Dion: There aren’t that many references made in this verse, but the references that are made are all pretty good lines. The best references are the fagt line, the Rob line and the Square line, and they make the verse worth reading. 7.5/10
Rob: There are some good points made in the verse that could’ve made for some nice jokes, but most of them don’t attempt any jokes. The best lines would have to be the puns, like the VBullsh*tting line and the own line. 7/10
Froggy: I can’t really think of that much to say about this verse in particular. It has some good lines, like the Rob the Robot line, the DylanDiggeryDoo line and the poison line, but the other lines in the verse aren’t that clever. 7.5/10
BobbyBobber: I suppose this verse flows better than the other verses do, even though I try not to use the word ‘’flow’‘ about a written battle. I didn't think much of it at first, but after looking at it closer, it has some of the funniest lines of the whole battle. 8/10
Lawlzor: It has good lines, don’t get me wrong, but there are a bit too many filler lines in this verse (either that or maybe I just don’t get them). The last line is too obvious as a segway into the next verse, it needs more subtlety. 6/10
Axel: The West Coast line, the Havok line and the Oregon lines are all pretty nice references, and the circus line, while a bit unrelated to either rapper, is a good line as well. The end of the verse isn’t that good, but the first part makes up for it. 7.5/10
Noremac: The ‘’host with the most’‘ thing starts to get kind of old here, but I love the art attack line. There are a few decent lines scattered throughout the verse after that, but the only really good one is the Hard with his Paint line. 7/10
YellowNerd: This is the kind of verse I was looking for here in this huge battle. Lots of great puns, direct jabs at each person in the battle, and while the flow is a bit tricky to imagine at parts, this is the best verse of the battle. 8.5/10
Overall: I won’t be judging it, but I love the Scatman part. Anyway, I think this battle might’ve been a bit too long. Some parts aren’t that good, some parts are really nice, so overall, it was a fun read. It could have been better though. 7.5/10
Total Score:
Dion: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Rob: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Froggy: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
BobbyBobber: 8/10 (equivalent to 16/20)
Lawlzor: 6/10 (equivalent to 12/20)
Axel: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Noremac: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
YellowNerd: 8.5/10 (equivalent to 17/20)
Total Score: 66.5/90 (equivalent to 37/50)
Originally Posted by Milotic
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