Beat: The first beat is pretty good, I must say. It's got a creepy feel to it, but at the same time, it's still fairly catchy. The Hoody and Masky beat is a big repetitive, but the Eyeless Jack is just as good as the first beat, if not better. The Smile Dog beat is kind of boring, the SCP-173 is awesome, the BEN beat is interesting, but a bit too slow, the MissingNO beat is really good and the Zalgo beat isn't quite intense enough. Overall, the good definitely outweighs the bad. 8/10
Costumes: The great costumes would be Slenderman, Jeff and Jack. Hoody and Masky have the right faces for sure, but the clothes aren't right. Smile Dog, SCP and Missingno are examples of characters that really didn't need to be played by people, and probably should've just been edited in like BEN. The costumes aren't perfect, but the good ones are really good. 7/10
Slender Man: His first verse is alright. I like the Arrival line, the class line and the bathroom floor line, although I must admit that I don't get the profound line. The second verse has a lot of references, but the only ones that really work well are the static haze and the bus stop lines. 7.5/10
Jeff the Killer: Is it just me or does Jeff the Killer have a lot of lines with the ''You may be _____, but I'm ________'' format? It's not that much of a problem, but it does get a bit repetitive. Anyway, the best lines in the first verse are the hentai line and the photobomb line and the nest lines in the second verse are the Hospice line and the Teletubby line. He's pretty even with Slender Man. 7.5/10
Hoody and Masky: This is one of those verses I find has a lot of facts and references, but there aren't that many jokes made about the references, like the ''going after kids'' line. It has some good lines, like the cameras line and the pages line, but this is probably the weakest verse so far. 7/10
Eyeless Jack: Eyeless Jack seems to be the most popular rapper in the battle among fans, but I can't really see why, because the lyrics aren't any more clever than the other ones in this battle. The liver line and the Mitch line are both decent, and I would like the last line more if it wasn't basically already used in the battle. 7.5/10
Smile Dog: There are some O.K. dog puns at the beginning, but they're nothing that clever, and after the beginning, the verse is pretty underwhelming. This is probably one of the weaker characters in the battle, but it's not horrible. 7/10
SCP-173: Holy crap, this verse is possibly one of the biggest step ups I've ever seen in a fan made battle. The D-Class line, the Euclid line, the Special victory Procedures line, the Containing or Protecting and the last line are all some of the best lines in the battle. 9.5/10
BEN: Now this would be the biggest step down in the battle, and is probably the weakest character in the entire battle. The .wmv line is actually very impressive and stands out, but the rest of the lines are not that clever or funny at all. 6.5/10
MissingNO: I don't really have that much to say about this verse aside from that I like the 128 times line, the Mother Goose line and the Marowak line. The verse is probably above the average in this battle, but it's nothing too spectacular. 8/10
Zalgo: This verse has a bit too many generic insults, like assh*les, ******s and b*tch, which is probably a result of this verse being too unnecessarily long. It definitely has some strong lines, but I feel like you guys didn't need to make this verse as long as it was. 7/10
Overall: Let me start by saying that editing-wise, this was hands down the greatest battle you've ever done, and you'll probably never top this in that regard. I think that it's a bit lacking lyrically, and it's a bit too long, but you guys have certainly come a long way since the first few battles. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Slender Man: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Jeff the Killer: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Hoody and Masky: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Eyeless Jack: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Smile Dog: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
SCP-173: 9.5/10 (equivalent to 19/20)
BEN: 6.5/10 (equivalent to 13/20)
MissingNO: 8/10 (equivalent to 16/20)
Zalgo: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Total Score: 90/120
Bon Vivant of Violet
Originally Posted by HeroSamuel
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