Presidential Reviews

[Samos]

Um. Can one simply request that you review a rap battle and you'll do it after a while? Is there anything you request in return? If anything, I'd be rather happy to get my Beowulf VS King Arthur (link in signature) reviewed from someone else's eyes (although I'm rather sure how it will be commented). Would I need to do something in turn? In that case, what?

No, you don't have to do anything in return. I'll put it on my list if you want, but it could be a while before I get to it.

Could you review my collab with Adonis, Bob the Builder vs Spongebob Squarepants and my Ozzy Osbourne vs Superman Rematch?

Yes, to both.

[Samos]

I have a few days off school now, so I'll be reviewing more frequently, I hope. Here's God of Kaoss's Leonardo da Vinci vs. Leonardo the Turtle. Next is Timmy Turner's Mark Chang vs. Zim.
[spoiler:1pze7o3o]Leonardo the Turtle-Round 1: A few of these lines were impressive. I'm talking about the Ooze line, the Shredder line and the last line. 8.5/10

Leonardo da Vinci-Round 1: The last supper line is good, and it gets better near the end of the verse. I don't think it's quite as good as the turtle's first verse though. 7/10

Leonardo the Turtle-Round 2: The third grader line is pretty good. The rest of the lines are average. 7.5/10

Leonardo da Vinci-Round 2: The first and last lines are great, and are almost enough to win it for da Vinci. Not quite enough, but a good verse anyway. 8.5/10

Overall: This is a very enjoyable battle. I'm glad that you made jokes about the facts instead of just listing them. Really good job. 8.5/10

Final Results:
Leonardo the Turtle: 16/20
Leonardo da Vinci: 15.5/20

Total Score: 40/50[/spoiler:1pze7o3o]

[Samos]

Here's Timmy Turner's Mark Chang vs. Zim. Next is Johnny the Homicidal Maniac vs. Gaz Membrane.
[spoiler:24d5qqkh]Mark Chang-Round 1: This verse isn’t extremely impressive, but it does have some very good lines. Especially the floorboard line and the Irken d*ck line. 7.5/10

Zim-Round 1: Most of the beginning of this verse was weak, but the ending is a big step up. Not quite as good as this battle’s first verse though. 7/10

Mark Chang-Round 2: The last 2 lines of this verse are surprisingly good. Good job with the jokes in this verse. 8.5/10

Zim-Round 2: This verse is a little disappointing, honestly. The lines are as well thought out as they could have been. 6/10

Overall: This battle is a bit better than most of your others, I think. This battle has more clever lines and funnier jokes than most of your other battles. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Mark Chang: 16/20
Zim: 13/20

Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:24d5qqkh]

[Lohuydahutt]

And the first time one of my battles gets reviewed... Soon...

[Uprising]

Can you review Bob the Builder vs Spongebob? Its in last months contest thread

I already requested on our behalves.

[Samos]

Here's Timmy Turner's Johnny the Homicidal Maniac vs. Gaz Membrane. Next is Adonis' Burger King vs. Ronald McDonald.
[spoiler:2orxfo5p]Johnny the Homicidal Maniac-Round 1: The Jhonen Vasquez line started well, but I didn't like the end of that line. Aside from that, I sort of liked the ‘'female version of Emo Crys'‘ line. 7/10

Gaz Membrane-Round 1: I'm not a huge fan of this verse myself. It seems like some lines could've been said by anyone to anyone. 6/10

Johnny the Homicidal Maniac-Round 2: The Coke can line is OK, though a bit odd. The rest of the lines are alright. 7/10

Gaz Membrane-Round 2: The last line is very good. Not enough to win the battle, but still a good line. 7.5/10

Overall: A lot of the lines in this battle didn't really have much to do with either rapper. Try just making more jokes about the rappers themselves and their franchises. 7/10

Final Results:
Johnny the Homicidal Maniac: 14/20
Gaz Membrane: 13.5/20

Total Score: 34.5/50[/spoiler:2orxfo5p]

[FoolMeNever]

This is a bit close to my review, but, could you change mine to my ERBoA #2: Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara? Instead of Johnny Cash vs. Axl Rose.

[Lohuydahutt]

6 more to gooooooooooooooooooooooo

[Samos]

This is a bit close to my review, but, could you change mine to my ERBoA #2: Sosuke Aizen vs. Izaya Orihara? Instead of Johnny Cash vs. Axl Rose.

Sure.

[Erblover98]

Can you review my santa vs scrooge battle