Presidential Reviews

[SuperRapz]

Go ahead and drop my placement to the bottom. I have a feeling you are going to get there before I finish.

[Samos]

Go ahead and drop my placement to the bottom. I have a feeling you are going to get there before I finish.

Alright then.

[Samos]

Here's SBS' Doomsday Introduction. I couldn't think of categories, so sorry if this isn't too detailed. Next is Beowulf vs. King Arthur.
[spoiler:33h32d2n]Overall: This is actually very interesting. I really think it’s cool how each one of the groups is an actual country. It also makes sense that ERBoH is the main leader and has lived for the longest time. The end is really exciting, and really makes me want to read more. The one criticism I have is that the sentences sort of end too early. I know that’s supposed to mean pauses when reading, but it seems like there are too many of them. Anyway, this is really clever and really exciting. 8.5/10[/spoiler:33h32d2n]

[Samos]

Here's Platinum's Beowulf vs. King Arthur. Next is Bob the Builder vs. Spongebob Squarepants.
[spoiler:2uwc6p3k]Beowulf-Round 1: The first part of this verse isn’t too impressive. Around the round table line though, it really picks up. Most of the following lines are very good. 8/10

King Arthur-Round 1: This verse also doesn’t get that good until the end. The last two lines are both really good. 7.5/10

Beowulf-Round 2: The line about his wife could have been better, but it’s still very good. The following line about his tutor, wife and dad was hilarious. 8/10

King Arthur-Round 2: This is quite an improvement from his first verse. The limp weapon line was incredible, and the few lines that follow are enough to secure King Arthur the win. 9/10

Overall: This was a very well written battle. I’m not sure what to criticize about it. You really seem to do everything that a good rap battle needs. 8.5/10

Final Results:
Beowulf: 16/20
King Arthur: 16.5/20

Total Score: 40.5/50[/spoiler:2uwc6p3k]

[Platinum]

Here's Platinum's Beowulf vs. King Arthur. Next is Bob the Builder vs. Spongebob Squarepants.
[spoiler:18vjptjm]Beowulf-Round 1: The first part of this verse isn’t too impressive. Around the round table line though, it really picks up. Most of the following lines are very good. 8/10

King Arthur-Round 1: This verse also doesn’t get that good until the end. The last two lines are both really good. 7.5/10

Beowulf-Round 2: The line about his wife could have been better, but it’s still very good. The following line about his tutor, wife and dad was hilarious. 8/10

King Arthur-Round 2: This is quite an improvement from his first verse. The limp weapon line was incredible, and the few lines that follow are enough to secure King Arthur the win. 9/10

Overall: This was a very well written battle. I’m not sure what to criticize about it. You really seem to do everything that a good rap battle needs. 8.5/10

Final Results:
Beowulf: 16/20
King Arthur: 16.5/20

Total Score: 40.5/50[/spoiler:18vjptjm]

M-hm. Thank you very much for that. Comparing my score to some others here, it seems I've done pretty well. Thank you very much. My confidence has been restored. I was actually thinking that maybe I was unfair because according to me I felt like I had produced better lines for Beowulf, but since you feel Arthur won that apparently was not a problem. Out of the two who have given their opinion, one have thought Beowulf won and one have thought Arthur won. I am positively pleased with myself. Thank you for the review.

[rangernumberx]

Can you please review my Ash and Pikachu vs Shaggy and Scooby? I'll put the link here when it's up.

[Samos]

Here's Uprising's Bob the Builder vs. Spongebob Squarepants. Next is his Ozzy Osbourne vs. Superman rematch.
[spoiler:2c5o8jcu]Bob the Builder-Round 1: A great opener, and the few following lines are hilarious as well, but after that, it feels rushed. 8/10

Spongebob Squarepants-Round 1: The opening line here is also pretty good. The last line is decent, but most of the lines in between aren’t that good. 7.5/10

Bob the Builder-Round 2: The crew line is kind of funny. The rest of the verse could definitely be better. 7/10

Spongebob Squarepants-Round 2: The first line is pretty good. The last line is alright, but it could be better. It’s not enough to win the battle for Spongebob. 7/10

Overall: This battle seems sort of rushed. It has some good lines, but there isn’t enough clever humor in them, and a lot of the lines don’t really have a purpose. Still, a good battle. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Bob the Builder: 15/20
Spongebob Squarepants: 14.5/20

Total Score: 37/50[/spoiler:2c5o8jcu]

[Uprising]

Here's Uprising's Bob the Builder vs. Spongebob Squarepants. Next is his Ozzy Osbourne vs. Superman rematch.
[spoiler:2adcx8vc]Bob the Builder-Round 1: A great opener, and the few following lines are hilarious as well, but after that, it feels rushed. 8/10

Spongebob Squarepants-Round 1: The opening line here is also pretty good. The last line is decent, but most of the lines in between aren’t that good. 7.5/10

Bob the Builder-Round 2: The crew line is kind of funny. The rest of the verse could definitely be better. 7/10

Spongebob Squarepants-Round 2: The first line is pretty good. The last line is alright, but it could be better. It’s not enough to win the battle for Spongebob. 7/10

Overall: This battle seems sort of rushed. It has some good lines, but there isn’t enough clever humor in them, and a lot of the lines don’t really have a purpose. Still, a good battle. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Bob the Builder: 15/20
Spongebob Squarepants: 14.5/20

Total Score: 37/50[/spoiler:2adcx8vc]

Me and Adonis did make the battle fairly quickly. I recall having a bit to do around then but wanting the collab done and out of the way as soon as I could. But I think that it still turned out great!

[Intellectual]

Hello, I've been reading your reviews, and I really like them! Could you review Pop Filter vs Me at the Fan Tournament 2.2? Here's a link:

http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic...268158#p268158

So, just review my verse, and also Filter's verse. It was my first tournament verse, so I want to know how good I did and what I can improve upon.

[Samos]

Hello, I've been reading your reviews, and I really like them! Could you review Pop Filter vs Me at the Fan Tournament 2.2? Here's a link:

http://www.erboh.com/forum/viewtopic...268158#p268158

So, just review my verse, and also Filter's verse. It was my first tournament verse, so I want to know how good I did and what I can improve upon.

Sure.