OK.Originally Posted by The Batman
OK.Originally Posted by The Batman
also can you review my Jack the Ripper vs Unabomber battle? xD
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Here's Funnybone's second Siri vs. GLaDOS. Next is WWEFan101's Jesse James vs. Al Capone.
[spoiler:1z5648zr]Siri-Round 1: The ending few lines are slightly better than the beginning ones. I think more jokes should be mad instead of just fact listing. 7/10
GLaDOS-Round 1: These lines are better. The jokes are funnier and more well thought out than Siri’s first verse. 8/10
Siri-Round 2: I wasn’t really impressed with this verse. Siri’s lines were not as clever as they could have been, sadly. 6.5/10
GLaDOS-Round 2: Not that great of a start, but around the ‘’Steve Jobs's sex toy’‘ line it improves. GLaDOS wins this battle, hands down. 7.5/10
Overall: A bit one-sided, and the lines in some parts aren’t too clever, but this battle does have some decent lines. Make more jokes about the facts and these can be good. 7/10
Final Results:
Siri: 13.5/20
GlaDOS: 15.5/20
Total Score: 36/50[/spoiler:1z5648zr]
Here's WWEFan101's Jesse James vs. Al Capone. Next will be his Ash Ketchum vs. Charles Darwin. Also, just to clarify, I don't watch the ERBs until the come out on youtube with video, so I won't be reviewing Moses vs. Santa Claus until then.
[spoiler:39h9hk9d]Al Capone: The beginning of this verse’s second half is rather impressive. Not the best verse, but still pretty good. 14.5/20
Jesse James: A lot of these lines are above average. I wouldn’t necessarily call them great lines, but above average. 15/20
Overall: This battle was alright. I would recommend making more jokes instead of just listing facts, which you do a little better in your later battles. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Al Capone: 14.5/20
Jesse James: 15/20
Total Score: 37/50[[/spoiler:39h9hk9d]
Hey, on your 1st page, it doesn't say my Chris Griffin vs Luke Skywalker. I think it was because I asked for you to switch, and you said ok, and put batman vs heisenberg toward the bottom, but forgot to put Chris at the top
OK, it's changed now.Originally Posted by The Batman
I wanted chris griffin vs luke switched with my batman battle. Also, I think it was a little higher on the list....Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Here's WWEFan101's Ash Ketchum vs. Charles Darwin. Next is Sinister Spike's Edward Cullen vs. Albert Wesker.
[spoiler:2qsvqu6d]Charles Darwin: I was somewhat impressed with the pokemon references. The last line isn’t that bad either. 16/20
Ash Ketchum: Honestly, not too impressive. He didn’t have very many lines, and the ones he did have could have been more clever. 11.5/20
Overall: This battle seems a bit one-sided, but it’s still pretty enjoyable. Still, try to make more jokes about the facts instead of just listing them. 7/10
Final Results:
Charles Darwin: 16/20
Ash Ketchum: 11.5/20
Total Score: 35.5/50[/spoiler:2qsvqu6d]
My first battle reviewed... So close but so far away xD
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Can you review my Doomsday introduction?