Perfect score. Making history.
What was the other perfect score you had again?
Perfect score. Making history.
What was the other perfect score you had again?
It was Napoleon B's second verse i think.Originally Posted by Uprising
Oh hai. I'm back.
And improved.
yep :POriginally Posted by ZeMasked
Spoiler:
I am PolarBore's official Assistant Mangager (again)
Can you review my EFBoM #3? It will be released very soon. Like today or tommorow.
It is Terminator vs Robocop!
Here's Uprising's Run DMC vs. Bert and Ernie. Next is Sparrowhelper's Adolf Hitler vs. Darth Vader.
[spoiler:255j6ole]Run DMC-Round 1: I knew a gay line was coming, and this one was pretty good, but it could’ve had more thought in it. This verse isn’t too clever, but it’s funny at parts. 7.5/10
Bert and Ernie-Round 1: The 1st half of this verse isn’t that great, but the 2nd half is decent. It’s not an improvement or a step down from Run DMC’s verse. 7.5/10
Run DMC-Round 2: Another gay joke, which is good, but predictable. The eyebrows line is alright though. 7/10
Bert and Ernie-Round 2: The best line is the line about CDs. This verse has a great beginning, and while its end isn’t too strong, it’s the best verse of the battle. 8.5/10
Overall: This battle was decent. Some of the lines seemed kind of pointless and didn’t really contain any jokes, but the jokes that are made work well, for the most part. 7.5/10
Final Results:
Run DMC: 14.5/20
Bert and Ernie: 16/20
Total Score: 38/50[/spoiler:255j6ole]
Here's Sparrowhelper's Adolf Hitler vs. Darth Vader. Next is Dr. Phil vs. Sheldon Cooper.
[spoiler:1yzvnput]Darth Vader-Round 1: The one nut reference was pretty good. The Ani-conda line puts a twist on what would otherwise be an uncreative line. 7.5/10
Adolf Hitler-Round 1: This is a long verse, but a good one. The best line is the arm and a leg line, and while the other lines aren’t too clever, but they are funny. 7.5/10
Darth Vader-Round 2: This verse is really not very impressive. I just found these lines to be really rushed. 6/10
Adolf Hitler-Round 2: This verse isn’t too great either, but it does have some funny lines. He has way more lines than Vader, and it shows. 7/10
Overall: Some of the lines are very clever, but the battle seems kind of rushed overall. Make sure every line has some sort of joke or reference, and take as much time as you need, and the battles will succeed. 7/10
Final Results:
Darth Vader: 13.5/20
Adolf Hitler: 14.5/20
Total Score: 35/50[/spoiler:1yzvnput]
I agree with the scoring but I do have a question. When you said that twist on the uncreative line did you mean the line was uncreative because the battle was a remake supposed to have similarities.Originally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Hello I am Sparrowhelper.
I do my own series of FMERBs here: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6117
I also do a collab series with Zombielicker: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=10837
I'm also a leader in Epic Alienz so if you liked to join let me know.
No, what I was saying is that it could have been an uncreative line, but you put a twist on it and made it a good line. It was a compliment.Originally Posted by Sparrowhelper
Ah sorry I didn't read it through correctOriginally Posted by HipsterSamuel
Hello I am Sparrowhelper.
I do my own series of FMERBs here: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=6117
I also do a collab series with Zombielicker: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=10837
I'm also a leader in Epic Alienz so if you liked to join let me know.