OK.Originally Posted by Erblover98
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Change mine to Marvin the Martian vs Keroro Gunso?
Sure.
I apologize for the lack of reviews. I've had a busy holiday season. Here's Adonis' Burger King vs. Ronald McDonald. Next is FoolMeNever's Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara.
[spoiler:36ri4z9m]Burger King-Round 1: I wasn’t too impressed until the last line. The last line was absolutely hilarious. 7.5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 1: The last few lines about buns and spit were both good lines. Better than Burger King’s first verse, but not by too much. 8.5/10
Burger King-Round 2: Again, one line really stands out from the rest. This time I’m talking about being fresh. Another great line from him. 7.5/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 2: This verse isn’t all that great. The last line is the only one that saves the win for him. 7/10
Overall: I think this was a good battle. Some of the lines were really great, while others weren’t. Still, those few amazing lines save this battle. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Burger King: 15/20
Ronald McDonald: 15.5/20
Total Score: 38/50[/spoiler:36ri4z9m]
Also can you review Santa vs Chesire cat instead of Wily vs Stewie? XD
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I am PolarBore's official Assistant Mangager (again)
OK.
Here's FoolMeNever's Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara. Next is the Extreme Collab of Hulk vs. Tyson.
[spoiler:ikfl6juz]Sosuke Aizen-Round 1: The beginning is mainly just facts and the jokes aren’t that funny. The ending, however, really improves this verse. 8/10
Izaya Orihara-Round 1: The ‘’golf ball’‘ line is pretty funny. The last line is too, but it’s not as good as Sosuke’s first verse. 7.5/10
Sosuke Aizen-Round 2: This verse has a good beginning, an average middle, and a good ending. Nothing incredible, but still good. 8/10
Izaya Orihara-Round 2: The skull line is good, and again, the last line is good. Not enough for a win though. 8/10
Overall: Some pretty good references. None of the verses are completely exceptional, and some of them aren’t really jokes, but I did really like the jokes that were made. 8/10
Final Results:
Sosuke Aizen: 16/20
Izaya Orihara: 15.5/20
Total Score: 39.5/50[/spoiler:ikfl6juz]
I am so excited for my reviews.
Here's the Extreme Collab Hulk vs. Tyson. Next is WWEFan vs. Sunkistluva.
[spoiler:2utcn0x5]Mike Tyson-Round 1: I like the Tyson chicken line, and the two lines that follow. This is a decent verse, but the jokes could have been thought out better. 7.5/10
Bruce Banner-Round 1: This verse is hilarious. The ears line is awesome, as is the b*tch line and the last line. It’s just funny. 8.5/10
Mike Tyson-Round 2: Again, the lines have potential, but aren’t executed quite well enough. I do, however, like the bike line and the living steroid line. 7.5/10
The Hulk-Round 2: These lines aren’t as funny as Banner’s lines, but they are still clever. The best lines are the Punch-Out references. 7.5/10
Overall: Some of the lines could have been worded better, but that doesn’t keep this from being a great battle. The lines are often hilarious, and when it does something right, it does it really well. 8/10
Final Results:
Mike Tyson: 15/20
Bruce Banner/The Hulk: 16/20
Total Score: 39/50[/spoiler:2utcn0x5]
Bon Vivant of Violet
I agree with everything you had to say on the Extreme Collab one :D
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