Well it's hard to go THAT wrong with 4 lines XDOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Well it's hard to go THAT wrong with 4 lines XDOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
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That's why Napoleon/Napoleon is best battle
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What? For 4 awesome lines? XD I mean honestly the rest of the battle is only on par with Billy Mays vs Ben Franklin XDOriginally Posted by YellowNerd
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Here's Uprising's Wikipedia Random Article Battle. Today, I could possibly get a lot of reviews done. Next is Uprising's Snoop Dogg/Lion vs. Elvis.
[spoiler:2altgg29]Carlos Bocanegra: The first line of his is alright, the rest aren't as good. I can tell this guy was not intended to be a possible choice for the winner. 6.5/10
Aeacus: I think it's funny how he keeps bringing up the fact that he is a god. It gets a bit repetitive though. Aside from that, I sort of liked the Alexander the Great line. 7.5/10
Captain Britain: I wasn't overly impressed with this verse. The lines aren't bad, but they aren't too memorable. 7/10
Ray Lewis: It has a weak start, but the verse gets better as it goes on. He wins this battle, but not by much. 8/10
Overall: It doesn't look like you had that much material to work with, but you seemed to pull it off. You certainly had the facts, but it could still be a funnier battle. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Carlos Bocanegra: 6.5/10 (equivalent to 13/20)
Aeacus: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20
Captain Britain: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Ray Lewis: 8/10 (equivalent to 16/20)
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:2altgg29]
I might be able to really get a lot done today. Here's Uprising's Snoop Dogg/Lion vs. Elvis. Next is God of Kaoss' Leonardo da Vinci vs. Leonardo the Turtle.
[spoiler:2nzw8lyb]Snoop Dogg-Round 1: The line about the King and his throne is where it really starts to pick up. From there, most of the lines are nice. 8/10
Elvis Presley-Round 1: This is a great verse. The song references are, for the most part, very clever and funny. Good job. 9/10
Snoop Lion-Round 2: This verse is a step down from the earlier round in this battle. The jokes aren’t as funny as last time. 6.5/10
Elvis Presley-Round 2: The Heartbreak Hotel line is alright, but this verse is also not as good as the earlier verse. It’s still alright though. 7/10
Overall: The first round is a lot better than the second, but that doesn’t mean it’s bad. I really liked this battle, I think it’s one of your best. 8/10
Final Results:
Snoop Dogg/Lion: 14.5/20
Elvis Presley: 16/20
Total Score: 38.5/50[/spoiler:2nzw8lyb]
Thanks for the reviews! And for the Wikipedia one I really didn'thave a lot to work with. I sort of made Aeacus have a huge ego think he's the most important god alive.
And my brother was actually Snoop Dogg in the other battle.
Um. Can one simply request that you review a rap battle and you'll do it after a while? Is there anything you request in return? If anything, I'd be rather happy to get my Beowulf VS King Arthur (link in signature) reviewed from someone else's eyes (although I'm rather sure how it will be commented). Would I need to do something in turn? In that case, what?
Here's how it worksOriginally Posted by Platinum
Get your battle reviewed
Enjoy the review -_-
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SIMPLE! go to literal reviews and just look for someone else to review it.Originally Posted by Platinum
Check out the forum topic for Season 4!
Ask QUESTIONS and make REQUESTS!
http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...odies-Season-4
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Could you review my collab with Adonis, Bob the Builder vs Spongebob Squarepants and my Ozzy Osbourne vs Superman Rematch?