Could you also review my Dracula Vs Edward? Again...link is in sig.
Could you also review my Dracula Vs Edward? Again...link is in sig.
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Could you put an upcoming battle of mine on the list please?
Funnybone, do you want me to review your cover?
Here's my review of Redbugman's Gordon Ramsay vs. Ronald McDonald. Next is John Wayne vs. Buffalo Bill.
[spoiler:3riv4kbw]Gordon Ramsay-Round 1: A lot of the lines are good, like the Hell's Kitchen, mooing and pudding lines. Some lines seem kind of pointless, but the good outweighs the bad. 8/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 1: I wasn’t too impressed with this verse. That being said, the McChicken line is pretty good, and the last line is awesome. 7.5/10
Gordon Ramsay-Round 2: There are a few good lines, mainly the McWrap line and the Mario Batali lines. But it seems like the verse is more emotion than clever lines. 8/10
Ronald McDonald-Round 2: The Donald Trump lines and plastic lines are both pretty good. I don’t think it’s enough for Ronald to win though. 7.5/10
Overall: While the battle isn’t fantastic, it has a few enjoyable lines. It’s fun to read, and that’s the main thing that matters. 8/10
Final Results:
Gordon Ramsay: 16/20
Ronald McDonald: 15/20
Total Score: 39/50[/spoiler:3riv4kbw]
What Lance Armstrong reference?Originally Posted by HeroSamuel
The fellow just worked for me, it's no more of a reference to Armstrong then "The Wrath of Khan" in Columbus vs. Kirk was actually a Khan reference.
I also don't really get what you mean when you say that most of my liens were irrelevant.
Gonad has no nads pass it on!!!!11!Spoiler:
I thought it was a Lance Armstrong reference since it was worded in the same way Lance Armstrong worded it in the rap battle.Originally Posted by Mikhail Gunachev
What I meant was that some of your lines seem like they didn't really have anything to do with either of you, like ''Don't come to battle just 'cause you think you're tough.'', ''If you think you have a chance, you're majorly wrong.'', ''My victories effortless! I've hardly started blinking.'', and a few other lines. It seems like those lines could've been used in any battle. They weren't really references (at least as far as I know).
The first two were disses, disses are relevant.Originally Posted by HeroSamuel
The last one sucked, admittedly, the second verse was the weaker one.
Gonad has no nads pass it on!!!!11!Spoiler:
Here's my review of Funnybone's John Wayne vs. Buffalo Bill. Next is the John Wayne vs. Buffalo Bill iTUnes cover (I got the impression that you wanted me to review it).
[spoiler:13qtyjs0]John Wayne-Round 1: The Sneak and Snitch line and the chicken Bill line are both alright, but the kidney line is even better. That line was actually really nice. 8/10
Buffalo Bill-Round 1: The only line in the verse I really enjoyed was the Wayne line. The ending line could’ve been good if there was a joke, but instead it was just a statement. 6.5/10
John Wayne-Round 2: The Internet line was OK, but it seemed a bit unrelated and random. I kind of like the Shepherd Of The Hills line, but there’s not much else in this verse. 7/10
Buffalo Bill-Round 2: The line about the names was pretty funny. I didn’t really enjoy any of the other lines. 6.5/10
Overall: The battle is alright, but there are a few lines that feel out of place. There were some lines that really stood out, and if there were a few more references and jokes, I would really enjoy it. 7/10
Final Results:
John Wayne: 15/20
Buffalo Bill: 13/20
Total Score: 35/50[/spoiler:13qtyjs0]
Can you review ERBParodies Macklemore vs Eminem? :D
it will be kinda a challenge since its got 7 rappers in it.
Check out the forum topic for Season 4!
Ask QUESTIONS and make REQUESTS!
http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...odies-Season-4
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Can you also review my Black Widow Vs Wonder Woman?
Be warned...this is a VERY LONG battle.
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