Could you do that for me too? I'm not precisely sure when it'll be out, but probably before my name gets calledOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
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Could you do that for me too? I'm not precisely sure when it'll be out, but probably before my name gets calledOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
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Originally Posted by SuperRapz
OK.Originally Posted by SuperRapz
I don't think I'll be able to do 2 reviews today, unfortunately. Tomorrow, however, I will try to make time for a 2nd review. Here's Lohuydahutt's Santa vs. Chesire Cat. Next is Luigiking3's Inspector Gadget vs. Ace Ventura.
[spoiler:2vhklrhs]Santa Claus-Round 1: These lines aren’t that clever, but there is some effort. I like the LSD trip line and the last line. 7.5/10
Cheshire Cat-Round 1: Some of the lines in this verse are a bit awkward. It gets better at the end, but still not as good as Santa. 6.5/10
Santa Claus-Round 2: The last line he says in this battle is a nice reference. The rest of the lines aren’t as good. 7/10
Cheshire Cat-Round 2: His first and last lines of the back and forth are pretty good. Not enough to win the battle, but still pretty good. 7.5/10
Overall: Some of the lines seem a bit awkward and badly worded. But you’re on the right track. Just put a bit more thought and more references into it. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Santa Claus: 14.5/20
Chesire Cat: 14/20
Total Score: 35.5/50[/spoiler:2vhklrhs]
thanks :P
Spoiler:
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Cool, thank you. Anyway, when you do my review, can you review the itunes cover as well?Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
[quote=The Batman]Cool, thank you. Anyway, when you do my review, can you review the itunes cover as well?[/quote:3jvl6qoe]Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Sure. By the way, I must have gotten a bit confused earlier, did you want me to review your Luke Skywalker vs Chris Griffin battle first or your Batman vs. Walter White first?
Luke one first Samuel. Thanks.
I will be releasing 2 reviews today. Here is Luigiking3's Inspector Gadget vs. Ace Ventura. Later today will be Luke Skywalker vs. Chris Griffin.
[spoiler:2hzvq9l3]Inspector Gadget-Round 1: This verse isn’t too amazing, with the exception of the pompadour-headed line. Aside from that line, nothing amazing. 7/10
Ace Ventura-Round 1: The lines aren’t that funny up until the ending. I do like the forties line a lot though. 7/10
Inspector Gadget-Round 2: The animals line is pretty good. The last line is funny too, even though I don’t really think it has that much to do with either rapper. 8/10
Ace Ventura-Round 2: I really like the G2 line. It isn’t quite enough for Ace to win the battle, however. 7.5/10
Overall: This battle has a few good lines. You have the comedic talent, just try to connect the jokes to information about the rappers. 7/10
Final Results:
Inspector Gadget: 15/20
Ace Ventura: 14.5/20
Total Score: 36.5/50[/spoiler:2hzvq9l3]
So excited to see my review.
Here's The Batman's Luke Skywalker vs. Chris Griffin. Tomorrow will be the iTunes cover.
[spoiler:1zyy5hy8]Chris Griffin: Each of his two verses has one good line. For the first verse, it’s the line about his sister. For the second verse, it’s the fat blonde line. 7.5/10
Luke Skywalker: Luke’s first verse isn’t that impressive, but I think his next 2 verses have some really good lines. Mostly the ones involving Meg and Lois. 8/10
Stewie Griffin: Nothing too amazing. I did like the line about his brain though. Not the best verse of the battle, but by no means a bad verse. 7/10
Darth Vader: The line about him being his father is alright, but could’ve been better. It gets better at the end, but it’s still not as good as some of the earlier verses. 7/10
Overall: I liked this battle a lot. Some of the lines are, while not all that clever, very funny. I’m glad I read this battle. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Family Guy Team: 14.5/20
Star Wars Team: 15/20
Chris Griffin: 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Luke Skywalker: 8/10 (equivalent to 16/20)
Stewie Griffin: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Darth Vader: 7/10 (equivalent to 14/20)
Total Score: 37/50[/spoiler:1zyy5hy8]