Presidential Reviews

[Samos]

Could you review my Plastic vs Paper battle? :D

Sure.

[WoodenHornets]

Could you review my Plastic vs Paper battle? :D

Sure.

HOORAH! :D

its nice to have a review of my first battle in my new series.

[Funnybone]

Do my Simon Cowell VS Gordon Ramsay battle

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(P.S: It should be the last post)

[Samos]

Here is Jelly Baby (BSB)'s Snoop Dogg vs. Medusa. Next is Krispy Kreme vs. Larry the Cable Guy.
[spoiler:21nb8b17]Snoop Dogg-Round 1: This verse is funny, but the lines aren’t all that clever. I like the waay you made him talk, but if he had spoken that way and had clever lines, that would’ve been great. 6/10

Medusa-Round 1: For the most part, this verse is pretty weak. The last 2 lines though are a huge improvement. 7.5/10

Snoop Dogg-Round 2: The first line is OK, but it could have had a better follow-up. It’s not as funny as his last verse, but the lines are better. 7/10

Medusa-Round 2: I love the last line. The rest of the verse could have been better. It’s not better or worse than her first verse, I’d say. 7.5/10

Overall: This isn’t your best battle. It is pretty funny though, and there are some lines I really liked, mainly at the end of Medusa’s verses. 7/10

Final Results:
Snoop Dogg: 13/20
Medusa: 15/20

Total Score: 35/50[/spoiler:21nb8b17]

[Samos]

Here's Uprising's Krispy Kreme vs. Larry the Cable Guy. Next is Batman vs. Walter White.
[spoiler:i5j7hifv]Krispy Kreme-Round 1: I like the movie references at the beginning. Sadly, the rest of the verse isn’t that great. 7.5/10

Larry the Cable Guy-Round 1: I think the Git R Done line could have been more clever. Some of the lines are funny, but don’t really have much to do with either rapper. 7.5/10

Krispy Kreme-Round 2: The last line is pretty good, but the rest of the verse isn’t quite as impressive. 7/10

Larry the Cable Guy-Round 2: The donut line is awesome. It’s just barely good enough to win the battle for Larry. 7.5/10

Overall: It’s not the best battle you’ve ever written, but it’s not the worst either. This was a pretty good battle, but it could have been better. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Krispy Kreme: 14.5/20
Larry the Cable Guy: 15/20

Total Score: 37/50[/spoiler:i5j7hifv]

[Samos]

Here is The Batman's Batman vs. Walter White. Next is Jack the Ripper vs. Unabomber.
[spoiler:1eityv9e]Walter White-Round 1: The beginning isn’t very impressive, but the ending is pretty good. Nothing spectacular, but alright. 7/10

Batman-Round 1: Once again, the beginning isn’t as good as the end. Not much better or worse than Walter’s verse. 7/10

Jesse Pinkman and Walter White-Round 2: These lines are simple, yet pretty funny. I like the nipples line, the Robin line and the Superman line. 8/10

Nightwing and Batman-Round 2: The last line is alright, but this verse seemed a bit rushed. It did not make me laugh as much as Pinkman and White’s did. 6.5/10

Overall: I agree that this battle isn’t as good as your second one. But it does have some very funny lines, so I do still like it. 7/10

Final Results:
Walter White and Jesse Pinkman: 15/20
Batman and Nightwing: 13.5/20

Total Score: 35.5/50[/spoiler:1eityv9e]

[Batman Heisenberg]

Thanks man! I EFBoM will be revamped soon.

[Samos]

Here's Lohuydahutt's Jack the Ripper vs. Unabomber. Next is the Doomsday Introduction.
[spoiler:2nta0fsw]Jack the Ripper-Round 1: His first line is good, mainly because it’s both true and calls him a wimp. The last line is also very impressive. 7.5/10

The Unabomber-Round 1: The Jack the Rapist line is OK, and some of the other lines are pretty funny. They aren’t that clever, but they get points for humor. 7/10

Jack the Ripper-Round 2: There are some good points here and some lines that are flat out funny. I’d call this the best verse of the battle. 8/10

The Unabomber-Round 2: The one line I really liked from this verse was the prostitutes line. The other lines have potential, but aren’t worded well. 7.5/10

Overall: I won’t review the last part with the Security Guard, but I will say that I did think it was very funny. Anyway, just focus on wording your lines better and these could be really good. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Jack the Ripper: 15.5/20
The Unabomber: 14.5/20

Overall: 37.5/50[/spoiler:2nta0fsw]

[Lohuydahutt]

thanks. Can you review my kirby vs megaman? XP

[Samos]

thanks. Can you review my kirby vs megaman? XP

Sure.