Presidential Reviews

[GonadTheNomad]

I can haz review of Me and 3 vs. Pool and Lawl from that 2v2 tournie a while back? :3

[Milotic]

I can haz review of Me and 3 vs. Pool and Lawl from that 2v2 tournie a while back? :3

I second this.

[Samos]

Here's my review of Flareon vs. BBGUN. Next is Dion vs. SaneButStrange.

Spoiler: 

BBGUN-Round 1: Some of these lines are actually pretty clever, they just don’t seem to have anything to do with either person in the battle. Still, the lines are clever and original, so I do have to give it some credit. 8/10

Adonis-Round 1: I can’t think of a better word to describe this verse than just brutal. He just takes everything BBGUN is known for, disses it all like he’s using a list, and still manages to make the lines clever. 9/10

BBGUN-Round 2: My criticism is sort of the same as the criticism for his last verse, clever lines that don’t have much to do with anyone. The difference is that this verse has a few lines that are below average, and they stick out. 6.5/10

Adonis-Round 2: The first line of this verse is an example of a clever line that seems unrelated to either rapper, like I’ve criticized of BBGUN. The last few lines are OK, so it’s better than BBGUN’s 2nd verse, but not by much. 7/10

Overall: In this battle, both of you delivered in your own ways and you both impressed me. This battle was definitely more interesting and entertaining than I thought it was going to be. 8/10

Final Results:
BBGUN: 14.5/20
Adonis: 16/20

Total Score: 38.5/50

[GonadTheNomad]

Yuo should link to battles, because a lot of the time I don't know wtf the verses are.

And most of the sig links that have been around since PHPBB link to Peter's Q&A

[Faker]

Do you think you can save a spot for GoB and I? GoB and I have an upcoming rap battle that will be out within the next few days.

[Faker]

Do you think you can save a spot for GoB and I? GoB and I have an upcoming rap battle that will be out within the next few days.

It's out now. Can you review our Pit vs Percy Jackson battle?

[Umbreon]

Can you review the first and second ERBOF finales?

[Samos]

Here's my review of Dion vs. SaneButStrange. Next is Uprising vs. Brad.

Spoiler: 

SaneButStrange-Round 1: Most of the good lines in this verse talk more about Sane than they do about Dion, such as the license line and the hatred line. The lines about Dion aren’t as clever, with an exception of the last line. 8.5/10

Dion-Round 1: I haven’t seen Dion rap that often, which is why I was pleasantly surprised by how good the lines in this verse were. It slows down at the end, but the first 3/4s of this verse are some of the best lines I’ve seen in a fan made battle. 9/10

SaneButStrange-Round 2: It took me a few seconds to get the Skywalker line, but when I fugred it out, I thought it was pretty decent. I’d say that’s probably the only really good line in this verse though. 7/10

Dion-Round 2: This verse is just a step behind Dion’s last verse. The best line in the verse is the sane line, but the line that follows about Havok is also a pretty good line. 8.5/10

Overall: This was probably the best of the TDFE battles, as both sides were very good and it was also a bit longer than most of the other battles. Stuff like this is the reason I was looking forward to the challenge. 8.5/10

Final Results:
SaneButStrange: 15.5/20
Dion: 17.5/20

Total Score: 41.5/50

Due to The Fourth Gunnut's request, I shall now try to provide a link to every battle I review. http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...l=1#post329500

[GonadTheNomad]

Here's my review of Dion vs. SaneButStrange. Next is Uprising vs. Brad.

Spoiler: 

SaneButStrange-Round 1: Most of the good lines in this verse talk more about Sane than they do about Dion, such as the license line and the hatred line. The lines about Dion aren’t as clever, with an exception of the last line. 8.5/10

Dion-Round 1: I haven’t seen Dion rap that often, which is why I was pleasantly surprised by how good the lines in this verse were. It slows down at the end, but the first 3/4s of this verse are some of the best lines I’ve seen in a fan made battle. 9/10

SaneButStrange-Round 2: It took me a few seconds to get the Skywalker line, but when I fugred it out, I thought it was pretty decent. I’d say that’s probably the only really good line in this verse though. 7/10

Dion-Round 2: This verse is just a step behind Dion’s last verse. The best line in the verse is the sane line, but the line that follows about Havok is also a pretty good line. 8.5/10

Overall: This was probably the best of the TDFE battles, as both sides were very good and it was also a bit longer than most of the other battles. Stuff like this is the reason I was looking forward to the challenge. 8.5/10

Final Results:
SaneButStrange: 15.5/20
Dion: 17.5/20

Total Score: 41.5/50

Due to The Fourth Gunnut's request, I shall now try to provide a link to every battle I review. http://www.erboh.com/forum/showthrea...l=1#post329500

thx Sam of Heroes

[Samos]

Here's my review of Uprising vs. Brad. Next is Beastness vs. PolarBore.

Spoiler: 

Brad-Round 1: The vocabulary line is a pretty nice line, and so is the line that follows it. I was a bit disappointed by the Wisconsin line, because there are so many jokes you could’ve made about it, and that one wasn’t as good as it could’ve been. 8/10

Uprising-Round 1: The sig line is nice, just like the sig joke Brad made. My main problem with this verse is a problem that lots of forumer battles have, there are a lot of lines that seems unrelated to either rapper. 7/10

Brad-Round 2: This verse isn’t that good, that is, until the last line. Sure, it’s not as clever as it could’ve been, but it is a really brutal insult, and it saves the battle for Brad in my opinion. 7.5/10

Uprising-Round 2: The only good line in this verse is the Breaking Bad line, but that’s OK, because of the ‘’flow’‘. Flow is pretty difficult to pull off in writing, but if you can make it so that readers instantly hear the flow in their head and they’re impressed, then you’ve done well. 7.5/10

Overall: This battle was kind of in the middle in terms of ranking the TDFE challenge 1 battles. It had a lot of lines that didn’t have a relation to either rapper, but at the same time, it does have some very impressive lines. 7.5/10

Final Results:
Brad: 15.5/20
Uprising: 14.5/20

Total Score: 37.5/50

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