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Bon Vivant of Violet
Thanks.
mom said its my turn to have mod back
Originally Posted by Juiz
Can i review it?
hey
Bon Vivant of Violet
I just released one of the 2 battles I wanted you to review. So,you can do that one before the other!
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Dis Raps For Hire 2 review time.
[spoiler:3bwo93yu]Intro: This one is short, but sweet. I love the part when he punts the dog and the part where he shoves aside a lady holding papers and they fly everywhere. Kicking down the door is a nice finish. 8.5/10
Beat: Once again, too repetitive. At least this beat is intense, fast, and at parts catchy. It's a pretty good beat. 8/10
Dis Rap: I love how he takes a typo and turns it into an awesome line. This rap is full of clever and insulting disses, like the diversity line, the water bottle line, the majority line and the finishing burn. There are some others too, and overall, it just flows and sounds great. 9/10
Total Score: 25.5/30[/spoiler:3bwo93yu]
How much more until my review?
Watch Magical Girl Raising Project. Just do it.
On my front page, it says the order in which I will be reviewing the battles. I review one battle a day.
You and I are going to have to wait for a while.
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Bon Vivant of Violet
Mine is today,correct?
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Correct, here it is. Charles Darwin vs. Ash Ketchum 2.
[spoiler:2pcfdwe6]Charles Darwin-Round 1: It doesn't start as well as it ends. The last few lines really help this verse turn out really well. 8.5/10
Ash Ketchum-Round 1: The Team Rocket line is good, and the Meowth jokes are alright, but overall, this doesn't beat Darwin's verse. 7/10
Professor Oak-Round 2: In case your wondering, the back-and forth counted as round 1 for both. This verse focuses on lines that are just funny, like the ''get in line!'' one and the starter line. It also gets good at the end. 8.5/10
Charles Darwin-Round 2: So Darwin both starts and ends the battle. I liked his first verse better. The ending Mr. Mime line is OK, but I think this verse lost the battle for Darwin. 6/10
Overall: I don't consider this your best battle, but it's alright. I would rank it in your top 4 probably. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Charles Darwin: 14.5/20
Ash Ketchum and Professor Oak: 15.5/20
Ash Ketchum (alone): 14/20
Professor Oak (alone): 17/20
Total Score: 37.5/50[/spoiler:2pcfdwe6]
Bon Vivant of Violet
Do you think part 1 was better?
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