~$partica4Real~ wanted me to review the battle he made that I thought was the best. I chose Ash Ketchum vs. Charles Darwin.
[spoiler:nrvfo2un]Ash Ketchum-Round 1: Pretty good. The first good line is ''there were 4 guys before you that did it with ease''. The other really good line was the line about turning his hat around. 7.5/10
Charles Darwin-Round 1: Even better. The pokeballs line is really funny. I also liked the line about traveling with three girls but never got one laid. 8/10
Pikachu-Round 2: I wish this verse was longer, because what is there is very good. Nice references to Pokemon like the Charizard line and the evolve line. 8.5/10
Charles Darwin-Round 2: Not bad, but not as good as Pikachu's verse. The best line is the Yu-gi-oh line. 7.5/10
Overall: This was a very overdone match-up, but your version is one of the best ones out there. Nice references through it all, just very well-written. 8/10
Final Results:
Ash Ketchum and Pikachu: 16/20
Ash Ketchum (alone): 7.5/10 (equivalent to 15/20)
Charles Darwin: 15.5/20
Pikachu (alone): 8.5/10 (equivalent to 17/20)
Total Score: 39.5/50[/spoiler:nrvfo2un]
Originally Posted by PolarBore
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