. Who vs. Doc Brown today. But first, here's my review of FoolMeNever's Slenderman vs. The Bogeyman.
[spoiler:31xx4i6h]Slenderman-Round 1: The children line is decent, and I suppose the last line, while rather predictable, was good too. Not terrible. 7.5/10

Bogeyman-Round 1: It gets OK at the end. I still wouldn’t call it as good as Slenderman’s first verse. 7/10

Slenderman-Round 2: This verse is more intimidating than clever. That’s not a bad thing, but it could be better. 7/10

Bogeyman-Round 2: The ending few lines are barely enough to win the battle for the Bogeyman. This was a good one. 8/10

Overall: This battle was OK. I think you can improve. After all, this was your first battle, and very few people have great first battles. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Slenderman: 14.5/20
Bogeyman: 15/20

Total Score: 37/50[/spoiler:31xx4i6h]

[Spars]

Lol, I still have the highest rated first FMRB yet. My Ketchum vs Darwin had 39.5. Highest 1st one yet!

[Uprising]

Lol, I still have the highest rated first FMRB yet. My Ketchum vs Darwin had 39.5. Highest 1st one yet!

My Eminem vs Steve Miller and Snoop Dogg/Lion vs Elvis ones are sure to get a perfect score!

[WoodenHornets]

yo hipstah could you review one of me and WWEFan's epic crap battles?

i would be happy if you reviewed Charlie Sheen vs Jesus XD

[Spars]

I meant I had the highest rated FMRB yet, that was that person's first one. My Ketchum vs Darwin was my first one and I got like a 40. My highest is a 41.5.

[Samos]

yo hipstah could you review one of me and WWEFan's epic crap battles?

i would be happy if you reviewed Charlie Sheen vs Jesus XD

Sounds interesting.